A/N: Hello everyone! This is my first FMP fic. (Well not really… This is the revised version, which is Much understandable. Before My writing was critiqued because it was very difficult to comprehend, not because the vocabulary was difficult but, My writing style was horrible. (looking back I think it's funny)

Anyway, This is Steel Hearts, I have been writing this for about two years now (Trial and error XD). If you're an avid visitor of the FMP forums or blissful ignorance, you might have seen me there. This is my first time Posting some of my work in this website.

Right now there are Seven parts to my series. This is the first part to it. So please enjoy and leave your constructive critism :D

Full metal panic
"Steel Hearts"

Jungle?

It starts by seeing a long haired boy in a Digital BDU chasing something. He was after a man in Mithril uniform. He caught up to him and pulled out a silver revolver with beautiful engravings. the man shouted "you Damn bastards wont die" and pointed his sniper rifle at him and the view looks up to the sky and a shot is heard

Jendai High School

Kaname and Sousuke arguing. Everyone was staring at them. They were arguing about another petty thing that Sousuke literally blew up to proportion. Shinji said "There they go again fighting for no reason" Tessa stopped them when she said "the teacher is coming." everybody sat down.

The teacher said, "good morning class. I have to take roll call so sound off, ok."

During roll call there was a young man running through the hallway. He wasn't wearing a Jendai High School Uniform. He ran into the classroom, he trips on the door rail and falls

He yelled " ouch. "
everybody was laughing except for Sousuke who kept a straight face. Kaname was wondering who the hell is this guy. He stood up and gave the teacher a piece of paper.

The teacher turned to the class and said" seems like we have a new addition to the class David why won't you present you're self to the class."

He replied "Thank you Ma'am" He said, "Hello everybody my name is David Miamoto but you can call me David. I am 16 years old and I came from the US to study here."

Kaname thought "this guy looks familiar Eh… maybe its nothing."

So miss Kagurazaka asked him "why aren't you in uniform." he looked at himself and laughed.

He said, "Sorry I didn't have the time to buy one." She replied, "ok just be sure to buy it this week. You can sit down any where you like."

David sat down right next to shinji and Sousuke.

Jendai High School (Lunch Time)

Tessa was outside the room using her Cell Phone that was given to her by Mithril
the bell rang and it was lunchtime. Mizuki said suddenly "do you know him? Kaname"

"Who" said Kaname.

Mizuki replied "the new guy, David."

"No... He looks familiar though"

Mizuki said, "He looks cute. .." She bit her lower lip and stared at David

Kaname and Kyouko giggled and smiled

Tessa called Kaname and said, "can I speak to you privately."

"Sure…"

They walked out to the hallway

"I am sorry for telling you this but seems like there putting new people in to guard you there might be a chance that Sousuke would be replaced." Tessa said

Kaname said in surprise "replaced?"

"yeah… they said they're sending 3 new people in and I have to leave by next month."

Kaname exclaimed "cant you do anything."

She replied, "I'm sorry I tried but it was direct orders from the top."

Sousuke came out and interrupted them "anything wrong?" he asked

They both replied "nothings wrong".

When Kaname walked in David was staring at her. She caught him and he suddenly turned and looked out as if he wasn't staring.

Kaname said quietly "that guy is creeping me out."

Jendai High School After School

Kyouko came up to Kaname and Tessa and asked if they were still going to the mall with Her and Mizuki. They said yeah "sure."

"Alright! It's girls night out then!"

Sousuke heard her and came up to her and said "your going to the mall?"

"Hmm…", said Kaname. Then she finally realized what Sousuke asked then she said yeah. "You want to go with us," she said.

Mizuki interrupted "uh-uh no way where going to bring him along. Besides its all
girls night out and I don't want him to do what he did last time on our 'fake date' remember."

Sousuke looked down.

He said "its alright If you guys don't want me there." He added saying under his breath "I can still do my job with out being seen."

They all said "what?"

He turned red and said "nothing, nothing just thinking out loud."

Mizuki said, "That guy gets weirder and weirder everyday what a loser."

Kaname and Tessa suddenly looked at her like they where about to kill her.

She said "what? What I say"

Mall strip and Street

Later They were walking and Kaname said
"wow I cant believe souses not following us."

Tessa said, "I feel worried."

Kaname replied "don't worry has probably watching from afar and plus there's four of us what could possibly happen."

They noticed the cup mascot from Quizway inside it was Sousuke.

Mizuki said "what a loser" and they all laughed.

They didn't know that Sousuke was inside. He is worried that his mobility is limited. So he took of the suit in the alley cautiously followed them. They turned the corner and Sousuke followed. Then they went in a store. Sousuke stopped and stared. It's been a lingerie store he couldn't get in because he would be branded as a pervert. So he went to the other side of the street and waited there. Exactly when a man stole a lady's purse. Being Sousuke a hero, he went after the guy. While Sousuke was chasing after the crook. The girls all went down a small empty street.

Mizuki said it's a "short cut."

