DANKE FOR THE REVIEWs. Though I didn't cath many misspellings the verb
tense changeing made sense And I am typing this story in a hurry bt Thanx
for the reviews my english Teacher checked it and Told me the verb tense
changing made sense alright sry just thought I would point out wordpad does
not have a spell checker and I also have a habit of holding the shift key
down.
AS A MATTER OF FACT ONLY TWO WORDS WERE MISSPELLED AND I HATE COMMAS not to
get mad at anyone I just had to point it out and if it will make you happy
I will reupload chapter one all mistakes fixed. Sorry I just hate someone
correcting my english all together even if it is my teacher or parents
chapter two will be up right away here is the rvised chapter one.
Rissa of the Saiya-Jin
I am sorry I am not getting mad at u they were good tips but I suck at
english class
Trunks grl ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~
DISCLAIMER- by know everyone one should know the people who write these stories don't own them cuz if I did I would differently not be broke cuz if u sue me all your going to get is some cookies I just baked and water they r really good chocolate chip cookies but what I am saying is I don't own the show or its char cuz if I did I would own Trunks and then I would be very very happy but I don own Alex and any other strange Unknown char. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~ Hehehehehehehehheheheheh this is funny By the way I know it has been done before but it was to funny of a thought I had in my head to not write about ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~ "VEGETA COME DOWN HERE RIGHT NOW!"
"WHAT DO YOU WANT WOMAN?"
"I want you to get a job."
"Later, I am Training."
"NO, NOW I AM TIRED OF YOU TELLING ME LATER FOR EVERYTHING."
"FINE." He grabbed the paper and started reading the classifieds
TELEMARKETER
Call people and get them to buy our product. NO experience needed call this number for an interview 555-1234. $45 to $75 dollars an hour 5 hrs a day 5 days a week THAT ONLY 25 HOURS A WEEK NOT TO Many hours.
"Well, that doesn't seem hard."
"Well are you looking?"
"Yes and I think I found one, I will be back later woman!"
"Alright dear." she said preoccupied in other stuff.
He got dressed up in a suit and went to his interview. He came out and he had the job and started tomorrow at 9 am.
He got to work the next morning and called the first person on the list.
****RING RING****
"Hello?"
"Hello is Mr. Adames there?"
"No he isn't, can I take a message?"
"I was wondering if you would like to sign-up for our home owners insurance, Would you?"
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Authors note sry it is so short but I wanted to leave u wondering and I don't know what next any suggestions Please review thanx Trunksgrl Ps if u get a chance read my story dance trouble
Trunks grl ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~
DISCLAIMER- by know everyone one should know the people who write these stories don't own them cuz if I did I would differently not be broke cuz if u sue me all your going to get is some cookies I just baked and water they r really good chocolate chip cookies but what I am saying is I don't own the show or its char cuz if I did I would own Trunks and then I would be very very happy but I don own Alex and any other strange Unknown char. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~ Hehehehehehehehheheheheh this is funny By the way I know it has been done before but it was to funny of a thought I had in my head to not write about ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~ "VEGETA COME DOWN HERE RIGHT NOW!"
"WHAT DO YOU WANT WOMAN?"
"I want you to get a job."
"Later, I am Training."
"NO, NOW I AM TIRED OF YOU TELLING ME LATER FOR EVERYTHING."
"FINE." He grabbed the paper and started reading the classifieds
TELEMARKETER
Call people and get them to buy our product. NO experience needed call this number for an interview 555-1234. $45 to $75 dollars an hour 5 hrs a day 5 days a week THAT ONLY 25 HOURS A WEEK NOT TO Many hours.
"Well, that doesn't seem hard."
"Well are you looking?"
"Yes and I think I found one, I will be back later woman!"
"Alright dear." she said preoccupied in other stuff.
He got dressed up in a suit and went to his interview. He came out and he had the job and started tomorrow at 9 am.
He got to work the next morning and called the first person on the list.
****RING RING****
"Hello?"
"Hello is Mr. Adames there?"
"No he isn't, can I take a message?"
"I was wondering if you would like to sign-up for our home owners insurance, Would you?"
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Authors note sry it is so short but I wanted to leave u wondering and I don't know what next any suggestions Please review thanx Trunksgrl Ps if u get a chance read my story dance trouble