ok so this is my first time making a story and i want your opinion on this.

Enjoy!

So here i am walking to the guild to see what quests are up. I was with my friends Roger,Dan,and Voron;we had just finished a gathering quest and we really wanted to hunt something. It was quiet for some time untill we reached the guild.

Roger said:"Hey Xen,what are we hunting today?"

"We shall see in a few minutes."i replyed as i was walking twoards the quest manager.

I said:"Hello! What hunting quests do you have today?"

She replyed:"Well a Rathalos caused some trouble near the village so-"

The Guildmaster got in the room without letting her finish the sentance

He said:"Xen listen i need your team's help! We discovered a new monster! I need you to investigate its habits and study it!"

"Alright.But if i am going to just study might as well not tell them since its a simple quest"i told him.

"If you want to do this alone, so be it, but i suggest you should tell your friends about it so that they know where you are going".

"Fine" i replyed.

"Ok guys so it turns out a new monster was discovered,and i am going to study it for a while"

Roger said"What about us?"

Dan continued:"Yeah what will we do?"

Voron silently nodded.

"Well there is a Rathalos who has been causing some trouble near the village, so you could go for him" i replyed.

"Ok fine" said Dan and Roger while Voron nodded in silence.

The next day

"Alright im ready to go!" i said to the Guildmaster.

"Be carefull out there!" he replyed.

As i was heading out in the forest twoards the mountain i noticed some medium-to-big footprints on the ground.

I walked forward and saw my friends fighting the Rathalos wich was losing.

I continued walking a path that would lead to the top of the mountain.

The trip took some hours but i was finally at the top.

I looked at my map and said "This must be the Ruined Pinnacle!".

I continued to walk against the strong wind untill i saw some hunters trying to fight a black and red creature.

"This must be the new monster the Guildmaster talked about"

There were 2 hunters and a palico.

The monster was way faster than the hunters, dodging their every attack. It also had rocket-like wings wich let it fly fast.

It eventually charged at the hunters and made them fall off the mountain. After that it left the area, but i saw something fall of it.

As i aproached the black scale like object it started to glow with black and red energy.

I grabbed it and at first there was nothing different. After 5 minutes i was noticing that i could not let it out of my hand like it was fused to me or something.

I felt a sudden surge of power going trough me.

"What the heck is happening to me?"

I started to lose control over my body and fell on the ground without knowing what happened to me.

I was very tired for some reason and fell asleep.