TITLE: Doubt
AUTHOR: JoA Brazil
RATING: G
SPOILERS: 1st season
SUMMARY: Would you believe if it all happened to you?
DISCLAIMERS: Joan of Arcadia and all its characters belong to Barbara Hall, CBS and Sony Pictures. This is for pure entertainment. No profit being made.
DEDICATION: To all the 1st season!
AUTHOR NOTES: I like playing with style. This one is quite cryptic, with very short sentences and in the second person. The idea was to make the reader feel him/herself in Joan's shoes. Tell me what did you guys think of this. Thank you!
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Doubt
You walk. To school. You take your bus. You see a guy. The guy sees you. You stop. He follows. You look. He talks. You listen. "I'm God" he says. You don't believe. He talks. You listen. You doubt yourself. No one knows all this. Just you. You listen. You believe. Time passes. He becomes a she. She becomes a he. They became many. They pop up everywhere. They talk. You listen. You reply. They advice. You doubt them. You doubt yourself. "It's all about free will" they say. You follow. You feel the good ripples. You see the good ripples. You give good ripples. Life is bonding, growing, giving. And then, you fall. Dark. They stop talking. Silence. You doubt them. You doubt yourself. You doubt. What now?