I am really sad that I got no reviews… come on guys, I was really hopping for your opinion. Well anyway, I asked a few of my friends and they all said Blind Beauty, so I guess I'm writing that one. Also when reading this story imagine anime characters, they seem to work better.
So onto the subject of what is happening with my other story. I am most definitely going to continue writing it, so no worries there, I just need some time to think about what's going to happen next. The thing is that if I really like this story I'll try and keep up with both. Also if this story does well or I get a review telling me they want another one of my ideas as a story I will totally write it. I'll end up writing them all at some point.
Hello everyone! future me here. apparently when you write stories you need something called a disclaimer so here it is...
Disclaimer: i own all the characters and ideas in this story, please do not use any of them without my permission. I came up with them myself.
ON WITH THE STORY!
Blind Beauty
It was a nice, warm spring day. Everybody was out taking in the wonderful weather. It was half way through spring break so all the students were also out and about, which included Marina. She was sitting in the park at her favorite bench taking pictures. The bench had the most beautiful view of the lake and almost no one came to this part of the park. 'CLICK'. "Oh that one's nice" Marina said looking at her picture. She loved photography it was her favorite class when she didn't have work. She was also part of the photography club, which she took very seriously. Marina was a beautiful young girl, pretty much the dream image of any girl. She had long brown hair, absolutely stunning green eyes and her smile, well let's just say all the girls were jealous. But it was not just the girls who noticed, a lot of the guys were always complementing her and she swore at least 5 guys asked her out a week, and that was on a good one. She always said no because, well she didn't really know why, none of them felt right she guessed was the reason.
As Marina continued to take pictures, she yelped when her phone vibrated in her pocket. She reached for her phone witch had fallen out of her pocket due to her little jump, and looked at the message. "Why would Logan be texting me now" She asked herself. Logan was a very close friend of hers, they were pretty much like sisters. Yes Logan is a girl, Marina often teased her about her name but they both new it was just for fun. Marina actually loved Logan's name. As Marina read the message a smile crept onto her face. The message read, "HOLA MARINA! :D Guess what, a new project for photography club was just posted on the website, it's called Blind Beauty" Marina quickly texted back. "I check the website every day, y would u need to tell me about this one?" Just as quickly as her response Logan texted back. "Because there is no instructions for it. The only thing it says is figure it out, I'm so excited XD" Marina was a bit surprised, but she was also exited. "I can choose whatever I want, as long as it has to do with blindness… This is going to be good" She said happily. Marina was so lost in thought about what she was going to do, she didn't notice a girl running directly at her with her head down. As she finally heard the rushed footsteps it was too late. 'CRASH'!
Marina was a bit dazed for a few seconds. When she finally got her baring's she was prepared to give the guy that crashed into her a scolding of a life time, but when she opened her eyes, two things surprised her. First of all it was no guy that crashed into her, but a beautiful girl with wonderful white hair and a beautiful face, and that brings us to the next thing that surprised Marina, the girl was crying, a lot. Oh no did she get hurt? She doesn't look very though. Marina quickly spoke up. "Hey are you ok, did you get hurt, did you smack your head?" She kept on asking questions to see what was wrong with the girl, but the most she got out of her was a shack of the head. Then suddenly the girl did something that surprised Marina. She hugged her, I big tight hug and was crying into her chest. Marina was shocked for a second and almost pushed her off, but she stopped herself. What happened to her? Marina asked herself. She decided to speak up, "Hey, are you ok? What happened?" She asked in a sweet tone. The girl just continued to cry. "Can you tell me your name?" Marina was now just trying to get the girl to speak. "Hey, look did something happen? We can call the police if you would like" Marina said. The girl just shook her head no and reached into her pocket for something. As she pulled out her phone she opened it and gave it to Marina. Marina looked at the screen, there was a flashing red light indicating a missed call from the number 911, as she listened to the voicemail her hand went over her mouth. "Oh I'm so sorry, are you ok? Is there anywhere you would like to go?" She asked. The girl just continued to cry.
Marina decided to stay where she was and let the girl just cuddle up in her arms. After a few minutes she had her eyes closed, her mind had wondered off, asking many questions about this mysterious girl, when she heard said girl sniff. Then the girl moved to look up. "Thank you" She said quietly, starting to get up and leave. Marina was very surprised at first but quickly snapped out of her thoughts and called after the girl. "Now hold on a second, you just spent 2 minutes crying on me, now you're just walking away like nothing happened? That's not happening" The girl looked rather surprised. "Well I just thought I was a bother, everyone else thinks I am. I wanted to leave you alone so you could go on doing whatever it was you were doing. Sorry for interrupting you" She said, her face turning red. Marina was shocked. Remembering the voicemail, her thoughts went crazy. Her parents were just in a car accident and she's apologizing for crying?! "Look its ok, is there anywhere you need to go? My name is Marina what's yours?" Marina asked. The girl, still looking shocked, said "L-Luna, my name is Luna Ever, and no there is nowhere I need to go, after all I have nowhere to go" As she said this a tear fell down her cheek. Marina thought for a moment. "Why don't we walk together?" She said happily. Luna was taken aback, "A walk?" she asked confused. "Ya, a walk, they always cheer me up." Marina replied. Luna thought about for a second then nodded. "I think a walk would help, but there is one thing i should probably mention." She said. Marina nodded. "If you haven't noticed yet, I'm blind" Luna said waving a hand in front of her face. Marina's eyes widened. "What?! You're blind? I never would have guessed. The way you move and even where you look, it's like you can see everything". Luna laughed "Actually I don't even know what you look like." she said a small smile on her face. Marina thought about this. "And you were planning on leaving without knowing the face of the random stranger you just cried on?" Luna blushed, "Well that's not important. maybe the walk isn't such a good idea. I really must be going, Goodbye" she said.
