Disclaimer:I do no own any of the Witch Hunter Robin characters and do not wish to insult any religion or God in this poem. I believe in God myself so you can trust that I don't mean any thing. The character of "god " is merely created by me to flow with the poem. The character "god" is not a reflection of anything or anybody.
Author's Note: There's a long explanation. I had a case of writer's block when I started writing this poem, but as I write on the situation go worse and worse so that I can't think or write like before anymore. Plus I have been reading alot of Susan Musgrave's poems and style is rubbing off on me, more sarcasim and sing-song like mockery, which is a big part of this poem. The first few stanzas of this poem is closer to my old style, using words that people have never seen before. So please R&R, very important, both good or bad.
If you have anymore questions write them in your reviews and I'll answer them by email.
Thanks alot!
The "soaking head in spiked punch" is an idea I got from the fanfic "Miracle" by SanoGirl. In the interlude of her fanfic "Miracle" Amon was drunk on punch at the office party that was spiked by Doujima and soak his head into it. Thank you for the idea!
Adam wasn't Eve's type
Beginning of all
Betrayed, thrown into eternal darkness
Frustrating shadow dancing in raging crimson
What happened to the serpent?
The one that dug the abyss of night
She fell willingly
The one that banished Eve from Eden
She left willingly,
Into what's called the world
Sacrificing the Sun, because of doing an ungodly deed, from god
All part of the benevolent plan, out of wisdom,
He was told
What happened to love?
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They were wrong
Cold blooded because named so
She left without darkness
Because the traitor's blood is warmer than that of Adam's
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Pain is never whole
Always things that distract one from savouring anguish
Struggling to live leaves a heart too tired to feel
Quiet night holds too much to be dark,
Giving a wearing soul refuge, or further torment?
"Sleep on it", dreams give the mind too much freedom
Thunderous silence pushes Adam out of the way
Leaving things as they should be
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Longing for the fire to consume all
Letting the venom roll down her throat
The warm death thaws what was frozen by Adam's lifeless gift
What do you think it is?
Whatever you said
You've guessed it!
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A kiss to remember is like good chocolate
Never sweet and never again
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The ancient king of god's people
Is the one who started this mess
Ha ha!
You are losing it, old man
It was fun at first, no more inferiority complexes
Who can be better than god?
Everyone!
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But as people soak their heads in spiked punch,
Realizing that it had started a long time ago
Adam and Eve were never meant to be a couple
As much as syrup wasn't meant for pancakes
The world wasn't suppose to be round
Though mostly, they weren't suppose to exist
Those who don't listen to their father and mother
Those who should be spanked and told to respect their elders
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They can't get a new god
Not like everything else
The idea alone is an abomination
Just as the idea that the serpent was Satan
And Adam is a goody-goody
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He was the third wheel
On a bicycle
Adam may still need a tricycle
"But it is so passé" said the world that was an accident
His jealousy proved to be too much for him
So he blew up into pieces
Who cares?
It wasn't meant to be anyways
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Who started it?
The serpent's enchanting bleak soul
Or the desire that was unfulfilled by fate in Eve?
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He laughed at her
"Just a bone"
Adam's soil is too barren for the Seeds
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The pods of Eve's estranged desire spread
Though out the gigantic rotting body of god
"They are just replaceable bones, nothing more"
Wait until arthritis hits
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Parents set out to bring the lost children back
Told to do so by Adam
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"After all these years, you are still the same asshole,"
Sighed Eve
"More cream?"
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Well, what happened next?
More babbling?
No, you can finish it
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When the ice cream or crêpe man/woman asks you which flavour
Or you finally getting the chance to stuff each other strawberry and whipped cream
Think about Adam and Eve
Try something other than banana chocolate, would ya?
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Author's Note #2: Thanks alot for those who finished my poem and hopefully already reviewed or will review. This poem does not follow the book of Gensis in the Holly Bible, merely something I made up to follow the story. Obviously Eve is robin and Amon is the Serpent. Amon's too good to be Adam. I don't know who exactly is Adam but I'm thinking of Zaizen. I've been reading alot of WHR fanfics and kinda tired of the Amon's Adam part, too traditional, so I thought of something different. This piece is to mock some people's un-creativity. I tried really hard to classify because it's part angst, parody, romance and what ever. The various stanzas are disorganized, but I don't know what else. So thanks alot for reading and please review, good or bad. Just for those who don't know, in the third last stanza Eve was talking to Adam and calling him an asshole.And once again the "soaking head in spiked punch" is an idea I got from the fanfic "Miracle" by SanoGirl. In the interlude of her fanfic "Miracle" Amon was drunk on punch at the office party that was spiked by Doujima and soak his head into it. I just thought it would be funny and plus people usually soak in cold water, not alcohol, just a bit of sarcasim. So I give the credits to SanoGirl for the idea that her fanfic gave me. Thanks alot SanoGirl and by the way I love the fic.