Our Father Kyuubi
Intro:
Welcome to my fourth official fanfiction - YADA! Lol im having fun, I realy enjoyed coming up with this story. Okay some FYI this story begins at the end of Sasuke and Naruto's fight at the Valley of End , I'm not going to say were it goes from there but it will be a time travel fic. This is very much AU, and some what OC with one of my OCC thrown in to the mix. Take a look and don't forget to tell me what you think okay?
Disclaimer: I do not own any of the original Naruto characters or the original story line, I do own my OC's and my story lines -
"Speaking"
"Thinking"
Jutsu
36 Tails, 8 wings, and 4 naked –chapter one
Deep within his cell Kyuubi began to chuckle as twelve years of work came to fruition. On the bloody battle field lay Naruto gasping for air as Sasuke set his old Konaha head band down beside the blond saying "I will chose my own path to tread" and walked away.
Naruto felt the hot surge of the Kyuubi's chakra run the length of his body. As his form began to glow a blood red it seemed to lift slightly off of the ground. Naruto blinked as he came to his senses.
"Wha?" was all he could say before he felt it, the chakra moving within him changing his very DNA into something more than human. "Ahhhh" he screamed as his body jerked wildly and began to change on the outside as well as the inside.
His bright blond hair darkened to a more golden tone and grew to his waist. His fingers were replaced permanently by wicked looking claws. His ear's popped out of existence as a pair of pointed black fox ears emerged from his hair. His whisker marks thickened seeming to highlight his now elongated canines, and his pupils slit taking on a golden hew in the mist of his still bright blue eyes. The sound of tearing cloth was heard as nine long gold tails tipped in black sprouted from the base of his spine.
After what seemed like agonizing hours for the loud mouth shinobi which was only seconds in reality the pain receded. His now bare stomach glowed as the seal meant to imprison the Kyuubi no Kitsune disintegrated and a large portion of red chakra left Naruto's body.
Naruto slowly came to his senses; he noticed a few things as he did. One his hair was a lot longer then before. Two he was completely naked, except for baa-chan's necklace. And three…he had nine fuzzy tails.
His eyes snapped open in shock and he noticed something else. There was a man standing over him that he had never seen before. The man had waist length blood red hair, and amber eyes with black slit pupils in them. He had a set of whisker marks to match Naruto's. He also had black fox ears on top of his head, a set of claws on his hands, and was completely naked as well (no this is not yoai, not that I have anything against it I just can't write it). Not to mention he had nine blood red tails tipped in black swaying behind him.
A foxy grin formed on the man's face showing off his elongated canines as he looked down at the now panicking Naruto. "WHAT THE HELL IS GOING ON HERE! WHO ARE YOU? WHY ARE WE NAKED?" Naruto suddenly yelled scooting back along the ground, or at least attempting to…he seemed to be having trouble adjusting to his new tails.
The man started snickering which then turned into full blown laughter as he fell back onto his back laughing. Naruto scowled and made his way to his feet. "What the hell are you up to now dobe?" was suddenly asked as Naruto spun around to face the new comer…or not so new comer.
Naruto blinked at Sasuke who, it turns out, had stopped when he felt the monstrous charka once more figuring it would be quicker to beat the dobe down before he could fully recharge and make a second attempt only to find the blond…now golden haired ninja with extra appendages and…no clothes.
Sasuke quirked an eyebrow at Naruto and said "…you have tails." In a very calm manner as his mind tried to work things out. Naruto's head almost went a whole 360 degrees as he attempted to get a better look at his backside.
He then looked at the strange man and got a thoughtful look on his face and said "I know that crazy laugh from somewhere." As the golden haired genin said taping his chin with his hand his eyes suddenly lit up as he exclaimed "That's the laugh of Kyuubi no Baka."
The man on the ground stopped laughing and wiped a tear from his eye as he stood up and wrapped his tails around him to form a toga like garment. He walked over to Sasuke and smirked as he said "Thanks kit if not for you I doubt I would have ever had this type of opportunity. You can proudly say that you had a hand in freeing the almighty Kyuubi no Kitsune for his human prison."
