Kyane:woo my first fic!

Twitch:wow you know how to put this on fanfiction?gasp

Kyane:anyways, this is just a make sure story. to see if it comes on fanfiction!

Twitch: now say it loud and proud..or i'll see ya in court

Kyane: sigh...I do not own jak or jak characters...the only thing i own is my thoughts and the OOC!

Intruders: Chapter one:Video game bonus

"YES!" Ember screamed, jumping up and down."HA I beat Jak 3 in record time:6 hours!"

"Just because you stayed up till midnight on it,"Twitch laid back,"I swear I hear Metal Heads dying, Jak getting hurt..alot,Daxter throw his stupid comments, and that Morph gun going on and on and ON!"

"Hey Twitch look! There's a special bonus!"Ember was about to press 'x' when..

"Turn off that damn contraption! I swear it's going to blow up one day!" Mom yelled,having work tomorrow so she's trying to go to sleep.

" We're saving it now mom!" Ember smirked,"Let's check it out first Twitch."

" Err...You should do it fast cause it's blinking",Twitch said,leaning over to grab the control.

" I wanna do it!"

" No me!"

Ember put and pressed her thumb with Twitch's on the 'x'. The screen show static lines, making staticy sounds.

" Argh! rip off Artists!"

Ember turned around,"Twitch?" She looked around and slammed her hand on the tv.

" Stupid contraction!"Ember suddenly felt a tug on her hand and was sucked into the tv.

"Oof"Ember landed on her back." Oh that's just great, there's a bright yellow star in the sky, I'm outside on the sand next to a beach..."Ember sat up,looked around,"TWITCH!"

Twitch appeared next to her with a 'oof' and a grunt as he sat up.

"Where the hell are we?"Twitch stood up and offered Ember a hand up.

"Don't know. I think the tv did it."Ember took his hand and stood up.

" Oh my friggin' god!"Ember reached for Twitch's ears." Is this some kinda joke?" She pulled them.

" OW! Cut it out! You have elf ears too!"Twitch leaned closer and saw that his sister's hair was straight and a snowy white." Did you dye your hair white Em?" He looked at her eyes and saw gold." And got contacts!"

" Same goes to you!" Ember pulled Twitch's purple hair."And lilac eyes? Damn we're not in Cali anymore.."

" This place looks strangely familiar..." Twitch said looking at Ember.

" Oh my God! It looks like Spargus City's beach!" Ember turned back slowly to Twitch," Remember when you hover boarded over the ocean and a squid's tentacle came up and swallowed you?"

Twitch's eyes grew large when a tentacle reached out of the ocean and slithered towards them.

" Run?"

"Run."

They ran over the rocks and bumped into a leaper lizard.The lizard squacked at them,and to their amazement, it squat down and looked at them.

"Let's go on the lizard and run to the arena and find out what happens next ok?" Ember hopped onto the lizard Jak style and motion to Twitch.

Ten falls and misses,Ember and Twitch reached the arena.

" Wow it looks bigger in life! Let's go inside." Ember gracefully jumped off and waited for Twitch.

"What if they still have fights? And we die!"Twitch said before falling off the lizard and ate sand.

" Just pretend we know nothing about fights, Damas, the characters here, and act like hurricane victims who missed the squid and landed on their beach." Ember said with a nod, grabbed Twitch's hand, and ran up the stairs.

"I know I'm going to regret this", Twich whined as the doors closed behind them and stood on the platform with Ember.

The arena was in action. Metalheads/ KG robots fighting with some citizens in there.

" You here to join the fight?" a voice said behind them." Just for starters girls with white hair and boys with purple aren't very intimitading." Errol appeared on the right side of Ember and smirked.

" Showoffs who gloat and boast don't do well either", Ember huffed, crossing her arms.

" Sure.. what's your weapon? Mine's a Morph gun." Errol stated bringing it out." how bout you? A laser pen for your friend and you have a water gun?"

" In fact my BROTHER has a vulcan fury. And moi has a Peace maker." Ember brought it out and Twitch got out his fury.

" Hm.. I would test your skills but the objection is to kill the most metalheads/ KG robots. So I say your lucky for the time being."

" Lucky? I seem to have a knack for that since no one ever challenges me." Ember said, even if Twitch was tugging on her sleeve, a sign to stop.

" Let's put a wager then. If I win, you have to ditch your brother for a day and hang out with me. And if you win?I say not to get your hopes up." Errol stuck out his hand.

"Don't do it Em",Twitch pleaded, knowing her sister's competive side.

" When I win, you have to show me around. For me and my brother are...er... visitors here."Ember grabbed Errol's hand and shook it." Just for measures, my name is Ember and my brother's is Twitch. Don't ask why."Twitch shook his head, to him, the battle's over.

" Well, that's a wonderful name,Ember"She glared at him",Errol's the name and we will be seeing each other often."

" I won't be guarrenting that,"Ember said," and you can let go of my hand now."

Errol let go and blushed," Well I was just caught up in the conversation."

"Sure... Twitch are you ready?" Ember turned and checked his ammo,"Ok, good luck Twitch."Twitch just nodded glaring at Errol, not trusting him.

The platform below them started to lower. A buzzer sounded and the contest began

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Kyane: YAY! How was it? Next one.. maybe if enough reviews... is about the battle

Twitch: I don't trust Errol not one bit.

Errol:' puts arm around Kyane' Why not? I'm lovable?

Kyane: OK! If you review,write out if you want Errol to win or Ember ok?

Twitch: Like he would...

Errol: Later people!