Dark Blossom Year

by Sazuna

The previous Hokage Naruto was killed. Now his Shadow is supposed to take over. But for how long will that be? And will he succeed? Or will he fail? He has one year to prove his worth. How did it go out? And what do you think how this story would turn out? I would be interested in your opinion!

1. My own Completion

My own Completion

Disclaimer:

Don't own anything! All rights on this manga and all it's Characters belong to Masashi Kishimoto

This is my second try at writing and publishing a story so I'd appreciate constructive criticsm.

Some explanations:

Why does it say "This is my second try at writing and publishing a story. "Time" was my second story written by me. Now this is the first chapter of this story. And even has a new name. I like it. I hope you do too. ^^ There will be more than one chapter now too! You will not find the original "Time"-story anymore. In case you were hoping to find it on my my site. I took it down. And it disappeared into my private archives on my comp^^

In case you are interested here is how I made the story.

General Corrections:

Most of the original story layout was left untouched. I made changes to the font is how it is called in english? I forgot to put it in kursiv like all of my storys are by now before uploading... Ups... Also grammar and spelling mistakes!

Content:

I overworked the content by adding some things that are relevant because now this is a multiple chapter story so now this is bigger than the chapter was originally! I also had to change some stuff that you don't have to know about^^

One last thing. I wrote this at the start of Naruto Rasengan or whatever the Anime series was called. And where the Manga was at the point where I first wrote this!

Yeah that's it I hope I didn't bore you TOO MUCH!

Although the title might imply/implied it, it doesn't have anything to do with Kurumi (incredibly!#+don'teatmeforthat)! Find out yourself for a change maybe?

Too bad I couldn't fulfill your expectations

That is all I am thinking about now

I wished so much that I would be able to

become someone the people would love

and see me as your true successor

I won't find out anymore

Today is your death-date

I tell myself while watching from outside

Or that you watch tell me that

Watching from somewhere

You knew long ago already

The pink-haired girl,

my Right Hand advised me to make a ceremony out of it

You were slayn by my hands and then I was appointed as your successor

My reign lasted exactly one year

I never achieved anything

The people still hate and despise me

The only thing keeping me in this position was your death-wish

I had hoped you would be proud of me

Maybe you are proud of me now

I was killed to avenge your death by the one you entrusted me to

My death was in pink

I hated that colour

The only one I saw suitable for me was black

The colour of death

There is a saying:

From the earth we come and to the earth we will return

Now I understand

It all ends where it began

A neverending circle

There will always be an ending to every story

While one leaves this place another one appears to fill in it's place

I hope she will make a better Hokage than I was

I can't hope of you to be proud of me

I didn't deserve it and never will

Time doesn't wait for anyone

It just keeps flowing

It brings change

Not for me though

I was still hated no matter what I did

Time can be so cruel

knowing that each and every second of your life

Is one that isn't to be there

A cut and severed string of Time

It should never exist and it's for the best that exactly now my life ends

365 days, not more

I failed everyone

I could not be light, could not be shadow

I tried so hard to complete my goals

To find out what I am here for

All this Time I had asked myself why I had so much of it

I expected to die in days, hours, minutes...

exactly one year is an interesting amount

But this isn't important anymore

There will be noone mourning for me

The only one who would love a person as bad as me is only you

That's why I had to die today

Exactly today and only today

Nothing will be left of me

So that people will forget me

Can forget my shadow

Pretend that this year was never there

My Right Hand will take over my place as my successor

Then maybe taken over by someone else

Or more like your successor

The one who should've been from the start

I can only hope Time will heal the wounds I inflicted...

The yearly memorial tells me

Because I can not do it

I am incomplete

I know it

Please leave a review, I'd appreciate it for my future work.

A/N: My second work and I still like it! It needed a few minor corrections and more content. But all in all it was still ok. Nice! And what comes next will be too.