This is my first story and I could really use some help I have the whole plot in my head I just need someone to look it over when I'm done writing. I will take flames and constructive criticism.
I don't own this book series and most likely never will. (This is the only time I going to say this)
Prologue
Hi my name is Tyler Evalen Peavey I'm five-eight and have light blonde hair (call me a ditz and you will regret it). My eyes are sea foam green and I wear glasses, But I now you don't want to hear about that. So let's get to the story.
It seemed like a normal day for me I went to school talked to my friends and fell asleep in some of me classes, and after that I went to swim practice. I was tired when I went home so I went to bed right after have supper. When I woke up I didn't know where I was I was wondering if my step-father who hates me finally dumped me somewhere and said I ran away. A moment later I heard a rustling in the bush near me so quickly pretended to be asleep, but keep my eyes open just a sliver so I could see. What I saw shocked me to the core, and from that point on my life would never be the same again.
AN I know it's short and probably pretty bad but it will get better I promise.