This story was just a spark of inspiration and anger at the same time while I read "Breaking Dawn." This is my first ever Twilight fanfiction so comments, constructive criticism, and flames are all welcome. I am still highly devoted to my Chronicles of Narnia fanfics and future updates on those stories should be arriving shortly.
WARNING: Please do NOT read if you like Jacob Black or the Jacob/Renesmee romance imprint thing. Consider this as almost Jacob bashing. I'm sorry to those who actually like him but I hate the fact that he gets to spend more time with her than the actual parents. For those of you who create "daddy/daughter" moments with Edward and Renesmee, more power to ya!
WARNING PART 2: Some spoilers for "Breaking Dawn" or any other book in the Twilight Saga may also be included.
Disclaimer: All characters belong to Stephenie Meyer and anything else that looks familiar are probably not mine either. Like I say with all my stories, I only own the plot which is usually not much.
Chapter One Part One: Jacob's POV
I looked at Bella and I had to admit she looked stunning as a vampire. Edward slightly growled and I could vaguely hear him say something like "She always has been." I guess I couldn't argue with him there. She was still with Nessie and in amazed awe at the daughter she held only a few days ago. She was in even more shock when she found out about Nessie's "little gift." Edward and Carlisle were discussing how Nessie's gift was almost the exact opposite of Edward's while Bella was staring and I could tell that she was thinking about things like how the chromosome match was the same as mine and how Nessie's body was just as burning hot. I remember when it was the intensity of my body heat that Bella was amazed about. Again, Edward growled but not as fiercely. Maybe it was because this time I wasn't thinking of it inappropriately but because I meant when she found out I was a werewolf.
I was now getting anxious. I trusted Bella to not hurt Nessie and all but still, something made me want to be with the baby right here and now. "Haven't we experimented enough for one day?" I know I was being rude but still it was practically involuntary, along with everything else that has been happening. "Okay, Bella's doing great, but let's not push it." I know it was sort of harsh but I didn't really care that I wanted Nessie away from her dangerous mother and back into my safe arms (at least in my point of view).
Bella glared and snapped at me. "What is your problem, Jacob?" She was now tugging against my hold on Nessie. I stepped forward and Nessie was now on my chest just as much as it was on Bella's. I was still slightly fighting with Bella's hold on the baby when Edward growled at me fierce enough for everyone else to hear.
"Just because I understand it, doesn't mean I won't throw you out, Jacob. Bella's doing extraordinarily well. Don't ruin the moment for her." Edward was angry and very close to fulfilling his threat. And then of course the blonde has to jump into any opportunity to express her hatred for me as well as wanting any chance to get me out of their lives and possibly the world I happen to live in.
"I'll help him toss you, dog." Rosalie made it sound more of a promise than a threat, probably to express the fact that there was no doubt she was excited to get a chance to not only kick my butt, but to also get me out of the house at the same time. "I owe you a good kick in the gut." Oh yeah, she was excited to get her Prada or Stiletto type shoe thing into my stomach. I half glared at the blonde while still staring at Nessie. I could tell Bella was catching on. Maybe the fact that she noticed that I didn't care that all the vampires were touching me was a huge hint to her. I should never have told her about our wolf legends 'cause I have a feeling that I will not be killed by one vampire, or two, but at the very least, three.
I could hear Bella mutter a faint "No." Yup, she caught on. Jasper clenched his teeth while Edward wrapped his arms around Bella. I took that opportunity to take Nessie out of her arms. She let her go easily. That was a bad sign which only meant that she finally snapped.
Her teeth were gritted. "Rose," She was really mad now. She was practically seething. "Take Renesmee." Blondie held her arms open and I gave her the baby. She backed away with the baby and I backed away too. Blondie, along with her boyfriend, were ready for the excitement they knew was about to happen.
Bella was still looking at me, anger in her red eyes. She stared at me yet she addressed Edward. "Edward, I don't want to hurt you, so please let go of me." He hesitated probably fighting an internal battle on whether to save me or let her rip me to shreds being that this is the opportunity he's been looking forward to since we started our battle for Bella. Bella was still addressing Edward. "Go stand in front of Renesmee." He let go, not being able to refuse her. She looked just as she did when she went hunting. She stepped closer to me.
"You didn't." She glared at me while I was slowly backing away, palms in the air.
"You know it's something I can't control." I tried reasoning but knowing Bella, I didn't have a prayer for reason.
"You stupid mutt! How could you? My baby!" Now I could tell she was ready to pounce. I backed away to the lawn but she continued to stalk me.
I half ran down the steps on their front lawn. "It wasn't my idea, Bella!"
"I've held her all of one time, and already you think you have some moronic wolfy claim to her? She's mine!" There was no point in reasoning by this time but it might as well buy me some time.
"I can share." Ok that was pathetic but what else do you say in a time like this. I heard Emmett ask for his money obviously winning his bet that the outcome would be like this. I thought that was enough to distract Bella knowing that she would hate knowing that they bet on her like this but she was too mad to even notice.
"How dare you imprint on my baby? Have you lost your mind?"
"It was involuntary!" Again, pathetic yet it bought enough time for Seth and Leah to finally make their appearance. Bella actually snarled at them. I had to admit, that was pretty impressive. Edward had a smirk on his face and I couldn't tell whether it was because he was agreeing with me on the impressive part or if he was just excited for what was to happen next. Leah snapped at her. I didn't know whether I was happy about that or angry at her. Bella snarled right back at her.
"Bella, would you try to listen for just a second? Please?" I hated begging but I had no choice. I was getting sick and tired of Leah. "Leah, back off." Leah didn't move but I didn't really care considering that I finally got Bella's attention…or at least almost had her attention.
