Hey there fellow Readers and Writers, this is Soul Reaper here coming to you with a story that i have adopted from bloodracer32.
First off i would like to thank bloodracer for giving me a chance to do this, I've been trying to do this type of crossover for a good while but i had a hard time getting things straight in my head, i already have a project i'm doing which i will try to get done by the end of the month, and many more will come later as time goes on, i have read the reviews and i have tried to take as many of them into consideration as i possibly can, i hope that you all will enjoy this revised version of this story, even if was a little bit.
Now that i got things straightened out on with the Story, so sit back relax and enjoy.I do not own Naruto or Tales of the abyss, any characters used in this story belongs to their respective owners.
Naruto/Tales of the Abyss
The red Haired Noble
Chapter 1
Birth of a Replica
all that could be heard was the screams of it's people as the Kyuubi no Kitsune tore through the village of Konoha, destroying everything in it's rampage, and it seemed that it was far from over.
Minato just defeated the masked man and saved his wife and two children, Kushina Uzumaki, Tsubaki Uzumaki Namikaze, and Naruto Uzumaki Namikaze.
Minato was the happiest man in the world at the birth of his twins, but also was the most miserable.
He knew that there was only one solution to stop the Kyuubi, and had hoped he never had to use it, sealing the beast into his children.
So here he was, On top of Gamabunta, preparing to seal the beast, which would most certainly take his life in exchange. He just wished he would be able to raise them.
''Minato!''
That voice, he knew that voice all too well. It belonged to his wife, Kushina Uzumaki.
''Kushina What are you doing here?, You should be resting!'' Minato yelled
''Minato Please, don't do this to our children!, you know full well how Jinchuriki are treated'' Kushina pleaded.
Minato couldn't help but agree with her. As he looked down at his children, Tsubaki had blond hair and whisker marks defining who she is, and Naruto had red Spiky hair that was quite similar to his own and green eyes that seemed to have a small hint of blue and his face was clear of any birthmarks, Minato could only imagine what suffering his children would got through if he were to do this, Jinchuriki are usually treated with hate and scorn, and he wouldn't put that on even his worst enemy.
''But...What else can i do Kushina?, No one else will offer their Children, and you know i can't allow them to sacrifice their children when we have children of our own'' Minato said sadly. ''I'm sorry Kushina, Tusbaki, Naruto, but there is no other way, please protect them Kushina.''
Tears slip through his eyes, he wanted to say more, but couldn't as he suddenly found himself restrained, he looked over his shoulder and saw a human size monkey behind him.
''Enma, hold him there, we can't afford to lose him.'' Said an old voice,
''What the- Hiruzen what are you doing?!'' Minato yelled
''Hiruzen, please stop Minato, You can't let him die like this!'' Yelled Kushina
"Your wife is right Minato, this village needs you, and more importantly your children need you, you know that the life of a Jinchuriki can hold unimaginable amount of suffering for them if you were to die now. As such, i will seal his beast, ending my life, instead of yours." explained Hiruzen.
Minato was utterly speechless, Hiruzen learned the seal he was going to use in a single night, perhaps he wasn't labeled as the professor for nothing, and now because of this he could have the opportunity he always wanted, to be with his family.
"Old man... thank you."
Hiruzen smiled as he began doing the seals for the jutsu, the soul went to Naruto, while the chakra went to Tsubaki, when it was done Hiruzen fell to the floor, dead.
Minato and Kushina, for lesser words did not know how to feel, they were happy that Minato could live and help raise his children, however they were also sad that Hiruzen had to die.
he was like a grandfather to them, however mourning would come later, they had more important matters on their minds.
They quickly ran to the altar, but what they found shocked them half to death.
There on the altar, was only one blonde haired female baby. There was no sign of Naruto, Tsubaki cried making it seem as though she knew that her brother was gone.
''Minato where is Naruto? Where is my baby boy!'' Kushina yelled as she also began crying
''Kushina I...I don't know'' Minato said as he also began to shed tears for the loss of his son.
If they had gotten here sooner, they would have noticed the flash of yellow light where Naruto was.