"That was not my intention." Said the ever stoic Sasuke with a frown. Naruto looked down at his stomach and noticed that the seal was gone. He then looked at the now identified Kyuubi no Kitsune with shock all over his face.
Kyuubi looked distastefully at Naruto and said "Cover yourself already kittling I don't exactly swing that way…besides that being just wrong between you and me." When Naruto only stared in horror at him Kyuubi continued with "Father's should definitely not have those kinds of relationships with their sons, its not only wrong…its sick."
Naruto gulped and said in a shaky voice "You're my father?" Kyuubi grinned at the golden haired ninja and said "I am now! One of them anyway." Naruto just blinked at him.
"I have more than one father?" Naruto questioned in shock.
Kyuubi nodded his head and said "Well we have some time so I will explain." After clearing his throat Kyuubi began "When your father first imprisoned me within you, I was given the assignment of keeping you safe… or die."
"As you can clearly see by my being alive I chose the former. Now as I lay within my prison I had little to do but explore the seal that imprisoned me. After a short period of time I found the thing that has lead to my freedom. The seal was very specific in that it would imprison me, and not your father's soul. You see..." Kyuubi continued.
At this point Naruto blurted in "My father imprisoned you?"
Sasuke thought about it for a minute before saying "I was unaware that you were the son of the fourth Hokage Naruto."
Naruto gulped and looked at his long time rival before he said "I didn't either."
Kyuubi cleared his throat and said "You see he had to be sure that his soul was free to go to the Shinigami or it would have taken Naruto's. After some thought I decided on making Naruto my son as well as his, and thus break the seal. But in order to do this I had to slowly leak my chakra into every pore of Naruto."
Taking a breath the fox lord continued "After ten years I was ready to complete my plan. However I found myself lacking one thing, in order for the transformation to happen I needed Naruto's system to have a massive intake of electricity to stimulate the cells. Thanks to your Chidori Sasuke I finally have my freedom."
As the Uchia scowled at the fox, the fox got a mischievous grin and said "And I will thank you in a most appropriate manner kit!" with that a massive surge of Kyuubi's chakra entered the avengers body causing Sasuke to convulse as it found its way into his blood stream.
Kyuubi then appeared behind him and muttered "Kitsune Hekireki!" as one of his tails lit up with electricity and he slammed it into the Uchia. As Sasuke fell to the ground withering a purple fog began to lift up from him. Naruto rushed Kyuubi and yelled "What the Hell are you doing to my BROTHER!?"
As Kyuubi easily caught the golden fox boy he smirked down at him and said "Making him your true brother for one, and giving him true power for another." Naruto's mouth gaped open as Kyuubi set him down and said "Now just wait a little while, the process is actually fast once you figure it out…and can do electric techniques."
Before Naruto could comment the purple mist gave a final hiss before disappearing all together leaving Sasuke glowing red and floating off of the ground as Naruto had done. Naruto watched in shock as his best friend began withering in pain.
Sasuke had only felt anything similar to this when he first received his cursed seal, which oddly enough he could not feel at the moment. As he under went what he and Naruto would forever refer to as 'the change' he stopped even attempting to think as his body began to shudder.
His short raven hair changed to a dark sapphire color and grew out to his waist, his ears vanished to be replaced by black fox ears that appeared on top of his head. His pitch black eyes darkened further as his pupil became red and slit, his nails elongated into claw and his canines elongated as well. Whisker marks the same as Naruto and Kyuubi's appeared along his cheeks. The sound of ripping cloth once again filled the air as nine sapphire blue fox tails tipped in black emerged from the base of his spine before the glowing stopped and lowered Sasuke back to the ground.
As the Uchiha made his way to his feet finding himself naked he looked at the Kyuubi with malice and said "What have you done!?"
Kyuubi smirked and said "I have granted you a wish. After all I thought you wanted to be as powerful as possible, tell me who is stronger then I?"
