this is the first chapter of my first story so please I need reviews!!

Disclaimer i do not own twilight but i want to

EMMET's POV

I was bored and everyone was away except for Alice she was bored too, I could tell. Well maybe we could make forts and …

"I'm in" Alice randomly yells

" I don't even know what I'm doing yet" I call back

Alice runs through the door and tells me

"we're making forts and attack each other with Nerf guns custom designed to go vampire speed "Alice quickly tells me

"Sweet lets do it" I call back she was already downstairs by the time I finished talking, time to make the fort

" I get upstairs" I yell she is probably already done her fort

K I'll need some rubber ( by the way this is my first story and alice is afraid of yellow rubber)

So I went to the mall to by 90 rubber duckies

Back at the house with rubber duckies and a melter while melting the ducks he looks for nerf guns and decides to make his own (oh ya and emmet is a evil genius) An hour later of taking apart and making nerf guns and bullets he is ready

"bring it on" I yell at alice.

Alice POV

I heard Emmet yell "bring it on"

So I ran up stairs to find yellow RUBBER

"AAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH" I shrieked and bolted into my awesome pink plastic fort

What can I do I could melt all the rubber but then it would slosh down to my fort OH I could a grizzely bear to lure him ya lets go get the trap set

AT THE FOREST

As I got into the forest I heard everyone coming home from the other direction oh well I will get them on my team later right now I need to get the bear

I had gotten the grizzely bear but when I got back there was a lion a elephant, emmet with two nerf guns bella ,eddy,and rose" I thought I told you not to call me that Edward said turning around and blasting 50 shots at my head and heart, ( bye the way bella is a vampire with the power to control animals and block mental powers)

As soon as edwaed fired jasper came up behind me and intercepted most of the shots and fired 50 more shots at all of them they got the picture and bolted.

sorry for it being so short but I need Ideas!!!!! please help me And r&r