It was a nice bright sunny day. Our mother Trisha Elric sent my twin brother Edward and my younger brother Alphonse to go pick some vegetables from the garden. I Elizabeth Elricwas helping mom cook. Then it happened our mother collapsed and Edward and Alphonse found her lying on the ground unconchance and i kneeling next to her trying to wake her up. So the first thing they thought to do was to run get granny Pinako leaving me still kneeling next to our mom. When granny Pinako get there they get our mother into bed and a doctor was checking on her.
I sat next edward crying and al on the other side with his face looking at the ground. after a wile granny pinako told us that our mother wanted to talk to us. So Ed, Al, and i went in we talked toour mother firt she talked to al and then she talked to me and ed telling us to take care of al and not to fight with each other. After that pinako told us to leave the room an let her rest. after a few hours our mother died.
please comment i might not cuntinue this was my first story