"Why should I listen?"
"Because you're the one who told me this. Do you remember? You said we belonged in each other's lives, right? That we were a family. You said that was how you and I were supposed to be. So…now we are. It's what you wanted." I think that made her even madder 'cause now she looked as if she was about to blow her top off.
"You think you'll be part of my family as my son-in-law?" Emmett was laughing but she still didn't care. Esme tried to get Edward to stop her from hurting me but Edward refused.
"No!" Her rhetorical question came so abruptly. "How can you even look at it that way? She's just a baby, for crying out loud!"
"That's my point!" She was already yelling at me. That probably didn't help my chances of living.
"You know I don't think of her that way! Do you think Edward would have let me live this long if I did? All I want is for her to be safe and happy-is that so bad? So different from what you want?" I knew I was yelling at her but she left me no choice. For the first time since Bella became a vampire, she growled at me just as fierce as Edward had. I could hear him muttering to Carlisle "Amazing, isn't she?" Carlisle was also stunned telling Edward "She hasn't gone for his throat even once."
Bella hissed at me. "You're going to stay away from her."
"I can't do that." She knew just as well as I did that I couldn't just walk out of Nessie's life.
"Try. Starting now." Was she serious?
"It's not possible." I started explaining as to why it was impossible. When she was pregnant, she wanted me near her when really the baby wanted me near her…because we can't be separated. I think it almost calmed her but only for a second, then she got even madder.
She started threatening me. "Run away while you still can."
"C'mon Bells! Nessie likes me, too." She froze right there on the spot and I could tell I said the wrong thing. Everyone else quieted to see what would happen.
"What…did you call her?" I'm a dead man/wolf thing. I think Edward was slightly laughing or trying to hide a laugh behind Bella.
I took another step back. "Well…the name you came up with is kind of a mouthful and-" She stopped me right there.
"You nicknamed my daughter after the Loch Ness Monster?" I'm as good as dead basically. How did I know that? Well the fact that she lunged for me without an ounce of regret kind of gave me a hint. Thank goodness for Seth though. If he hadn't gone in front of me, I might have been in worse pain than if Rosalie had given me that kick in the gut.
A few minutes later, they brought Seth inside for Carlisle to heal. I was allowed to stay outside with Nessie. Of course, she was biting me again and I could tell Blondie was inside just laughing at it all. She always thought that was funny, which is the reason as to why she sometimes delays Nessie's dinner on purpose. Speak of the devil and he (or she) will come. Rosalie was waiting at the front door holding Nessie's bottle so I quickly walked up to her with the baby.
What's the point of being with Rose without an argument? We started fighting over who gets to feed Nessie. I honestly don't care or feel sympathy for the fact that she only wants to take care of Nessie 'cause she always wanted kids. After Edward vouched that Rosalie feed the baby, he told me that it was time for me to go and search the perimeter anyway. I had to go explain things with Sam and his pack anyway so I guess an argument with him was useless at this point.
I left and Leah followed after, holding her injured brother in her arms as gently as she could (especially since he was almost bigger than her). I had a bad feeling about leaving but I had no choice. Why did I have this bad feeling in the pit of my stomach? It felt almost as if the dumb blonde really did kick me with her designer high heeled shoes. Maybe it was because Edward and Rosalie didn't go back inside the house until I was completely unseen. I'll just have to see what would happen after I returned.
Chapter One Part Two: Bella's POV
I waited until Edward and Rose were back inside the house to actually talk to my family. We all gathered in the dining room, the same place where the vote was cast that I become a vampire. We were all having another one of those "family meetings." Carlisle was sitting at the head of the seat with Esme to his right and me and Edward to his left. Emmett was sitting next to Esme with Rose next to him and Renesmee slowly falling asleep while being fed her bottle of blood. Jasper sat next to me with Alice right next to him. We all knew the topic of discussion.
And of course, Emmett has to be the one to lighten up the mood…which I am actually quite grateful yet angered by. "I for one think that this is probably the sickest thing I've ever seen or heard of."
"I second that gesture." Rose was only too happy to agree, not wanting her perfect niece to be together with such a dumb dog.
Esme and Carlisle were saddened by what had happened. I knew that they didn't want their granddaughter with a wolf anymore than me and Edward wanted her with Jacob. I was still angry that Jacob would do this to me and my family, regardless if it was voluntary or not.
"What do you think we should do?" Alice was now truly worried.
"I don't think there's much that we can do." Jasper tried comforting her but found no other words than that.
"Can't we get the actually imprint thing off?" Esme tried helping but it seemed pretty much impossible to Edward.
"It's not possible." Edward was steaming mad but tried really hard not to show it.
"I guess we're going to have to deal with the fact that Jacob is eventually going to be part of this family, whether we like it or not." Carlisle always being the voice of reason and yet depressed as everyone else was.
But something Esme said made something click in my brain. "I don't think it's impossible."
Edward tried to reason with me even though he knew I was still as stubborn as before. "Bella, love, there's nothing we can do now."
"No there is. I think I know someone who can uplift this curse that was set upon our daughter." Everyone stared at me confused. "We're gonna need plane tickets out of here as soon as possible…I think I have an idea but we're gonna have to move fast."
And just like that everyone raced on to pack everything they could for our trip. I knew exactly how to fix all of this.
Ok so that was my first chapter of my first Twilight story. It will probably end up as a two or threeshot, depends on how much I need to write. Please review. I promise things will get interesting in the next chapter. I only wrote this 'cause I hate Jacob with a great intensity. I mean really, he spends more time with the kid then Edward and Bella do. That's just not right.
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-tin2lo
