hi guys i just made my first story i hope you enjoy!
in the hevens was stargazer she was waiting for her next job
star:ooh how much longer!
mare:miss stargazer
star:thats me
mare:here's your next's job
(read's the paper)
star:so i have to help twilight's friends
mare:yes
star:how long?
mare:20 years
star:ok good bye
2 years later
?:hay stargazer!
star:hi rainbow dash!
dash:(fly's down) so...have a colt to go to the gala with?
star:no do you?
dash:nope
?:hello star
star:hi fluttershy
shy:star can help me with my animels?
star:ok bye dash
dash:bye star
(after helping shy with the animels)
star:i'm so tired (fly's to a cloud)
star:goodnight (falls to sleep)
the end of chapter 1 and i am looking for oc's review or pm bye!