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I know, it's not Kirby related but, it will all make sense the next chapter

BTW, Angel is my OC. Everything else, I don't own.


I remember raindrops falling from the sky. Every drop felt like rocks hitting against my face. I remember the ground was cold as ice. There was nothing in the room but black darkness. I remember staring at a figure ahead. He looks as though I know him from somewhere. The navy green uniform and hat. Then, as rain stopped, his U.S. flag badge shined bright in my face. As I look through the light, I saw his face. He stood there proudly like a knight. That's when tears rolled down my face as he reached his hand out to me.

"Dad" I mouthed for I was too joyful to speak. As I reached my hand to touched my father's hand, he started to fade away. I ran as fast as I can. But, the more I run, the more he would fade away. I didn't want him to disappear. No, not now. I want him to come home with me, my family.

"Please!" I begged. "Don't leave me!"

Suddenly, a loud noise appeared.

DING

The room started to shatter.

DING

The floors started to crack and the room was once black again.

DING

"PLEASE DAD! COME BACK!" I screamed. "WHY DID YOU LEAVE ME AND MOM AND CHRIS?!"

DING

"DON'T YOU EVER LOVE US?!"

DING

As the last ding came, the man I know of vanished. The floors split into two and I fell. Going farther, farther, and farther down. I remember looking down to see if there is an end. Nothing but darkness ahead. Just then, I heard a familiar voice. My father was calling to me saying, "I've never leave you, Chris, and mom on purposed, Angel. Don't you remember what I used to tell you?"

I was confused for a minute. Just then, I heard a little girl's voice, giggling with laughter. I looked around to see if anyone was around. Then I realized it was me when I was little. She then asked, "Daddy, since you're going away for a long time, when are you coming back?"

The father sighed for a minute and then he responded, "My little Angel, always remember that I will always be there for you. No matter what happens, I'll be by your side. Do you understand?"

"Yes daddy." she joyfully said.

That's when hit me. The promise I made to my dad.

"I remember now." I breathed. "It's that time when we went to the park for your birthday."

My father chuckled,"Yes."

"There is no reason to laugh. Nothing can be the same again, Dad. There is no laughter in the family anymore. Only sadness." I cried.

As I cry, I saw a green light, brighter than the sun. I fell into the light and the these were my last words to my dead father:

"I love you, Dad!"

All I can hear now is the sound of the ding the further and further I fell.

DING,DING,Ding,Ding,Ding,Ding...