So I have decided to go back and edited and possible add new stuff to my Bleach Fanfiction. I do hope you enjoy it...again lol

I don't own Bleach or anything related to it, that honor belongs to Tite Kubo

The sound of a running shower could be heard throughout the silent apartment. Steam from said shower rolled out from underneath a closed bathroom door. Inside was a young woman who looked no older then 18 years old. Her hair was long, black with 2 single blue streaks. Inside the shower she sat, trying desperately to wash away the lingering thoughts of the other high school students from her mind.

See, this woman had a secret that only a few trusted people knew about. This girl had several special abilities. She could hear the thoughts of anyone around her, if she wanted, she could whisper in their minds. With a single thought she could move just about any object she wanted. The woman gave a long drawn out sigh, as the scalding water beat down on her head, but the thoughts and images would not leave her. Only in sleep would she find relief.

She felt the presence before she actually saw it. Looking out into the misty bathroom she saw a ghostly woman standing by the sink. The ghost woman had a concerned look upon her elderly face. Normally someone would freak out at a ghost appearing before them, much less in the bathroom with them while they showered, but the girl didn't mind it so much anymore. It had become a normal occurrence for her to see the dead lingering around. And even though she could still read their thoughts it was much harder and in turn gave her someone she could open her mind around and not have to worry.

Turning the water off, she grabbed a towel, wrapped it around her lithe body and stepped out. "What's wrong Mary?" she asked the ghost.

The ghost sighed, the chain hanging from the middle of her chest giving a slight jiggle. "I think I'm ready to move on, Renee."

The girl, Renee, smiled a little, her cobalt blue eyes lighting up a bit. She'd spent weeks trying to get this ghost to move on, and now she was finally ready. "What made you change your mind? I thought you were going to stay around and keep an eye on your grandchildren."

"I was, but I see now that they're going to be alright without me, and I feel that it is now time to move on." She said in a sad voice.

"Don't worry Mary, I've heard that Heaven is a nice place to go. I'm sure you'll like it there. Plus you'll be reunited with your husband as well." Renee said softly, giving the ghost a small hug.

Mary smiled back at her. "You're right Renee, Dale is waiting for me on the other side."

"That's the spirit." Renee said cheerfully.

The ghost before her, closed her eyes, took a deep breathe and right before her, Mary disappeared into nothingness. She didn't know how it happened or even where the spirits went after they vanished, but with just about every ghost that showed itself to her, within a week or so, they all realized that they needed to move on and just disappeared, like Mary.

With a soft sigh, Renee walked out of the still steaming bathroom and made her way into her somewhat small bedroom. She didn't mind though, her father paid for it all and if that meant she didn't have to go out and find a job on top of going to school, then that was just fine with her. Going to her one dresser she pulled out a pair of black panties, a pair of Mountain Dew pajama pants, and a green 'Kiss Me I'm Irish' shirt.

While she was getting dressed a strange physical pressure came over her, nearly making her double over. It was followed by the eeriest scream she had ever heard. Looking over to the curtained window, she pulled on her shirt, went to the window, lifted the black curtain, and pulled the string to lift the blinds. What she saw made her eyes widen in absolute fear.

A giant black monster was looming over the school. It wore a white mask over its face, and she could see a large hole going through the area where the stomach should've been. The full moon shone brightly on the opposite side. When it gave another ear piercing scream, she quickly covered her ears, only blocking out a portion of it. Suddenly the thoughts of the beast bombarded her unprotected mind.

'I know there is a strong soul around here somewhere. It's all over this building. Must find it quickly.'

As quickly as she could, Renee built a shield around her mind. Trying to block out the giants thoughts. She was glad now that Mary had decided to move on when she did, because this creature was hunting for souls.

Rushing away from the window, she ran to the closet. Grabbing her black trench coat, she quickly rummaged though the bottom searching for the gun that her father had practically shoved into her hands. 'Renee, if you're going to be living on your own you will have some kind of way to protect yourself.' Her father's words flashed though her thoughts as she found the unused gun. Checking the clip she slipped on her favorite pair of flip flops and rushed out the door.

She didn't know what she was going to do, but she knew that she had to do something. There was no way in hell she was going to school tomorrow with that ugly ass monster hanging around. She would either kill it, scare it off, or dieing trying.

So that is the first chapter, I didn't really change anything, just edited some mistakes and reworded somethings that didn't sound right. Well Remember to R&R I always love those, and if you are new to my stories, I would love to hear from you. I'm going now to work on Chapter 2. Oh btw if you like Harry Potter, Fred and George Weasley to br exact, give my HP fanfic a shot. ^^