Ok I am starting again, with another fanfic, just saying the other one is still going, I just sorta got board of it, but I hope that wont happen with this on, also I will be a little slow on updating because I am on track, also I have to maintain my grades so that means also doing homework. But I think I do have some people to badger me to update. But I don't know this I dear might only work out as a three shout but I will try to make this a lot longer then that. Also if any one wants to be my beta that would be a huge help for me! Also check out my community "no wings" it has a ton of good maximum ride fanfics where the flock don't have wings, and if I think my story is good enough I might put it on there too! And just a warning there are swears in this chapter, I don't like using them but I just feel like its way to fake with out them.
And finally the disclaimer: first off I am fifteen and a girl so I am clearly not James Patterson and don't own maximum ride, and I can write songs, and play the piano, guitar, violin, and harmonica but I didn't write Boston by Augustana so there for I do not own it. But I own all of the plot line (wheal most of it because a little of it follows the song) and some characters! Anyway on with the story!
Boston
In the light of the sun, is there anyone? Oh it has begun...
the last rays of sun light where shinning in through the window as I held my brothers hand. Stroking the back with my thumb. I gazed at his broken body hocked up to the millions of machines and bandages coating sixty percent of his body. Then back to the hand I was rubbing. There was a dull, faint, unsteady beep coming from the monitor, the hart monitor.
He was all I had left for family. The only other two people in this world who give a crap about me are nudge and my boy friend Sam. Our Mom and Dad had died in a car accident. A hit and run. They were both killed instantly, but even if it was quick, they are still both gone. And as for the basted that hit them, he was never found. All we know was that he was frigging drunk. That was 6 years ago.
So now its just me and my older brother Tyler. He has had a hard life. He has had to watch out for me since I was 16, he was 18. We have both been working two jobs and just getting by. His dreams of collage left with our parents. The only thing that seemed to stay was his up beat personality.
And to top it off his job fired him because of the accident and because they didn't want to pay for his future medical bills, that is if he lives. And then two days after the accident he went in to a coma. A freaking coma. I haven't left his side. Nudge, my only friend left, and Sam, my boyfriend, are the only people who have come to visit, other than the countless doctors and nurses, and the occasional visitor for Fred, Tyler's room mate.
"Good evening Max." came the nurse's voice as she headed to Tyler's roommate's bed side, snapping me out of my thoughts, "How is he?" she asked using her heat to motion to my limp brother.
"I don't know, awful, just like every other time." my voice sounded dead. The doctor told me not to be surprised if he didn't pull through.
The nurse gave me a sympatric look and continued on with her job, and then left only to be replaced by Sam who came in and pulled a chair up next to me wrapping an arm around me. I lent in to him, still holding Tyler's hand.
After a minuet I felt It go cold.
"Beeeeeeeeeep" sounded next to me, the sound of the heart monitor flat lining. The heart monitor that is hooked up to my brother. My dear brother.
Almost instantly doctors came flying in to the room shouting out commands. Every thing slowed down I couldn't hear any thing, except the sound of the flat ling monitor, nothing seemed real. This could not be happing. Sam was trying to drag me out in the hallway. I wouldn't let him. I just stared blankly at Tyler surrounded by swarming doctors. At one point Sam gave up and just stood there.
I watched his life less face. The face of some one whose seen way to much for someone so young. His tan face palled his bright blond hair limp. The doctors stopped moving.
I felt as though hours had gone by. But It was probably only five minuets, maybe only one. The world speed up again.
"Guys I think we lost him" the doctor wisped holding Tyler's wrist.
That's when I lost it. Walked over to the bed side. Nobody dare stopped me. I drooped to my knees, and grabbed his hand and just stared blankly at his face.
There was know way this just happened. My brothers gone. My family's gone. Gone. All gone. No ones left. This didn't happen. I will wake up and be 16 again. The last 6 years didn't happen. I will wake up to Tyler chucking his pillow at my head and saying "breakfast is ready max! get you lazy arse down stairs before I eat the bacon" and mom and dad would be at the table reading the news paper drinking there coffee. Nothing would be wrong.
But that wasn't happing. A tear slid down my face and fell on Tyler's chest, then the rest came. Tears fell in torrents down my face and on to my dead bother. Sobs racked my body. I sat there on the hard tile hospital floor for what must have been hours in till I was just dry heaving.
I lifted my head to see a curtain pulled across the room separating the two half's, Sam in a chair watching me.
He caught my eyes. "Hey baby, I know how you can take your mined off this situation." He wiggled his eyebrows suggestively at me.
Oh dear you look so lost, eyes are red and tears are shed,This world you must've crossed... you said...You don't know me, you don't even care, oh yeah,She saidYou don't know me, and you don't wear my chains... oh yeah,
"WHAT THE HELL!" I screamed at him, "My brother just dyed and you want me to do it with you!" I stared at him in complete disbelief. He seamed taken aback by the fact that I just screamed at him.
"you don't like me for me huh? You little basted!" I was seething by now, my voice getting real low, "You don't frigging care that I just watched my brother die! All you care about is getting in to my paints." I paused for a second "You think the world evolves around you? don't you? You don't have any commitments. You were going to take advantage of the screwed up girl the one tied down, whose probably looking to be screwed, while you can just go screw your self you self less ass!"
By now my whole body was shacking with sobs again.
He's still standing there. I grab the closest thing, a glass of water, and chuck it at him glass and all.
"Get you skinny white ass out of here now!" I screeched. He booked it.
I turned back around to my pail dead brother and collapsed in to a heap half way on the bed and started sobbing again.
I don't know how long I stayed there. I vaguely remember Nudge coming in and just hugging me for a awhile before taking me out to her car an driving me to her house. She told me to shower and I listened my body going on autopilot. After she practically forced food down my thought she lead me to the pull out coach and said good night. I conked out instantly, ready to embrace the numbness of sleep.
ok that's all that you get for today, I will start typing the next chapter now though, I actually have hope when it comes to updating this one though so be on the look out for the next chapter. And please even if you didn't like it just review and tell me, I would like to know everyone's thoughts on this story, even f you don't have an account you can review anonumisoaly (how ever that is spelt). So good night for now!
Oh and please I am looking for a Bata