A/N: First fanfic. Reviews are definitely welcome!

Max POV:

I get out of the car which brought me here. I have been accepted into the West Point Military Base in New York. Why you may ask, my parents died a few months back and since I was almost of age decided to join the military to earn money so I could go to college. I have a little sister named Ella who is only fifteen so she is staying with my aunt and uncle, who also have twins so I could not ask them for the money for college and the money which my parents left, I gave to Ella and put it in her college fund so she won't have trouble.

Now I'm sitting on my suitcase waiting for someone to show me the ropes and get started with my training.

Fang POV:

"Private Capelli, the general is looking for you. He is in his cabin." Said on of my trustful cadets.
I replied "thanks" before heading out to my fathers cabin.

I walked in with confidence "You wished to see me sir"

My dad –the general, replied "Yes, private. You may take a seat."

I did as I was told as my father started., "We have a new recruit, her names Maximum Ride and she has an interesting case, which is why I let her in this late in the year. Her parents, I went to military academy with her dad, died and she did not have enough money to pay for college so she enrolled here. Yes you may be wondering, 'what about her parents inheritance' she gave to her sister Ella and put it into her sisters' college fund. I couldn't get any of her physical state records so I'm asking you to take her to the obstacle course and time her."

I shrugged and replied "sure, where is she?"

The general got up and said "her father was a great man, he actually saved my life a few times in the war and I want her to be comfortable so I hope you can show her around and help her make some friends."

I said "why not" and left.

While I was walking to where I was supposed to meet Max, I was thinking she must be a fragile, or soft girl who was like 18 or something and was one of the girls like Lissa (the description of lissa is the same as every other book/ fanfic – shes slutty and has red hair)

Also since I didn't hear anything of her physical state, I imagined her as the type of girl who runs really slow and is afraid of breaking a nail- well she'll have Lissa at least.

Imagine my surprise when I actually saw her.

Max POV:

I felt someones gaze on me and as I slowly moved my hear upward to his face I took in his toned chest which showed through his black- somewhat tight- tshirt he had on. He also had the regular army boots and camoflauge pants. When I finally looked into his midnight blue eyes, I concluded that he not what I imagined.

Fang POV:

When I first see her and locked eyes with her, I knew that I was looking at the most gorgeous girl ever. She was wearing Nike sneakers with short shorts and a tank top. She had sunglasses which were the sports type and her blonde hair was tied into a ponytail and was resting on her shoulder.

I hold out my hand and say, "Hi I'm Nick Capelli, but I usually go by Fang."

Max studies me carefully and shakes my hand while saying, "My names Maximum Ride but unless you want to get beaten by a girl I suggest you call me Max" and she said the last part with a smile. DEFINELY NOT LISSA!

I started leading her to her cabin which she shared with Nudge and Angel. Angel was the sister of one of my room mates Zephyr aka Gazzy. I also roomed with Iggy.

"So here you are, cabin 412" I say.

She replies "thank you"

"By the way, Nudge, your room mate has you clothes which you should wear and when you're ready, come to my cabin and knock."

"Whats your cabin number?"

"469"

"Thanks"

I feel nows a time like any other and tell her "by the way the general wants to know you physical shape so you have to do an obstacle course." And I walk out.

Max POV:

Well first impression of WP (west point) not bad. Then I get to my cabin and a girl with mocha colored skin and really culy hair BOMBOARDED me with questions

She started rambling and this is what I heard, " "

Thankfully a smaller girl came up and slapped her hand over her mouth. She introduced herself as Angel and she looked so cute.

So im skipping everything that happens in the cabin—Nudge and Angel introduce themselves and their personalities are the same as in the books and they do not have superpowers. Nudge is just good with computers.

Then I figured is as good as any other so I say bye and head to cabin 469- Fang's cabin.

I knocked and after a few seconds, another boy with strawberry blonde hair and was a twee bit taller than me wolf whistled as he took a look at me. (I decided that I didn't like uniforms so for the physical activities they could wear what they wanted) I was wearing some short basket ball shorts with another tank top along with my original blue nikes. My hair was the same way and I was wearing my sunglasses.

I brought my sunglasses down to the edge of my nose and peered over them and said "excuse me"

The strawberry blonde decided to hit on me and said "you are waaaaay to hot to not know me, I'm Iggy" while taking my hand out and kissing the back of it.

I pretended to go along with his flirting and said, while sending him one of my famous death glares and climbing the steps so I was just a bit shorter than him and said in a very low voice, and for effect I grabbed the front of his shirt pulling him down to my eye level

"I' m Max and I seriously hate sexist pigs. If you want to wake up one day with your underwear on the flagpole I suggest you give it up."

By this time a blonde and Fang have come to watch the show and are sniggering behind Iggy. I send them one of my death glares as well.

The blonde comes up to me and says "hey I'm Gazzy a pyro. Basically I love to blow stuff up and sorry about Iggy he flirts for anything with boobs."

I decided then and there that I like Gazzy, so I said and replied with an actual smile, "I am Max and I am new. And Fang lets go." Then I jump down their 3 stairs and look back.

Fang does the same, and I see hes wearing basketball shorts (black) with the same black tshirt and his hair was messy and long but it made him look cute. I also notice hes wearing black nikes as well.

"So are you going for that emo look or are you emo?" I ask him while we were walking.

He growls and says "I'm not emo, I just like the color black."

While we are walking towards the obstacle course, some guys started wolf whistling as I walked by some even came up and introduced themselves and a few, after Fang told them we were going to the obstacle course, asked to come.

Fang just said, "If Max is alright with it."

I just kept my face down and said "sure."

After about 2 min. of walking we came to the obstacle course and by the time we arrived there were about 20 guys waiting for me to start.

I got ready and was awating Fangs signal to go. When I got it I took off running as fast as I could and doing everything. When I came to the finish line, all the guys, including Fang were gawking at me.

When I asked why they simply looked at Fang and Fang said"…..

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