Here is a better version of the first chapter.
Cat's POV
Something's holding me down but I don't know what it is. I look around find that it is getting really dark. Last time I was seen was with my friends... I hope this isn't a dirty prank because whatever is surrounding me is getting in my mouth. Dirt. It just hit me.
My twin sister, Kayla, has always tried to be like me. She hated her life. I always got the cute boys and she got the ugly ones. I was always the talented one and she struggled at everything. Why do I think that she buried me alive? Because she's evil. I'm not one to call someone evil, but when it comes to Kayla: she is always going to be evil. I feel my breath start to slow down and my eyes start closing. Goodbye life. It was nice knowing you.
Jade's POV
I hate waking up early in a barn. I look up to see that Tori and Cat are missing. I wake the guys up and I walk to the barn door. Suddenly, Tori appears wearing a checkered vest and a black shirt under it.
"Where's Cat?" I ask as I wonder how her hair is not messy and is brushed down.
"I don't know...I thought I heard her scream and I can't find her anywhere."
Kayla's POV
I laugh as I sit in my room. I killed her. And the best part? No one knows about me. All I have to do is dye my hair and act like Cat.
