Hello everyone! I like reading Harry Potter so I decided I would start writing a fanfic, this is the first one I've written so don't expect it to be a work of art ok? Just tell me what I'm doing wrong and help me correct it ok? Well first the disclaimer:

DISCLAIMER: I DON'T OWN HARRY POTTER AND I NEVER WILL.

Well that was easy...but boring. Anyway on with the story!

Concrete Bricks and Pathetic Losers

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It was in the small hours of the morning. Hermione slowly got out of bed and shook her bushy hair out of her eyes and looked at the clock. It was 4 a.m. and only the slight glow of the sun was visible though her curtains. She walked over to her mirror and started to brush her bushy hair. It was only now did she realise how much she had changed since she had started at Hogwarts. Her teeth were much straighter after her 4th year at Hogwarts and her skin was still quite fair though over the years she had developed a slight tan. She had grown considerably taller but was still much shorter compared to Ron or Harry. Completely lost in thought, she sat in front of her mirror brushing her hair until the sun had fully risen.

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"Hermione, come on or you'll miss the train!" Hermione's mother called.

"Yes mum, I'm coming!" she shouted back.

It was later that day and Hermione was quickly packing her bag for school. She was very excited to be going back to school for her 6th year and she couldn't wait to see Harry and Ron again. She quickly stuffed all her clothes in and neatly stacked her books on top before carefully closing the lid. She looked up and saw a picture of her with Harry and Ron, all of them smiling and waving to her.

"How could I forget." She muttered to herself. She grabbed the picture and placed it carefully on top of her books before closing the lid again.

"I'm ready! I'll be there in a moment!" she shouted out to her mother and father before starting to lug her bag down the hallway.

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Hermione quickly walked down the platform checking her watch: 10:50 it read. Oh no, I had better hurry or I' m might not get a compartment! She thought and quickened up her pace. She quickly ran through the gateway to see that the Hogwarts express waiting there for her. She smiled at the sight of it and then ran off with her luggage to find a compartment.

After a short walk down the carriages, she found an empty compartment. She sat down exhausted and waited for her friends. She heard the thud of the carriage door opening and she sat up to look through the window. Draco Malfoy was standing there looking at her in disgust.

"Hello Mudblood, where's Potty and Weasel? Have they abandoned you? Ha, bet you they have, I don't know why anyone would hang out with you Granger." Draco said to her.

"No they haven't abandoned me...they're just late again. Talking about people abandoning each other, what ever happened to your dull friends Crabbe and Goyle? Suppose they've abandoned you, I don't see why anyone would hang out with a snotty brat, even concrete bricks like Crabbe and Goyle would know better." Hermione retaliated.

Draco put on a look of pure disgust and marched off down the corridor. Hermione thought to herself, Serves him right the silly fool, when there was a knock at the compartment door. She looked up ready to tell Malfoy off again when she realised it was Ron and Harry looking at her.

"Hey! I was wondering when you'd be here, I've been waiting for a while!" Hermione said to them as they sat down.

"Oh, well the luggage we had was a bit.... over packed and it kinda blew up as we were putting it in the luggage area..." Ron muttered to his hands.

Hermione resisted the temptation to giggle as she imagined Harry and Ron walking up to the luggage area and all of a sudden their prized possessions were everywhere and Pigwidgeon zooming happily around their heads as they quickly packed it all up.

"Anyway, we saw Draco marching down the hallway looking kid of offended. What happened?" asked Harry.

"Well, he barged into the compartment and we had an argument and I made out that he was a pathetic loser." Hermione replied.

"Well Hermione, you've changed a lot. Before you wouldn't have done that, would she Ron? Ron?"

They both looked over to Ron and found him fighting off Pigwidgeon as Pig flapped around his head.

"Stupid...Pig...get...off!" he shouted as he flailed his arms everywhere trying to beat Pig away.

Harry and Hermione both laughed as the Hogwarts express started on its way to Hogwarts and their 6th year.

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Hello again! Did you like it? Plz review. I need to find out if it's good or not!

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