Hay. This is the first poem/ songy thing I've written so please review so I have more confidence to write another one.
Don't you want me?
Don't you need me?
Don't you care?
I know that I have a sad story to tell.
I know that I need somebody to tell.
But the person I was gonna speak to has gone.
Left my life.
Left my World forever…
Doesn't she want me?
Doesn't she need me?
Doesn't she care?
I'm just there
A piece of the ground that she walks on.
A piece that she walks all over.
I guess I'm alone in this big wide world.
With no one to love and no one to care.
Don't I want her?
Don't I need her?
Don't I care?
I will have to get by
Knowing that there's no body here for me.
My life is in a mess
I am in a mess.
Why didn't I stop her?
I really need her
I care about her
But she's gone.
Thank you for reading this. I would like a bit of advise...
ThAnKs 0-o