Before starting I'm going to try explaining you the structure of my stories
This is thinking
-This is talking
-This is talking. This is thinking
See? When it has the dash (-) It means that a character is talking
-This is talking.Now I'm thinking that your butt is really nice :3
See? When a character stops talking it is followed with a point., the points means a transition between X character talking to POV's character's thinking
Ex:
KuraiSora's POV
Conversation between You and me
-Why am I reading this? You don't like this well I hope a lag tentacles monster rape you
I hope you understand because I didn't
A Raven of Storms and Fire Chapter 1: Lurking Darkness
-Hey Rave. My fiancée Seris said looking really happy for some reason; we're at the headquarters of the Crow Mercenarios, located on the borderline between Altera and Kingdom of Velder, I'm Raven, leader of the crow mercenaries, the Crow Mercenaries are one of the main knight guilds in Velder alongside with the Red Knights, but unlike them, we have the habit of working for commissions not only from nobles, but also the commoners, right now we're investigating about an attack made by Nasods in a town near Feita.
-Raaaveee, Can you hear me~? Seris seems to be somewhat hasty; maybe I should stop thinking for a second a listen to her.
-Is everything alright? I said while waiting for something ridiculous like the last time when she made a fucking catapult to throw pigs so I would have to sing because I promise her that I would sing if pigs could fly.
-I just wanted to ask something REALLY important. Well I didn't see that coming.
-And that would be?
-Why did you leave me? What? What's she talking about? Wait, h-her e-eyes are bleeding, the world… The world is fading in darkness.
-What? Seris what are you talking about? WHAT IS GOING ON?! AaAARgh Why does my left arm hurt?
-You leave me, you leave me dying, why you haven't protected me?, you promise to stay with me forever, Will you leave the Death to hold us apart? Come with me Raven, Come here
Is getting closer, she… No, THAT's NOT Seris… AAARGH! MY ARM UUUGH… My arm… where's my fucking arm?! AAAAGHH GOD! I… I can't…. What happened to my arm?
-Raven, I love you. Is getting closer, I can't move, the world is fading into darkness…
And the darkness is coming closer
Raven… Raven… Raven, Raven, Raven RavenRavenRavenRaven. Stop, please STOP!, GAAGH UGH… Everything is… is… I can't see? Or is that…
Everything is dark now?
No… I can still see THAT, That's NOT Seris, her Eyes are hollows, blood coming out of the holes where her eyes should be, there's blood coming out of her mouth, her arms are bleeding too, and her hair is stained with blood.
-RavenRavenRavenRavenRavenRavenRavenRavenRaven, Someone… anyone… please…help… someone please
-HELP ME! UAAAAGGHHH I can feel a horrible pain in my chest is like a giant blade just break through me, I can't breathe. Why?
-I'll be waiting for you Raven, we will meet soon, Love you.
Ugh… I woke up in my bed, sweating, It was a nightmare, recently I have been having this nightmare, they are so… real, I have even asked myself if they are nightmares or not?
I can hear knocking on the door, better get out of bed and do as nothing happened, I can't let anyone know about this, the last thing I want is them worrying about me, I don't want to be a hindrance, and maybe I deserve this for what have I done.
-I'm coming.
When I get out I see Chung in the door wearing the shirt and shorts he wears when he sleeps.
-Raven breakfast is ready; Rena wants everyone to be ready early because today we're going to Altera Core. He looks tired, maybe Rena woke him up.
-Alright, I'll be down in a Sec. I close the door and started dressing up, I'm wearing my Weapon Taker uniform, Weapon Taker is the title that was given to me when I started grabbing my strong enemies' weapons and added them to my Nasod Arm, somehow the arm was able to ''merge'' the weapons, becoming stronger… but unstable.
After dressing up I go down so I can have breakfast and meet up with Elsword the Sword Knight, Aisha the Elemental Master, Rena the Grand Archer, and Chung the Deadly Chaser, they all have really nice titles thanks to their achievements in battle, anyway that's not important right now, what IS important is the fact that…
-What's going on? Why are Elsword and aisha not fighting? DID SOMEONE DIE? This can't be good.
-Cool down Raven, I was REALLY shocked too, but then Rena told me that Elsword is too tired to fight and is focused on studying new spells. Chung also has his armor on.
-Why Ara and Eve haven't come down? They are always the first to wake up. Rena is always worrying for everyone, she's nice, she's sweet, she even looks like Seris…
But she is NOT Seris.
I sit down on the sofa while we're all waiting for Ara and Eve to come down so We can all have breakfast together, Rena gets REALLY pissed off when We don't eat together, and Mad Rena is something that the Maya civilization predicted to 2012.
Lastly I haven't stopped thinking about Seris, and these nightmares doesn't help me at all, Seris was nice, light-hearted, sweet, but when needed she can be really serious, centered, and really smart, Rena looks like her just in the color of the hair and eyes, but Seris was smaller and her breast were normal size.
Seris (was) (is) perfect
Seris was always worrying about me, and I'm sure she would want to move on, but something is stopping me, no matter how hard I try
Something retains me with her
-I'm sorry we're late, we got some problems dressing up he~. Finally Ara and Eve comes down so we can all fucking eat, Ara is a little clumsy girl, but when she got her Little Devil title she became more… bold? She also became more SPARTAN! And even get the liking to making pranks but that's because she spent too much time with Elsword.
Next to Ara is Eve, the queen of Nasods, the same race who puts me this thing I called ''Storm Breaker'', I didn't really trust her at first but she saved my life once when the Storm Breaker stopped working in the middle of battling Ignis, I owe her my life.
-What did take them so long? Where they Yuring? ….Why is everyone looking at me? No way… did I just speak my mind? Shit! SHIT! Say something smart... Shit! Shit! SHIIIIT!
-EEEEMH, We weren't, I… I didn't know that you thought in that way of us. Ara seems a little embarrassed for what I just FUCKING SAID, I'm sorry Ara don't get it the wrong way I wasn't thinking, I haven't slept well lastly, fuck.
-Raven… Shiiit, that's Eve and is coming near me with a really piss off face… And she was supposed to have no emotions…
-ALL HAIL THE YURI GODDESEEEESSSALKSJLFJAGLNANH… What? Seems like Elword is not tired anymore…
-Mentor Raven Please tell me about the YURI vision you just got about Ara and Eve. He looks like a child waiting for his father to tell him a sleep story.
-No, don't get me the wrong way, I haven't slept well lastly and I'm telling things before thinking, I hope you could forgive me Ara and Eve.
-Apologize acknowledged, get some sleep and that this doesn't happen again. She went to her spot and started eating.
-There's nothing to worry about, I know It wasn't your intention, but why haven't you slept well lastly Raven-kun? Ara seems to be worry about me, exactly what I DON'T wanted
-Don't Worry about me, let's eat breakfast and let's go to the Altera Core.
Everyone goes to their spot and started eating, Ara and Rena seems to be a worried about me, but right now We all need to focus on our mission.
Beat the crap out of the Nasod King