Hey folks, I got a positive response on the last short story, so I've made this one for you all, however it is rated M for a reason, I don't take responsebilety if children reads this, I can only Rate the story, not controll of others.
and I DON'T own the caracters or annything of equitment, that's Jorge Lucas and Lucas Arts creation, just that you know it. But the story in general, whitout that, is from my mind. GOOD READING
Change of time, Same feelings
On the bridge of Ebon Hawk, stands two person, looking into the vast of the space, his right arm lies gently over her shoulders, the ship empty and only the beepings of the ships controls are to hear, and their light breathing, just floating above the world of Dantooiene gives an good feeling, seeing the sunsett.
Her hand crawls up acros her feuture and tangles her finger into his, no words are said nothing spoken, only knowledge, only peace, after a war of so long.
They turns their heads and leans into eachother, her breasts tuching his side gently, his arm slides gently down, their faces gets closer, it's instinct, he sees her grey eyes, eye brows, her red chin, her slim noes, her thin lips. His arms around her, she feels that, and she sees his dark brown eyebrows, and his breaded chins, his big, but cosey nose, she sees his full lips parting, as her own does the same, the tongue comes out, and hers too, they closes eyes and meets in a long passionate kiss. They are both jedi, and former siths and they don't care of the Jedi code, nor the sith code.
As the kiss continues, her hands comes up his back, stroking it, and then he presses her to him in a deeper kiss, she acsept more, as a soft moan comes from both, the kiss breaks as he moves his face down and kisses her neck, she gasps pleasurly, as he kisses down her neck, her hair in pig tails lies gently against his own long har. She takes her hands to his waist, and seperates his robes so his light haired chest comes to vission, she strokes it gently.
As it continue the air gets hotter, he removes the top of his robes while kissing her up to her cheek, and then continues to the other cheek, and down to her neck there, she gasps in pleasure as she begins to remove her own robes, revealing her full, bra-clad breasts, they then continues kissing, their bodies into eachother, stroking chest againts breasts.
She looks lovely at him "Rev, my dearest, shal we not go to bed?" she says whit a wisper, he smiles back lovingly, "yes Bastila" he says back whit a soft tone, "but isn't this our bed?" he smiles as he lift her up on the controlls in the middle of the cocpit, her body illuminated in the bright sun, he admires her body, small sweat drops forms at her gap between the breasts.
He takes her shoes off, gently placing them on the floor, then gently takes the pants of the robes off her, whit her lifting her body up, then down, now almost every part of her are visible, only bra and panties remains. She giggles lightly at what he had done, and he smiles at her, taking of his own boots, and his pants soon follows, his skin at dark brown tone after the manny days of Tatooiene visit, and his skin shows sign of battle, yet to Bastila, Revan's body is beutifull, as hers is Beutifull for him.
As the the sun of dantooine disapears behind the planet, he climbs up on the controls and over her, kissing her as the sun illuminates them both in a loving light in the passionfilled cocpit on Ebon Hawk, "a better time, can't be found for this love" as they kiss at the last of the sun dissapear, to leave the night to the Ebon Hawk, and it's little crew.
The end.
And again: Reveiw, I wannna know what you think.
May the wrighting be whit you
Revan1st