WARNING: first story so i might be terrible this is a story for my Character Dol "Reaper" Wahrok
Let's begin from when he was a teenager (16) living in the house of nobles.
While in the back yard of his house, he was training using a small sword and a wooden bow and standard arrows. He was a magic user also, but he was excelent at it so he did not need any training.
Watching him from inside the house was his younger brother (7) Henry "Living-stead" Wahrok. Henry was the most favored of the two but he was the weakest. He was jelouse of his older brother because he was better than him. their parents said that he would get a personal trainnig tutor by next week, Henry was glad but Dol was not.
Dol knew that he deserved a private tutor more than him, the only reason he got one was because their parents liked him because he wasn't strong enough to defeat his father, but Dol surpassed his father a long time ago. His father feared him for his unimaginable strength in magic.
One night while Dol was traing, he sensed someones prescence in the bushes. When he turned around, Some one with a cloak covering his heads leaped at Dol and stabbed him in the chest and he fell.
Dol was lying there in the pool of his own blood and the knife in his chest. The next thing he knew, he was standing infront of a man with a cloak covering his face.
The Hooded man said,"What a shamefull way to die, I shall bring you back but with a cost, you shall walk the mortal plane for eternity..."
As the man said that, Dol was awake and saw his brother and mother stare at him in fear and surprise, But his father did not care, his father looked happy. As he started to get up his father was suprised and furious and his mother and brother were suprised and happy. Then His father shouted out, " NECROMANCY, GAURDS." The gaurds came and took him away to prison where in two weeks, his execution will be held.
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