I'm nervous! This is my first story!
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"The ship won't last much longer Primal, we're running out of fuel." "Axalon (the maximal ship) will stop moving and every Maximal will be destroyed" said Rhinox. "Then we must land on a close planet." said Optimus Primal." "Teletraan 3 said the closes planet is Earth." "Should we land there?" Rhinox asked. "Fine" said Optimus Primal. Just then a Maximal ran up to Optimus Primal."Hey Prime we discovered that the Predacon ship was following us the whole time and they're about to attack us!" said the Maximal. "All Maximals to the entrance of the ship, elite (Rhinox, Cheetor, Rattrap, Tigertron, Optimus Primal) to the roof of the ship." Said Optimus Primal. When the elite got to the roof the ship the Predecon ship appeared out of nowhere and started to fire. They're firing at us." screamed Rattrap. "Then fire back" said Cheetor."We're hit bad Primal" Rhinox said to Optimus Primal. "Stop calling me Primal it sounds like ****." Said Optimus Primal. Then both ships started to move. They crashed onto planet Earth but in different areas. Hundreds of years past until both Maximals and Predacons awakened on the strange (to them) planet. Lot's of Maximals and Predacons were scattered everywhere but some were still with their leader. "Maximals look around for the scan you want but be careful because Predacons could be anywhere." Ordered Optimus : Hmmm。。。What should I scan? Hey that looks pretty fast!I'll scan that. Scanning Scanning, Scan Complete. What's this thing called? "This is called a cheetah." , "A very fast animal." said Cheetor's scanning data. A very fast what?Well how cares anyway? "Perfect!" said voice. Cheetor looked around. Finally he spotted it. It was Predacon Scorponok! Scorponok soon realized a Maximal was watching him. "Scorponok terrorize!" Scorponok yelled as he started to transform into robot mode.
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Tell me what you think about it! Please no flames. Tell me if I should continue or not.
- Allen