Heyy! Thanks for clicking on the story! This is my first fanfic, so dont judge me to hard! Please tell me how I can make my writting better, because that is the main reason I'm doiong this. Also, PLEASE tell me if you like this and if you want me to post more chapters of it(I'm going to be posting both parts of Patty`s P.O.V at the same time). I'm doing one of each of their POV's.
I'll shut up now. Thanks. :3
Oh yeah...another thing... I'm not good at writing in first person, so I will only be writing in 3rd person. I also want to work on that.
Patty's POV part 1!
"Hey Sis! Where are we goin? Will there be a giraffe? I`ll break it`s friggin` neck if there is one..." yelled Patty
"We are going to the grocery store" Liz said calmly, despite the fact she was getting a little bit irritated. "What is your deal with giraffes any way?"
"I dunno"
At the Store...
"Kid, Patty! I'm going to go get some fruit and stuff. Wanna come?" asked Liz.
"No thank you, Liz. I'm going to go look at cakes and such while we are here." replied Kid
"Alright then. How about you, Patty?"
"Nope. I'm gonna go look for a giraffe. I'll bring one back if I see one!"
"Alright." sighed Liz.
Looking for giraffes...Patty style...
Patty was hiding behind some bags of dog food, searching for the evil giraffes.
"Psst"
"Hmm...What was that?" said an innocent bystander.
"Over here." Patty whispered.
"Uhhhh...who's there?" said the guy as he walked over to Patty.
"I am!" Patty yelled as she jumped out of her hiding spot, completly giving it away.
The guy jumped and said "Whaddya want?"
"Have you seen any giraffes?"
"Uhhh...yea. At the zoo. It's a couple blocks aw-"
"Not at the zoo, dummy. here!" said Patty as she interrupted the guy.
"Not yet. Why?"
"Will you help me look for them? I think they are evil..." Patty said.
"Dude...i think they are evil too! Hell yeah, I'll help ya look!"
"Coolio! What's your name? I'm Patty!"
"Rocky."
"Alrighty Rocky. Let's roll." Patty said, walking off in a direction.
"Wait. Lemme ask...how, and why, did you hide in such a small space?" he asked, studying her hiding spot. "Giraffes don't eat dog food."
"Well, I just moved the dog food around. I know they don't eat dog food dummy. I hid there because I'm sure giraffes have dogs as pets. So, they would need to buy some dog food. Riiiiight?"
"True, true."
"OOH! I bet we could ask Liz and Kid if they've seen any giraffes around here!" Squealed Patty
"I don't know who those people are, but okayyyy!" said Rocky as he was being pulled to wherever Kid and Liz where at.
At the Veggie place...
"Liz! Liz!" cried Patty finally finding Liz.
"No patty, I haven't seen any giraffes. Who's your friend?" said Liz, without looking up from the tomatoes she was buying.
"Thanks Liz! My new friend is Rocky!" yelled Patty as she was running off to go find Kid.
At the Bakery...
"Kidkidkidkidkid! Hey Kiiiiiiiiiiiiid!" yelled Patty.
"Kid! We have a question to ask you!" Yelled Rocky. "Holy Shit...That's Lord Death's son!"
"Yup! He's my meister!"
"Patty, I'm very busy right now. Please go look for giraffes elsewhere. If I see a giraffe, I promise I'll tell you. Patty's gullible friend...May I ask your name?" said Kid, not looking up from a perfectly symmetrical cake.
"I-I'm Rocky..."
"Alright. Patty, you and Rocky both are idiots."
"Okie-Dokie Kid. Bye! Have fun with your cakes!" yelled Patty as she ran off, with Rocky, who was still stunned at seeing Death the Kid.
"Mmmm-Hmmm. Okay, yeah." mumbled kid, hardly paying any attention to Patty's giraffe dilema.