Now Marina was determined. "If your blind, there is no way I'm letting you go anywhere alone, what if you get attacked, you are quite adorable" She said not realizing that the last part was out loud. Luna was now blushing madly, "Y-you think I'm adorable?" She asked nervously. Marinas eyes widened, "Did I say that out loud?!" She said, terrified. Luna nodded, her face still red but now she was smiling. Marinas face was also red now. "Well I, ya I, sure I said that but-" She was cut off by Luna's laughter. "It's nice to know that you think so, most people try to avoid me once they find out I'm blind" She said a little less of a smile on her face. Marina was now a bit confused, "Why would they avoid you?" Luna shrugged, her smile returned, "To much responsibility I guess" She said. Marina's determination turned into anger, "How could someone just leave you alone even if they know you're blind, like really, what if you fall down some stairs or got lost" Marina was now very angry. Luna was also blushing again, "Why do you care so much?" She asked. Marina looked over at her, "Why wouldn't I care, you're an adorable girl, and your telling me people avoid you just because you have a small flaw. That hardly seems fair to me" She said in a huff. Luna stood there, not knowing what to say. No one had ever been so nice to her, not even her parents. Marina started to walk towards her, when she was only a few centimetres away she stopped, then she gave Luna a hug, a big, tight warm hug. "Let's be friends" she said.
After starting there walk, Luna and Marina were now talking happily. Suddenly a question popped into Luna's head, "Hey Marina, were do you live?" She blushed, but hurriedly added "I'm not sure why i'm interested, and you don't need to answer if you don't want to." She she said, cheeks still aflame. Marina smiled, "Well I go to Solstice Academy, I live in the dorms" She said. Luna's eyes widened, "You go to the same Academy as me!" She said excitedly. Marina's eyes also widened equally as wide, "Really? What subject do you study? I do photography and creative writing" She said. Luna's smile widened, "I also do creative writing but note photography, I am in sketching" She said happily. Marina looked at Luna with a confused look, a question she had to have answered popped into her head, "Ummmm… Not to be offensive but, how do you sketch?" She asked. Luna laughed, "Well I just need to feel whatever I draw, when I feel things I build a mental image of it, they are really clear and I sketch using them" She said happily. "That's amazing" Marina exclaimed. "Have you started Creative writing yet?" She asked. "No I begin when spring break ends" Luna replied. "No way! So do I, maybe were in the same class" Marina said happily. Luna, was equally if not more exited when suddenly a realization dawned on her and her face became red as a cherry. "Ummmm… I can't believe I haven't asked you yet, but what is your last name?" Marina laughed, "Wow, can't believe I haven't told you, my name is Marina Rose" Luna gasped, "You mean THE Marina Rose, the most beautiful girl in the eleventh grade?" She said hesitantly. "Yup that's me" Marina laughed. "Wow, how did this happen?" Luna asked herself aloud. Marina just continued to giggle. "I've always wondered what you look like" Luna said out of the blue. Marina looked at her, confused. "How would you find out?" She asked. Luna's cheeks turned red again. "Well the only way I know how to see things is my head is by… touch"
They both stood there for a second, Marina was the first to speak up, "Is that all?" She asked. Luna looked at Marina's general direction, "Well yes but it's sort of, weird I guess" She said her cheeks back to being red, as usual. Marina smiled, "Ok well it doesn't matter, come here" She said happily. Luna hesitated, "Are you sure, like I said it is weird" She said nervously. Marina just continued to smile and walk towards Luna. When she was close enough, she reached out and grabbed Luna's hand, Luna flinched at the sudden touch but did not pull away. As Marina brought Lunas hand to her face Luna just stood there, I've always wondered what you look like, I wonder if you're as beautiful as I hear. She thought to herself. When Luna's hand finally reached Marinas face, the first thing she noticed was how soft her skin was. As she started to move her hands around to feel the rest of her face she had to ask some questions, "What colour is your hair. I can't really feel colour" She said smiling a bit. Marina smiled back knowing that Luna could feel the smile. "My hair is brown and my eyes are green" She said happily. Luna just continued to 'Look' at Marina. After a few more seconds of silence, Luna lowered her hands, "Thank you, I have always wondered what you looked like" She said. Marina laughed, "Am I anything liked you imagined?" She asked. Luna nodded, "Better then I imagined" She said while blushing. This comment also made Marina blush, "How about we continue are walk?" She said. Luna nodded.
As Marina started to walk away, she noticed that Luna was not following, "Ummmm… Luna?" She asked. Luna looked rather disappointed, "I don't really know where I'm going" She said sheepishly. Marina laughed, "I completely forgot, sorry" She said smiling. She started to walk towards Luna and put out her hand, "Here take my hand then" As Marina said this she gently took Lunas hand. Luna let out a small yelp from the sudden hand on hers but she quickly recovered and smiled up at the direction witch she thought was Marinas. She heard Marina laugh a little to the right and her cheeks quickly heated up. "So Luna, were do you want to go?" Marina asked. Luna thought about it for a second, "How about we just walk in the park. I love the noises, there so peaceful, the city is too noisy" She said. Maria nodded and they started to walk. Luna had completely forgotten about her parents.
Well how was that for a first chapter? I really enjoyed writing it and I really like the story to.
Anyway I hope you guys enjoyed it as much as I did and I hope you support it as much as my other story. Don't forget to leave a comment, because you never do… but anyway good bad I don't care, and see you in the next chapter XD