Naruto smirked and said "My dad!" at which Kyuubi scowled at him before saying "While your father was indeed powerful without his self sacrificing jutsu he would not have been able to do anything at all to me." This in turn earned him a scowl from Naruto (HNN-'snicker' they are now all scowling at each other… while naked 'falls on floor laughing' man I love being the author)
After a brief pause Sasuke noticed that he was still unable to feel the presence of the cursed seal as he was about to say something Kyuubi beat him to it "Now you don't think I would leave one of my kit's with that accursed… curse do you?" the great fox lord said.
"Now on to more important matters," he continued. "Shortly all three of us will go through another transformation as your sister puts in her appearance… I will most likely wind up fighting her."
"…Sister?" questioned Naruto as a still stunned Sasuke could only stare at the fox in front of him.
Kyuubi nodded and said "Yes about one hundred years ago I ran across her. She is known as the Devil Angel, as her parents were both angels. However her biological father scorned her mother and had her banished to the Demon world where she met the man who would go on to be looked upon by her as of yet unborn daughter as a father. Just for reference, never bring up her biological father if you value your life."
Taking a breath he continued "She believes that as not all angels are good, and so to are all demons not evil. She made it her business to fight for demon rights and that is how she met me. I went to her and asked her to bring me to the human world; I was bored and wanted out. She reluctantly agreed on one condition… I had to give her some of my power. And that brings us to how she is your sister… as my power that rests in her is still a part of me… when I transformed into this form… so did she."
As he finished his statement Kakashi made his appearance; he stared at his students and the stranger and said simply "What the?" Naruto looked at Sasuke who looked at Kyuubi who just looked at Kakashi and said "Just talking to my kittling, Kakashi-baka I would like to say it is a pleasure to meet you… but I doubt you feel that way."
Kakashi swallowed and stuttered out "K..k..kyuubi?" Kyuubi smiled and said "I know what your thinking, how am I going to deal with the all powerful Kyuubi?" before Kakashi could replied there was a sudden flash of light as Kyuubi, Naruto, and Sasuke doubled over in pain as wings burst out of their backs (Kyuubi's were black tipped in blood red, Sasuke's were black tipped in sapphire blue, and Naruto's were black tipped in gold).
A scream of "KYUUBI YOU ARE SO DEAD!" echoed through the clearing as a massive burst of white chakra flew toward said demon who barely dodged coming away with only one singed tail. As Kakashi, Kyuubi, Sasuke, and Naruto turned to face the new comer they got an eyeful.
Making her way into the clearing was a women about four feet five with waist length snow white hair, her sky blue eyes held a slit black pupil within their depths. Her elongate canines were exposed in a snarl, framed by her whisker marks. Her arms were a mystery her left white the right black each ending at claws posed to rip. Her black fox ears were laid back in anger. Her black wings tipped in white were raised to her sides in agitations. Behind her nine white fox tails tipped in black twisted and swirled in her rage.
She was very much naked and seemed to not notice it as she marched across the clearing to face Kyuubi. Around her red chakra seemed to sizzle and crack, she ignored it instead pulling on more white chakra into her left arm as she hurled her left hand out at the fox lord sending a ball of it at him.
Kyuubi yelped and said "Now, now Desira that's no way to treat your third father." Her eyes narrowed even further at him and she said in a voice laced with rage "FATHER MY ASS!" As she suddenly clutched her left arm as the red and white chakra danced angrily around her.
At her grimace of pain Kyuubi said "You know you're gonna have to learn how to keep your two charka's from mixing or this will be the end result." She scowled at him and charged her arm up once more ignoring the pain it was causing her. Kyuubi's face darkened as he watched her and said "Enough, I will not allow you to continue to hurt yourself kittling," as he disappeared.
Reappearing behind Desira he grabbed her around her neck and lifted her up off of the ground by the scruff of her neck. Desira immediately stopped flailing and growled out "What the hell are you doing!" Kyuubi smirked walked over to Naruto and Sasuke put her on her feet and said "Meet your new brothers Sasuke and Naruto. Naruto, Sasuke meet your new sister Desira."
