Lets go, this is my first story.

Prologue

Froststar slowly opens his eyes and looks around. He spots a blue-gray she-cat with ice-blue eyes atop a giant rock. He tilts his head to one side and stares at the cat on the rock. "Bluestar... I-is that you?" Froststar mews. Bluestar simply sits on the rock, looking down at him. "Water will bring darkness, and Ice will bring back peace." Bluestar meows. "What do you mean?" Froststar meows, but it's Bluestar was already padding away. "WHAT DO YOU MEAN?" Froststar meows once again, but Bluestar is gone.

Short, yes, but its only the prologue!

I need some tips for writing, if you have any tips, just review or pm me!