Kyouko and Tessa were uneasy.

Then someone shouted, "Hey baby".

They looked up and saw an ugly looking guy on a makeshift chair.

He said "hey baby wanna have some fun." and making wooing noises

Kaname was pissed. She said, "You better shut the hell up before I kick your ass."

The guy said. "Man… I like them frisky."

then 8 thugs came out of no where with chains, bats, and knives.

The guy who was sitting said the "blue haired one is mine."

they all replied, "yes boss."

and they just rushed and attacked the girls. Tessa screams and Sousuke feels discomfort feeling that he forgot something. He was out of breath because he had to run back and
forth to get the purse back to the owner. So he starts running and looking for the girls. Kaname was putting up a fight until she was pinned down. Tessa and the
others were being held and harassed.

The boss went up to Kaname and said, " Kick my ass? Ha" and put his hand in her skirt.

Before he could reach anything a suitcase and a plastic bag filled with clothes flew and hits the guy in the face.

Kaname said, " thank god its Sousuke."

The girls notice a man. This guy was fighting bravely. He took out the 1st guy with a swift kick to the head. The second guy he grabbed by the arm and used him as a
weapon by smashing him to the 3rd and 4th guy. The 1st guy stood back up and he kicked him in the crotch. Then the man picked up a 2x4 and just broke it over the 5th and sixth
guy. The other 2 members panicked and ran away.

Tessa said to her self those "movements they look familiar." she had a flashback of her brother. And said " Leonard…"

Then the boss stood back up and pulled out a knife. He attacked. He tried to counter it but got him in the arm.

He said to himself "damn it I can't do it anymore."

So the guy was going for another shot. In defense he kicked the suitcase and trip the boss. He stood up and kicked the guy in the face.

He said, "You should stop and go harass other guys that look like you."

He helped Tessa up and asked her "are you ok."

She replied, "I'm fine."

Kyouko and Mizuki helped Kaname up.

Mizuki said, "hey wait a minute you're the new guy".

He laughed and said, "Yeah I'm the new guy."

Kaname gave him along stare. David said, "uh… what are you looking
at"(in a calm tone).

Then Kaname said "did you go to P.S 247 when you were younger."

David was silent for a few seconds and then he smiled and replied "Yes…"

Kaname exclaimed "I knew it you looked kinda familiar we were in the same class together back in the states."

He asked "How did you know?"

She said that "how goofy you were and the facial expression you had every time you where embarrassed and the laugh. I use to make fun of you because of that."

"Your mom said don't make fun of me" David said he smiled. "Ill be honest I knew it was you all along."

Kaname said, "Why didn't you say anything."

He replied "I was embarrassed to talk to you because I haven't seen
you in years."

She asked, "Why did you cut your hair?"

He laughed and said, "It got in the way."

David told "Kyouko and Mizuki to call for the cops to pick up this scum bags well get Kaname help" and he smiled at them. They went off looking for the nearest guard station.

Then out of no where Sousuke pops out with his glock and pointed it at the back of David's head.

David said "easy there."

Sousuke approached David

David mumbled " damn, Mithril always on the job".

Sousuke said, "Kaname are you alright."

she replied, "Sousuke I'm alright put the gun down."

David said, "Put the 26 down I'm not the one who was hurting them."

Kaname stood up and tried walking. But she fell because her ankle was hurt during the scuffle.

Sousuke placed his pistol back in the holster and asked Kaname "you want me to carry you back to your house"

She turned red and she was about to get mad but she saw Sousuke's face. She could tell that he's not to be a pervert. He picks her up and began walking

"Are you okay did they do anything to you?" Sousuke asked Kaname

"I'm fine. I should have let you come with us." Kaname said jokingly

He said "its alright as long as you're safe."

Kaname's Street and House

They were walking. Kaname was in Sousuke's arms. Tessa was talking to David.

She asked him "you guys knew each other."

He said, "Yeah we did, we were friends in back in the states."

Tessa said, "Were? If you were friends before your still friends."

He laughed and said, "You sound just like your broth... I mean my brother."

He said in the back of his mind "whoops that almost slipped."

Sousuke said, "We're here."

Tessa opened the door Sousuke put Kaname in the couch. Then he looked at David like he was going to kill him. David had a blank stare with this glare of courage in his eyes. Kaname and Tessa suddenly had chills. Tessa fell down and Sousuke was confused on what is happening. Tessa and Kaname passed out. David turned around with his arm bleeding badly and left. A few minutes later the girls were Ok again. Sousuke asked what happened. Tessa said I don't know. And they started to shed tears. It was overwhelming they said. It was like we could feel inside hate, anger, and sadness.


Jendai High school

The next day. David was running again to school again. He got in the door just in time. He said "made it." He was panting hard. "Good morning" Guys he said. "Kaname how's your ankle."

She replied " Its much better " Then Tessa said "we forgot to tell you thank you for yesterday"

he replied "no problem" and smiled

Sousuke is in the back staring thinking "who the hell is this guy?"