As the three looked at each other it finally dawned on Desira that she was standing stark naked in front of four men. Her eyes got really big as her tails wrapped themselves around her and she screeched in out rage.
Sasuke and Naruto had been staring at her face really hard; Kyuubi had been ignoring her… Kakashi on the other hand had a major nose bleed going on and all of Desira's wrath turned on the hapless Jonin as she proceeded to beat him to a bloody puddle.
As she looked back at her new family she said one thing "Cover up already." And scowled at Sasuke and Naruto as they quickly arranged their tails to cover strategic places causing Kyuubi to laugh.
As they all turned to face him Naruto scowled and said "Shut up Kyuubi no Baka! What have you done? THE VILLAGE WILL NEVER ACCEPT ME LIKE THIS!" as he spoke his voice increased in volume until he was screaming at the end.
Kyuubi sighed as he looked at the golden haired boy and said "What I have done is give you the power necessary to protect your village. However the village should not know of me… not being sealed any longer."
Hearing this Kakashi picked himself up off of the ground and looked at Kyuubi as he raised his hand to his forehead protector as he began to lift it up Kyuubi appeared behind him one of his many tails lifting the shocked Jonin up off of his feet.
"There will be none of that, I can't be fighting with my kittling's sensei now can I?" the fox lord questioned as he dropped a startled Kakashi onto the ground. Looking at the three he sighed and said "I suppose we shall have to go back a bit so that no one is aware of this."
At their startled looks he smirked and said "Did you think that when they said I was the most powerful demon they were exaggerating? Now then I think about one year or so should do it, oh and Sasuke I hope you don't mind but we will all be living in the old Uchiha district."
Sasuke scowled and said "What makes you think I will go along with this?" Kyuubi blinked at the boy and said "What makes you think you have a choice? Okay so a few things to know, Desira's white and black arms are now all of our blood line. We shall call it Kyuu, Desira and I will go over its properties later. Also as of I will be known as Ki Okibi. As for you three you are now Ki Desira, Ki Uzamaki Naruto, and Ki Uchiha Sasuke."
Sasuke huffed and Naruto gaped like a gold fish as Kyuubi continued "I will officially adopt you two later, but for now this will have to do. Desira when we arrive your age group will have just made genin; we will go to the Hokage and request to join the village. He will most likely give you the academy test and if he finds you worthy assign you to one of the already formed teams."
Desira developed a small eye twitch at this as Kyuubi continued "Naruto you and Sasuke will have been on vacation when we arrive and you will continue for the most part as if nothing out of the ordinary has happened now one last thing." As he finished all nine of his tails lit up as he let lose with a burst of his chakra that incased him, as well as the three children in it.
As the chakra dissipated it revealed a relatively normal looking group. Sasuke and Naruto wore their normal outfits. Desira wore a sleeveless solid white tank top, with matching white baggy pants, with a pair of white strappy high heels (like Tsunade's but white). Kyuubi wore a pair of dark red baggy pants with black ninja sandals, with a sleeveless black vest and gold arm bands.
All had their waist length hair pulled back into a pony tail, and their nine tails were gone along with their wings. Their claws had shortened and the whisker marks had all but disappeared. Their normal ears were once more in place, their fox ears disappearing without a trace. Slit eyes had returned to rounded pupils and they looked relatively human, even Desira's arms were now normally colored.
Desira sighed as she looked down at her outfit. "I will have to change my look, white cloths are fine with black hair but they just make me look pale with white hair." Naruto looked at her strangely and said "Black hair?"
Desira nodded her head and said "Yeah I was born with black hair in my human form, and white in my angel form. It's an avenging angel thing." As she said this Sasuke stared at her and said "You're an Avenging angel?" at her nod he continued "How do you become an avenging angel?"
