Hello folks! I'm only eleven, but don't cut me a whole lot of slack.
Please no hate comments (only constructive criticism) and no flames.
I hope you like my OC's!
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"I don't think it was a good idea to come on this boat." A copper haired girl was trying not to throw up as the boat rocked back and forth.
"Naw, its fine! Plus we need to get to Asteria somehow and this was the least expensive way." A boy that looked a lot like her, shrugged.
"True." The girl was getting pale.
"Aya, you don't look very good." The boy watch as his sister started to puke over the side of the boat, "That is disgusting!" He looked away.
"Sorry, Akira, I get sea-sick easily." She sat up against the rail trying not to think about being on a boat.
"I am your brother; I should know that by now." He sat down next to her, "Just think about all the clothes you can buy in Asteria!"
"No, no, no!" Ayame was moving her hands franticly, "I could never forgive myself if you spent all that money on me, no, no, no!"
"Calm down, I was kidding!" Akira laughed giving his sister a piece of bread he had been eating, "The funny part is, you threw up right as we are coming up to the port!"
"How do you kn-" Just as she was trying to finish she heard the captain yell 'Asteria, we're coming up to the port 'o Asteria!'. She playfully punched him, "How did you know, you jerk!"
"I'm physic, how many times do I have to tell you!" He joked taking a bite of bread. The two of them got up and watched as the port came closer and closer. It was a very sunny day with no clouds in sight. They could see the little shops that were near the port as they got closer.
The boat pulled up to the dock and put down its sail. Akira decided to be stupid, grab his sister's hand and jumped off the side of the boat, "Aiee!" Ayame screamed as they landed on the dock, "Jerk!" She lightly pushed him as they headed for the small town.
"Aaaasteria!" He sang skipping with his sister's hand in his. The fifteen year old tripped over a rock as he made it into the town. His tripping caused her to trip. Which caused the boy she fell on to fall.
"I'm so sorry!" She jumped up and started to profusely apologize to the boy she fell on. He had jet black hair and was about the same age.
"It's okay!" He got up with a smile, "My name is Cooro!"
"It's nice to meet you and I'm sorry for falling on you. I'm Ayame and this is Akira." She bowed to him.
"You're a little young to be wondering alone." Akira laughed.
"I never thought about it, but I guess I am…" Cooro really took this into thought, "I just remembered! I'm supposed to be looking for my friends!"
"We could help." Akira smirked, "Let's just say we have good eye sight." His sister hit him again.
"Really? Thanks!" Cooro looked around, "I don't really know which way they went, so…" He stopped there as he looked around for a sign of any of them. They guessed he didn't see anything when he stopped looking and was puzzled.
"Why don't we just start at that shop?" She pointed to a little clothing store.
"Nana will probably be there!" He ran- dragging the siblings with him, to the little shop. The store was very small, but had a lot of clothes and a lot of people, so it would be hard to see little Nana.
"What does this Nana chick look like anyways?" Akira asked looking for a girl that he might call 'attractive'.
"Well…she's a little shorter than me." He took a moment to think, "She has two arms, two legs, two eyes, a nose, ha-" Akira interrupted him.
"Not like that. More detailed, please?" He was still looking around for girls.
"Does she have blonde hair?" Ayame asked looking in the opposite direction as them.
"Yeah!" Cooro smiled as he looked at her.
"Does she have big green eyes?"
"Yeah!" How'd you know?"
"Because I think that's her." She pointed to- as they described, a little girl with blonde hair and big green eyes.
"Yeah, it is!" Cooro was jumping for glee. He ran and tackled Nana, "There you are!"
"I told you to wait outside! I've been here this whole time anyways." She struggled to get him off, "Do you know that girl?" She whispered to him.
"That's Ayame!" He ran over to Aya and patted her on the back, "She had a brother when we came in here?" He looked around the small store and saw the copper haired boy talking to a girl.
"I'll get Akira." Aya sighed and went over to him.
"Nana why'd you leave me alone?" Cooro pouted.
"I didn't leave you. Like I said before I told you to wait outside while I wasted- I mean used our money for a good cause!" Nana put down the clothing she was holding (it cost more than she could waste or as she would say 'use of a good cause').
"I guess I forgot!" He smiled and she sighed. Ayame came over holding Akira's wrist really, really tight.
"We should be finding Husky and Senri." Nana sighed again, "I think mister silent and grumpy butt went to get food."
"Mister silent and grumpy butt?" The siblings looked at each other confused.
"Long story." Nana grabbed Cooro's hand, "Come on." They guessed she had to hold his hand or he'd get lost (that was part of it the other was that he would eat everything). They went out the door and she looked around, "This would be easier if most of the shops weren't food shops!"
