I haven't uploaded in far too long, and I finally have a couple new things that are up to a level where they're finished enough to receive critique, so here's the first one. Kudos to anyone who can tell who wrote these letters and what this set of poems was inspired by.
A Letter To Naruto, Letter One
The hand that wrote this letter
Knows not what it's to do
So it writes, writes some hope to you
The hand that wrote this letter
Writes for a shy girl's mouth
Which cannot open around you
I want you to know
I care for no one else but you
I want you to know
That when you pass me by
Tears fall like silent rain
I want you to know
I tear my soul to cease the pain
I still think you might feel the same
I'm not quite sure what I'm supposed to say
But I think you know I'm not okay
I'm not quite sure what you're supposed to say
But it's plain to see you're not okay
A Letter To Naruto, Letter Two
This is another letter, just for you
On another day, I know not what to do
So I'm writing some hope to you
They say your life is full of joy
They say you shine like a different boy
But something tells me that you hide
When the world's to bed, warm and tired
That you cry a little in the dark
Well so do I
I'm still not sure what to do
So I'll write my love to you
A Letter To Naruto, Letter Three
This is my final letter to you
I still know not what to do
And this is my last hope, just for you
She makes your eyes sparkle
When you bicker, it's an old married couple
She treats you fairly well
And trains you hard to be worth her time
And when she's strong
She's strong for you
But you've never kissed
It'd be something new
And when you thought of her
Did you ever think of me
On accident?
I've not got much to offer too
But I'll give my love to you
Thanks for reading :). It's fun writing so I hope it's fun reading. If it's not fun to read, please tell me why in review. If it is fun to read, also tell me why, because I want to write more, better poetry.
Thanks,
-Theltaris Vadamae