Okay so this is my first fic and I'm kind of excited to see how it turns out. Bella will have a different appearance and personality in this story and in the others if I makes anymore. I hate how weak Bella was in twilight. It almost made me puke. I take constructive criticism well so tell me what you think of my story as it progresses. I'll be honest and say that I don't have the most brilliant ideas when it comes to writing and when I do its hard to put it on paper but hey, a girl's gotta try right? Right? No answer? Okay.
Disclaimer: I don't own the twilight characters [even though I wouldn't mind owning Jasper ;) heh] but I damn sure own the story and characters I might add in it!
Chapter 1: Darkness and confusion
Beeeep. Beeep. Beeep. The stupid alarm clock shrieked. "Shut up!" I yelled, turning and slamming the alarm clock with my eyes closed until it stopped. Thank god. With a heavy sigh I sat up and got out of bed to take care of my hygiene in the bathroom. As I walked out I had a creepy feeling that I was being watched, but the feeling left as soon as it came. Weird. Ignore it I thought. Which I found out later was the worst mistake I ever made. I put on my jogging gear (Incase if you haven't noticed I like to be fit) and grabbed a knife-like weapon Charlie gave me last year for my 16th birthday. I can't explain it but every time I have it I feel complete. Powerful…
He told me it was a family heirloom and should be kept a secret. His eyes were intense so he was obviously serious so I promised I wouldn't tell. The weapon was as a reddish orange that reminds me of fire. It was kind of heavy and obviously old. I loved it.
I put it in my sock and put my jogging pants over it like I do every morning. I ran downstairs and noticed that Charlie isn't here. I shrugged, grabbed a granola bar and went outside. As I as jogging I had another creepy feeling that I was being watched. Again! Well. I thought with a sigh. I can't ignore it this time. I slowed my jogging to a walk pretending to be out of breath so what ever it is, which is most likely human wont know that I knew I was being followed. I pretended to tie my shoe and I feel the coldness of my weapon in my sock.
I heard footsteps behind my and I hurried to try to get the knife out of my sock but wasn't fast enough as the person grabbed be by the neck, dragging me somewhere. I tried to fight but it was useless and I couldn't breathe. Don't give up! I heard a voice in my head that didn't sound like me at all. Right now really isn't the time to turn crazy. Fight back dummy! The voice said again. What the hell do you think I'm doing now I thought back to the voice. I kept struggling but my body is now weak and my vision is getting dimmer each second. Then the hand let go of my neck and I was thrown to the ground gasping desperately for breathe. I felt a sting on my neck and it felt like my neck was on fire. I screamed, clawing my neck, and suddenly my hands were yanked away, then everything went dark…
Body shaking and teeth chattering from the cold I opened or at least I think I did. Its dark and I can't see anything. Where the hell am I? I thought frantically. The last thing I remembered was fire. My neck! I moved to touch my neck only to find out I can't move a muscle. I was chained to something and it hurts like hell. Panic comes to surface but I don't allow myself to scream. It would be useless. Think Bella Think. What else to you remember? ..Voice…. Yes the voice. I know the voice wasn't me. It had to be someone else. But who? And how it communicate with me that way? Should I try to see if its still there? Are you there? I ask the voice. Help me! Please! No response. Okay now I feel stupid. I don't know what to do. I can't find a way out. It's freezing cold, I can't see anything, and I can't move a muscle. Then I remember the kidnapper. Who was this person? Was it a male or female… hmm... Male I decided. The grip on my neck was far too strong. What does he want from me? It's not like I have any enemies or anything. What about Charlie? Oh god, Charlie! He must be worried sick. How long have I been here? Too many questions yet no answer. Man, I swear I'm going to go crazy in here! During my mental rambling I didn't hear the footsteps getting closer making their way to where ever the hell I was. "About time you woke up" a deep male voice says. Hah! I was right! 2 points for Bella! Okay now so isn't the time for this. I'm scared shitless. I moved my head but I still couldn't see anything. "Who the hell are you?" I shrieked. "What do you want from me?" The man chuckled darkly and I started shaking more than I already was, but this time it wasn't from the cold. "I want you dead" he said "But there's nothing wrong with having some fun first" he chuckled again and I felt my blood run cold.
Okay so that's the end of this chapter. I hoped you enjoyed it. Tell me what you think so far=) until next time.