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Ashes to Ashes Series 2: if Alex didn't go to the operation and waited in her flat…
Doing the right thing or not?
"Shall I go, I can't just stay here all, I have to stop him, and I have to get home to molly. Maybe if Gene doesn't see me I might be able to go and come back. That man makes me so angry, doesn't help that I have fallen for him and I can't stop myself from thinking about him, even after yesterday when he suspended me I couldn't help but think what he would be like to sleep with, to wake up in his big, strong arms and know that nothing can harm me. But that will never happened now that he thinks I'm corrupted over a stupid tape, I didn't even mean anything that I said on there anyway, if only he would listen and believe me!, maybe doing the right thing isn't a good idea anymore"
1 hour before the operation.
"Right, you lot, I want everyone to be on their game, no one makes a mistake got it. I want you all to look out for drake an 'all if you see her arrest her and bring her back gobby bony arse back to the station where she will have a lovely little chat with the gene genie, right now mush I want this done and dusted before tea-time"
Gene watches as everyone leaves to get into their positions, while on his own he thinks about Alex and how she could do this to him, if only she knew how much she meant to him.
Why bolls, why would ya do this to me, I've done everything for you and throw it all back in my face, I really thought that you and I were getting somewhere, what a fucking mistake that was. Maybe just maybe if I talk to her now she might tell me the truth…or just another pact of lies. From the future my arse is she from the bloody future, just shows how much of a fruitcake you really are drake.
" one last chance to tell me the truth , if not I'll just tell her to piss off from where she came from" Gene finishes his whisky, grabs his coat and gun, and walks out of the station to drakes flat, to give her one more chance to explain.
For god-sake can't believe I'm doing this, shouldn't even be here, right bolls you have one more chance to just tell me the truth, bloody hell can't be that hard for a bird to tell the truth can it? Come on open the bloody door, I gotta get going to catch these bastards before it's too late… maybe I should come back after.
Turning his back to her door, he walks down the hallway and to the steps when he hears her voice "Gene?"
Standing there, I look up at the wall, just hearing her voice makes me go bloody weak at the knees. God this woman has a bigger effect on me than I realised.
"Guv what are you doing here, you're supposed to me catching those bent bastards called coppers, or have you come to kill me like you said you would!" please don't tell me you meant what you said
The only reply Alex got was the sound of a sigh…
Bloody hell! She didn't think I actually meant it. Bolls I wouldn't touch one hair on your head luv.
Gene turned around to face Alex "You actually think I would shoot you, I didn't mean it Alex, how many times have I saved your arse bolls, loads of times, I have been scared shit of the feeling of you dying"
Looking right into her eyes, I saw the sadness in her eyes, the upset that I had caused, Christ I'm such a dick
" You know, when I heard that tape, I felt my heart sink to the floor like it had been crushed on and thrown back in my face, you know I had Chris betraying me, But not you bolls, you and me, were unbreakable, I came to give you one last chance to tell me the truth, you either tell me and we can talk about this later or you can lie and I'll get your transferred" Bloody hell Bolly why don't you just tell me the truth, that's all I want, doesn't help that you giving me an hard on since your bare faced and only got a towel on!
Looking at Gene, made me realise what I have chucked away, oh gene you mean so much to me, maybe I am never going to get home. Think Alex Think, do you tell him the truth again or just make up some lies to get back on track with him…
"You said that I never speak to my daughter gene" here come the lies. "I can't see her Gene, my ... My daughter died 6 years ago, that's why I can't bloody see her Gene because she's DEAD!" screaming at him from the top of my lungs, I can see him watching my every move, but in his eyes I can see guilt, knowing that what he said yesterday was wrong. "Now do you see why I can't contact her" Don't cry Alex, now is not the time to start crying. "As for the tape, okay I said some things about you, but if you listened to it a bit more you would come to the positive things, I'm sorry for what I said on the tape, but you're in the wrong Gene and you know you are"
SHIT!, what have I done, oh bloody hell don't start crying, think Genie boy think, maybe I should come back after and talk to her alone instead of in the corridor…
Radio comes into life "Guv? Guv, were are ya, were waiting 'ere"
"I'm coming, look urm I'll urm come back later, and we can talk this over and start fresh" walking up to Alex gene gives her a hug and whispers softly in her ear. "I'm sorry" and with that he's gone…
That's chapter 1 done, the next chapter will be longer I promise x, please review: D