Disclaimer- I don't own Holes, or any of the characters. The only things I own in this story are my characters, and my plot line, unless someone has already taken it, then I'm sorry for taking your plot line. Please don't sue me.
NOTE- This story was once the story As Told By ME, but I wasn't happy with it, and it's lack of detail, and certain other things. So, I am writing a new and improved As Told By ME! Also, the only characters left out from my story will be Banana and Twitch. Please review.
Hold on Tight
Prologue
At Camp Blue River, the girls were delinquents. They were sent there for the crimes they committed. The Warden of Camp Blue River was Joe Walker. The girls had to dig holes, and only got four minute showers. They had a Dinner Hall, a Rec. House, and an 'Archives' building, where they stored the shovels. There were tents A-E for the girls, and Tent F for the councilors. The police found out that Joe Walker was selling priceless gems on the black market. The whole staff of Camp Blue River was fired, and they didn't know where to send all the girls. Joe said to contact his sister, Lou Walker. She would take the girls
Camp Green Lake was an all boys detention camp. They were sent there for the crimes they committed. The Warden of Camp Green Lake was Lou Walker. The boys had to dig holes and, only got four minute showers. They had a Mess Hall, a Wreck (Rec.) Room, and a 'Library' building, where they stored the shovels. There were tents A-E for the boys, and F-Tent for the councilors. The police contacted Camp Green Lake and told Lou of her brothers predicament. She agreed to take the girls.
So, there it is. The prologue to my newly revised story. Please review and tell me if I made any mistakes (like grammar, facts, etc.). Constructive criticism is a good thing sometimes, so give it to me. Also, positive feedback would be most appreciated. Thanks!