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Choral Castle
Vandesdelca, or Van, was having a rather good day. His plan of taking Luke and creating a replica of him was successful, everything was perfect, the replica looked exactly like the original, the only thing that seemed different was the replicas hair was a lighter shade of red with touches blond highlights, and his eyes were a tad darker like it had a mixture of blue, however they were barely noticeable.
He looked towards his god generals, Largo the Black lion, Dist the Reaper, Legretta the Quick, Sync the Tempest, and Arietta the Wild.
''We have finally done it'' Van said, ''Dist go check the Fonon Frequency'' he ordered.
''Yes Commandant'' Dist said as he flew to the computer terminal, after a few seconds of typing he saw the results, what he saw shocked him, but also filled him unbridled glee, he quickly called the others over to see the results.
''Everything is perfect Commandant, their Fonon Frequencies are exactly the same, however there's something else here, it's seems as though that there is a another power source , however due to it being so small it was only stay dormant, but he amazing thing is that it's not only making it easier to keep he Fonons more stable, but it's also him more susceptible to absorb Fonons into his body'' Dist explained.
The others were surprised by this discovery, with this hey no longer had to worry about he replica failing due to Fonon rejection, over the past year they tried and tried, and tried to make a perfect replica, but it always ended in failure due to the Fonons of the original rejecting the replica, however due to this other power source they no longer had the fear of their plan failing.
''This is excellent, finally i can start the next phase of my plan, let get him to Batical, Sync i want you to take Asch here to Daath to begin his training.''
They all nodded in agreement, and went to carry out their jobs, Van pick up the baby.
''You will be the catalyst in the creation of my new world, Luke.''
And with those few words, the replica of Asch, Luke Fon Fabre, is born.
Finish
Okay, finally got that done, please tell me what you all think of this, i know i should have came up with more original things since bloodracer gave the whole idea to me, but i wanted it to stay as close to the original story as possible, besides i like the way it started out, now from this point on there are going to be more changes, I'm going to make a list of the things i wanted to put into the story.
1. Naruto will eventually will take his identity as Naruto, this will happen later in the story, I'll explain the reason why in number two.
2. Asch will return somehow in this story, i just don't know how he will, I've got ideas but i'm willing to hear yours as well, i know most might disagree, but i just can't let things end the way they did with Asch, i know he's a major asshole, but he was just as much as a victim as Luke was so Naruto will give everything back to Asch, but i think they'll share things, over time i plan on have Naruto and Asch build up from a small friendship to eventual brotherhood as things go along, although I'll do slowly.
3. I've decided to have Luke develop more as he spends time with his family, He will be taught in taijutsu to even him out, and since he uses Fonons he won't use Ninjutsu, However we can you more physical jutsu like the rasengan and chidori, the other more ranged jutsu is out of the question, genjutsu will be possible with Naruto as he will use them in order to help him in battle, his kenjutsu skill will increase as he develops new skills as he learns from Kushina, Yugao, and Hayate, eventually he will develop his own style, mixing in swords with more striking with fists and kicks, i was thinking of him using yuri's style of fighting but i don't know, if you have any ideas then i'm open to any suggestions, also his element will be pretty much all of them, like i put in the story Naruto will be able to absorb more Fonons into his body, due to the Kyuubi, he will just have to learn how to use them effectively, with will take a while.
4. The pairing will still be Luke/Naruto and Tear, I've decided to keep the Tsubaki and Haku Pairing also, also others from tales of will be pairing with others in Naruto, Jade will probably find someone in the Shinobi world, seriously i know you all agree that jade needs a lady , so i'm giving him one, i just don't know who.
Okay now that i got that out of the way, it's time for me to split, remember that i am open to any and all suggestions, so please let me hear your opinions. Criticism will be allowed , however be warned I do not take to flames lightly, any and all hateful flaming and criticism will be ignored.
Well it's that time, i gotta go, i was eating a burrito while making this story and now i think i'm getting a bad case of the screaming burning squirts, please pray that i make it through this painful ordeal.
This SoulRe4per Signing off until then, See ya!
