The face of the grinning fox
Rewriten!
Prologe
Hi peoples! I'm putting this story up for adoption as I really have no idea what to do with it anymore. My only request if you decide to pick this (lousily written) story up is that it ends with Naru-chan destroying Konoha (one way or another). I'd love you forever if you do take it! 'blows kiss' Now, on with the story, and BAI BAI! 'waves her arms'
Uzumaki Naruto was having a rough day. The villagers had once again tried to 'make him disappear'. That was nothing new, not really. It was an everyday thing. But this time it had been a ninja. They are so hard to defend against.
So, he was currently hiding in a dumpster. The ninja had run past already but he didn't dare come out, not yet. He'd have to wait until nightfall first. It was uncomfortable and he had something sharp sticking him in his back.
The nine year old little boy was feeling the tears start to come. Why did he have to have such a life? Why didn't anyone else get to be the container of Kyuubi no Kitsune? Yes, he knew about the Kyuubi. In fact he was on the edge to give in to the demons proposal of a… well, let's say a, very bloody revenge on Konohagakure.
On the outside he was a happy-go-lucky boy who was pretty dumb, had a crush on an ugly forehead girl, loved ramen and was a failure in school. On the inside however, he was the complete opposite. He had almost always some dark thoughts of revenge in a cruel way, but he had yet to give in to the Kyuubi.
The sky was darkening. Maybe he could go outside now? He looked up, the sky hadn't gotten any darker, it was a shadow. He gulped, and looked at the man's face. 'The Ninja' was the last thought that went through his head before the beating began.
He was left bleeding and completely smashed in that dumpster. And it was then he made his mind up. 'Kyuubi?' "What do you want gaki?" 'The day I'm strong enough, Konoha will bade in blood!' Inside Narutos head Kyuubi smiled. "Good choice kit. Good choice. I'll help you get the power to do so. You will train with me." Naruto smiled, but it was different from his usual smile, it was a smile carving for blood and was colder than ice. It was a smile that promised great pain while getting said blood and took over his small face with its icy hate. And it looked so wrong on such an innocent looking face.
He got up; Kyuubi had already healed his wounds, the smile never leaving his face. The blonde boy walked out of the ally, letting Kyuubis chakara flow from his body. The feeling of death lingering in the air around him.
He saw the ninja who had beaten him brag about it. It was three men, not better than Chunin. "Kit, this'll be your first lesson. A real Demon kills merciless and cruel. Let's see if you're worth wasting time on." Narutos smile got wider. He was in for his first kill. He slowly walked over towards them. The boy was now close enough to hear the word they said. "… cut him up badly. The stupid demon deserved it because…!" They stiffened when they felt a primal fear take over their senses, their brain telling them to run for their lives, but their legs were frozen in spot. The tallest of the men turned his head and looked straight at Naruto. He saw the look in the blonde's eyes and the smile on his lips. The boy wanted blood, and it was their blood he wanted. That night screams echoed trough Konoha.
Naruto stood in the middle of the three bodies, blood splashed on the ground, on the walls, even on some part of the roofs close by. He had blood covering his face, his white shirt, and his hands. He wasn't smiling anymore but had a look of innocence in his eyes.
Narutos blue eyes met whit the eyes of an old woman who was out shopping late. Kyuubi told him that there should be no witnesses, so Naruto dashed forward and killed the old lady in one strike trough her chest.
When he was done he dragged the bodies out to the middle of the street. In the blood of the four persons he killed the blonde boy wrote some words on the ground next to them. When he was done he smiled proudly, like a kid who had finished a drawing.
When Kyuubi saw what he had written he couldn't help but chuckle a bit. "Great kit. Go home, get washed up and wait for them to find the bodies." 'No Kyuubi, I want more blood. Please let me have more blood.' Kyuubi chuckled again. This kid was really something. "Kit, you'll get more blood in time. Go wash up and go to bed. Oh, and set your alarm clock on six." Naruto grinned. 'Hai, Kyuubi-sensei.'
Next day
Sarutobi sat in his office enjoying a cup of green tea. "Hokage-sama!" An ANBU rushed into the office. "Yes, what is it wolf?" The ANBU bowed before speaking. "We have found four bodies in the 10th district." Sarutobi almost choked on his tea. In mare seconds the Hokage was up and out the door.
When they reached the scene Sarutobi felt it like his stomach was turning inside out. The way they had been killed… it was just cruel.
One of the three men had no limps left attached to his body, another had his eyes and tongue ripped out and the third… it looked like his skin had been burned away from the inside. And there were signs of brutal torture on the three first. The old lady had a hole through her chest and thankfully that was it.
Suddenly an ANBU called them over. "Something is written over here." Sandaime and the ANBU ran to him. "What dose it say?" The Hokage asked. "To the Hokage whit Love" The ANBU answered.
My first fanfic, rewritten! And I purposely spelled wrong in the message. Because come on! He's nine! You spell wrong when you're nine!
I'm putting up a vote for who Naru-chan'll be paired with. Any idea is fine. But do understand that whoever Naru-chan gets paired with he/she will be evil as well. Everyone is votebel (is that even a word?), boy or girl, dead or alive, OC or original character. Just not a crossover. So no crossover pairs. You can switch gender on them to if you want to. I'd prefer not to write a Naru/Tsu or a Jira/Naru or a Oro/Naru or a Saru/Naru, but I guess I can, um, do that to if there is most votes for these.
And, yes I know it's short, but it's only the prologue yet. They'll get longer!! Yura-chan promise!
And now, when all this small talk is over, please click the little button in the lower left corner that says 'Go' and give me a review:3 Flames will be used to burn the villager of Konoha for being mean to Naru-chan!! hugs Naru-chan hard
Ja!