Cooro looked around and thought he spotted a glimpse of Husky's hair, so he decided to run in that direction…dragging Nana with him. The siblings ran after them as if they were a part of the group, but they weren't they were just travelers.
"Stop running!" Nana screamed getting pulled to a jewelry store. That split second Cooro tackled a pale, sliver haired kid.
"Get off of me da-" He stopped himself as he noticed Ayame and Akira. He pushed Cooro off and got up, "They are…?"
"I'm Akira and you are an adorable little girl!" Akira messed up the boy's hair.
"I'm a boy for your information." He moved to the side so Akira couldn't touch his hair, "And I'm Husky."
"I'm Ay-" Husky interrupted her.
"I don't care who you are." He walked past the two and looked around, "Senri got lost when we were getting food."
"And you decided to look at jewelry." Nana giggled. Husky hit Cooro with the 'Cooro punishment stick'.
"Why'd you hit me when she said it?!" He rubbed his head in pain.
"Because it's called the Cooro punishment stick." Husky felt a hand on his shoulder and he turned around in fright. There was a boy with sliver colored hair and blue beads in it (who looked older than them), behind him, "Don't scare me like that!" Husky yelled regaining his breath.
"So this is Senri?" Ayame asked studying him. He looked as if he was a Kim-Un-Kur which they had not seen in a very long while. They all nodded.
"Go ahead say it." Husky sighed.
"Say what?" Cooro asked with a tilted head.
"You always ask 'Hey why don't you come with us', so just get it over with."
"I wasn't going to say that, but good idea! Would you guys like to come with us? We're going…north I think." He smiled waiting for their answers. It took them a while to answer, but when they made up their minds and only Husky was mad.
"Sure!" They said in unison. You could tell by everyone's expression (except Husky) that they were happy.
Finally another girl! Nana thought, It has been lonely since Rose left!
They started off out of the town and into the woods. Nana was talking to Ayame, Cooro was blabbing about apples, Akira was listening, Senri…well no one knows what he was thinking and Husky was ignoring them all, when Cooro spotted a little apple tree.
"Apples!" Pitch black wings spread from the eleven year olds back. He flew up to the tree and sat on one of the branches. Akira stared at him blankly. He started to get mad and grabbed a rock. He threw it at him, it hit Cooro's wing and caused him to fall off the branch.
"What was that for?!" Husky and Nana yelled.
"Are you three one of them too?!" Akira yelled.
"So what if we are?" Nana sternly replied.
He grabbed an arrow from the quiver he had on his back, "Then this." He shot an arrow that barely missed her head. He shot another one that hit her in the arm. Senri stood behind him with his arm completely changed into a bear arm. Senri hit him in the back and he yelped in pain.
"Wait! Don't hurt him!" Ayame stood in front of Akira, "It's not his fault!"
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The four of them (Cooro, Nana, Senri and Ayame) were sitting around a fire and Husky was leaning up against a tree while Akira was laying behind them unconscious, "You see back in Deru we lived in an all +Anima orphanage." Ayame started, "We all had fun and we were always nice to each other." She paused, "That was until a few years ago. Onee-chan and I were reading when the eldest kids there came up to us. They all started to go +Anima on us.
"We just thought that they were going to show us another trick, but that wasn't even close to it. One swiped its claw at me and I started to bleed. Akira stood up for me, but just got knocked down. This stuff went on for about an hour. We were close to death, but we didn't turn into a +Anima." She took a deep breath, "We only escaped when Onee-chan got the chance to grab my wrist and used whatever might he had to toss me out of the way.
"I started to run into the woods. I hide crying wondering if we would live, which somehow- as you could see, he did. I didn't know that, but I need to clean my cuts so I wouldn't die. I decided to go to the river, where I saw him laying there, blood all over his clothes." She whipped some tears up from her eyes.
You could see that Senri was sorry for what he did. Nana put on a jacket and said, "We're sorry, we didn't know…Is he okay though?"
"He's been through worse, so I bet he's fine!" Aya put a fake smile on. No one was fooled by her fake smile; they could all see she was sad, "More importantly are you okay?"
Nana giggled, "I'm fine! The arrow missed my bone so I'm fine!"
Senri picked a flower that was next to where Akira was laying, "Akira and Ayame." He said as he pressed the flower in a little book he was always carrying
Nana yawned and stretched her arm that wasn't hurt, "I'm tired. If no one minds I'm going to bed."
"I think I will, too!" Cooro added with a small yawn.
"We all should." Husky sat down at the bottom of the tree. Senri nodded in agreement.
"I'm going to wait for Onee-can to wake up." Ayame went over to her brother and lay by him.
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So whatcha' think of it? I don't think I want to continue until I get some people to say that I should.
Hope you liked my story!