At his question Desira said "Well first, angels all start off being one of the lower angels. They are Warrior, Defender, and Magic. Depending on which you can grow into one of the many other types. Magics can become Enchanters, Spell Casters, and Healers. Defenders can become Guardians, Soldiers, and Master Defender. And Warriors can become Soldiers, Berserkers, and Avengers. Unlike most I was one of the few that were born an Avenging Angel due to…certain occurrences."
As Sasuke looked on Naruto got a thoughtful look on his face as he asked "So…what type of angels are we?" At his question Okibi and Sasuke turned their attention to the now thoughtful Desira. "I'd say that Kyuubi is a Berserker, Naruto a Defender, and Sasuke you are a Warrior." She said causing Sasuke to frown at only being a Warrior.
Before he could speak up Naruto said "Why does Kyuubi no baka get to be a second level Angel?" Desira smirked and said "Because he is really, really old." Kyuubi frowned and said "I'm strong!...not that old." He mumbled the last under his breath. Sasuke chose this moment to speak up, "How do I become an Avenging Angel?"
Desira looked at the Uchiha and said "I agree that you do have a good reason to want to be an Avenger, but there is more to it than that. As a true Avenging Angel I do not seek to only avenge myself, and death is not always the outcome of my retribution. I can tell you no more than that; you have to figure some things out on your own."
As she finished her speech Kyuubi began to once again glow red as he also started to chant softly under his breath in a language that sounded familiar to Sasuke and Naruto but neither could say why, Desira however filled them in. "He's chanting in Demonic."
"What is he saying?" questioned Naruto.
Desira slowly began to translate "As we stand…in this time…let now the clock…turn back once more…to a time when peace still ruled the land…" as she translated the last both she and Kyuubi trailed off as Kyuubi's chakra swept forward to encase the three children. Leaving a very confused Kakashi wondering what was going on.
The End:
Okay so there you go the first chapter of my new story Our Father Kyuubi. Okay some info for you to know, Desira is over one hundred years old but by angel standers she is still a child which should explain her height, she will get taller as time goes by. Now the reason Desira changed is that Kyuubi had to change, he could not just replace all of Naruto's fathers DNA with his own he had to take half of the preexisting DNA into himself and give half of his to Naruto in order for him to free himself. So in essence Kyuubi is now half human, and thus Desira's change. The difference in when he made Sasuke one of his kits was that all he did was add his DNA to that already present.
Okay the long hair? I just liked the idea, it's a wild animal thing I think - and I just felt like giving Naruto and Sasuke somewhat of a make over (I'm still a fan of their original looks though) and yes their outfits will change somewhat - oh and Sasuke still wants to kill Itachi he just thinks that Kyuubi is a much better candidate for a teacher then a snake pervert.
As for the different types of angels…I just made it up, they are now all half angel due to Desira's influence as for her making them angels…it has to do with the reason Kyuubi's chakra changed her in the first place, except since her influence is not as strong as Kyuubi's it took her presence to make the change occur. More of Desira's background will be made known later, and just so you know it will not be centered on her - mostly it will focus on Naruto and Sasuke.
Original Jutsu corner:
Kitsune Hekireki –means Kitsune thunder- an ability of Kyuubi's…its true purpose is unkown
Okay I think that's everything, let me know if something has you confused okay? This is my fourth fanfiction 'raises glass' lets celebrate! Let me know what you think and leave me a review please -.
Oh and Okibi means blazing fire -
From my beta Ataraninja:
I like this story because Sasuke doesn't leave and become all evil-like by joining Orochimaru and I agree about the teacher thing. Poor Kakashi is so confused. And I also think that there was a reason for you making them have long hair. 'cough' Inuyasha. Yeah I know how you think, you silly little fangirl you! Neways I got other stuff to do so bye and I'll get to the other chaps later. I just needed to know what this one was about.
From my other beta Blue Bunny2:
;passes out from laughing; Omg, I almost didn't finish this I was laughing so hard. I can imagine them all standing around, naked, glaring at each other. Cute idea, I likey. ;huggles gold haired Naruto; Kawaii.