Hi guys this is my first story would really appreciate some feedback. Its about Rose turning into a season wolf and the pressure to protect Lissa, stop her race from been extinct and Dimitri.
Chapter 1:
Hi my name is Rosemarie Hathaway but I advice you not to call me. Just call me a badass, awesome or Rose, I don't mind.
Something BIG is happening to me I turning in to a season wolf; not the ones who turn in the full moon but the cool ones who transform any time and day and any mood. Abe says that he turned days after his 18th, I hope a turn after my 18th so I can have a huge party before I get into my long and very important career which I will not give up for the world becoming Lissa guardian; yeah baby I'm going to be her guardian.
27th August thats my birthday, which means I might turn after or before that, which is nail biting. Here is the story about my unexpected change, because I'm Lissa's shadow kissed I have some very wicked talents such as: reading auras which can give you a really bad headache, reading minds and sensing danger when around her. However when I met my dad for the first time I noticed that he was not a morio it took me a couple of days to find out that his a wolf. When I saw how he transformed right in front of me I was amazed then I started having this really weird wanting feeling that I wanted and needed to be near him at all times; which was weird since I've only known him for 5 months but when he sat down and told me about some legend that ran in his family I realized that he was describing what i'd been feeling. I told him everything how i was always feeling very hot and had the desire to go out in to the woods behind the academy and since my mum is the boss I am allowed to go out couple times a day.
He is not just any wolf he is season wolf which means that he only changes based on the time of the year, since he doesn't transform in the summer he came to visit me. apparently these types of wolf are very rare which is why no morio or damphire have heard of it; they originate from Turkey and the genes can only be passed on by royal blood, that's right Rose Hathaway is from a royal wolf line. Anyway, since my old man is from sunny Turkey and I'm his first sibling I got the wolfs DNA from the moment i was born. I'm at an advantage because my mum is one of the strongest guardians alive, I have super cool powers and my dad is the pack leader of his royal Mazur family; this means that I will be even stronger than I'm now and more powerful.
Back to reality: Lissa is snoring and fast asleep when I checked her dorm on my way out to the woods for my morning run, don't you just love the amazing cool summer breeze? While on my fresh run I think about my transformation how my life is going to change; millions of thoughts are going through my mind, will it hurt, how long does it take, what will Adrian think when I tell him will he think I'm a freak? I know its bad that I haven't told my best friend after Lissa, I just couldn't I felt scared and I have butterflies in my stomach I mean I've got a small crush but his going out Mia; but he always calls me Lil'damphir what will his next nickname be Lil'dog,Ahh. I was so deep in y thoughts I didn't realize I had company this is gonna be fun.
Finally some action as I turn into the corner of the tree I hear it coming, how stupid can't it feel me, strange might be a new strigio. As it zooms pass I bend down my knee and jump as hard as I can on its back riding on its back like a horse, what the hell! This is no strigio as the furry looking thing throws me hard on the ground I can feel him looking at me. I squeeze myself in his mind WOW! All the colours, all the thoughts, thoughts of me, of him in trouble for hurting the princess Mazur. All the recognition and his life information hit my head inside so hard I start screaming because it hurts like bitch.
This ginger looking wolf must be a summer seasoned, he is called Mason from the Ashford bloodlines and he is here to talk about something very urgent and he is looking for my dad.
After absorbing so much necessary and unnecessary information I'm able to stand up. Looking straight at Mason's eyes I can see that we are going to get along like fish and water (I know its weird). He looks petrified, "I'm good, its ok calm down" I say patting of the dirt on my clothes. This is awkward what shall I do? "um I know why your here, I now where Abe is", all this time he stood still taking in what i say and with "what the hell" surprise on his cute ginger furry face. After what feels like 5 straight minutes this is getting us nowhere, "okay cutie are we just gonna stay here and have a starring competition, why you here?". I feel this buzzing sound in my head ohh his using the weird mind communication thingy."My name is Mason princess, I've been sent by prince Ashford to deliver an urgent news to your father"ok now my turn,"I know all this, just call me Rose cut out the royal crap Mase, that's what Eddie calls you, Did i mention I can read your mind so don't even think of calling me a 'stuck up royal trash'". Ha got ya.
Ok so what you think? Should i carry on? Please review and give feedback, thank you!