My First fan fic. Short chapters. Working on Chapter 2
Mario and the Chaos Ring
*note not based on sonic and the magic rings
It was Mario's birthday in the mushroom kingdom. The sky was blue with the creepy staring clouds and all the toads where in peaches castle. "Oh thatsa so nice!" Mario said as Luigi gave him his present." No problem! Anything for ma brother!" he said with a cheerful smile.
" And heres my present for you mario!" Peach said. She was dressed in her usual pink dress. She had put on a new set of earrings and a new crown, but something seamed wrong. She didn't have the same perkiness as she usually did. She seamed oddly disturbed. Like she was hiding something." Thanks princess!" Mario said, sill trying to figure out what was wrong. As he opened Luigi's present, he glanced back at Peach. Unfortunately for Mario, she wasn't there. "Oh my goodness! Luigi thank you!" Mario was holding a golden mushroom. It was covered in small pictures. They where pictures of Mario and Luigi's adventures. Under the mushroom it said, " To Mario, A lifetime of happiness and adventure still awaits you. Make every moment count." " Thanks Luigi. "Itsa great present." Mario said, tightly hugging his brother. As they continued to exchange presents, Peach was nowhere to be found. Even though a relaxing party was going on, evil was on high alert.
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