Hello everyone! This is my first story, Chao Legends, so no hating please! :) Please review and tell if I need to work on something; I would reeeeeeally appreciate it. So here's chapter 1 of Chao Legends. Enjoy!
A long time ago there was a kingdom. No humans, no mobians, just little creatures called chao. These chao came in many different varieties such as different colors, different shapes, and different body parts such as arms or legs. These chao were a peaceful folk who helped one another, played games, and rarely fought. But one day a chao egg was hatched. This chao's parents were normal two-tone chao but their offspring looked nothing like this. His fur was pure black with red highlights but his most striking feature was his emotion ball was spiked. The parents thought it was some sort of disease so they took him to the doctor immediately. The doctor had never seen anything like it. He didn't know what to think of it. He contacted the king, a shiny yellow chao with a golden halo and lion parts. He visited the family and studied the chao. After careful consideration he decided to banish the family and leave them to be outcasts so the pure bloodline of the empire wouldn't be damaged. So they packed their things and left to find a new home in the forest. The king then decided to call the so-called disease "dark corruption" and he called the chao who had it the "dark chao". To this day no one knows how the chao became a dark chao, but they do know one thing, hes still out there, waiting.
So whadya think?Yes, I know its a little short compared to other chapters but this is just so you can know the backstory and not be confused the entire time and wanna rip your hair out! Anyway, I promise you I will have a new chapter up and running by tomorrow where you see the what the chao's life is like. (still haven't thought of names for any of em yet :/). Hope you liked it! Oh and please please please review, it would mean a lot to me!