Hey Smoke here with a Loud House fanfiction. Ok it's a rewrite of Louds vs Kents. I couldn't figure out how to make the prank war work. So I decided to go a different way. I don't own the Loud house. But if I did this would be an episode.
It's a sunny day in Royal Woods, the Loud siblings are on the porch and then Lincoln walks in the scene. "Hey girls, what are you looking at?" Lincoln asked.
"You know that house down the street that nobody would buy?" Lori asked.
"Yeah why?" Lincoln asked.
"Someone bought the house, bro!" Luna replied.
"What no way!?" Lincoln exclaimed, then he turned to the viewers. "The mansion has been for sale since I was born, and someone was crazy enough to buy it."
"They're probably rich or something?" Luan asked.
The movers take out a pool table, air hockey table, and some arcade games. "Looks like we have a gamer." said Lincoln.
"Man some of those games are old." Lana stated.
The movers carry in some gym equipment. "We have an athletic." Lynn exclaimed.
"I wonder who would buy the mansion." Lincoln wondered.
"Rich people?" Lola shrugged.
"I guess." Luna replied. "I wanted Mick Swagger as a neighbour that would have been cool."
"He would get a restraining order." said Lisa.
"Not Mick Swagger." The Louds see a 11 year old girl with medium length platinum blonde, fair skin, green eyes, wearing a red tank top, blue shorts, white short socks and black sneakers. "Hi, I'm Katie Kent, I'm your new neighbour."
"Nice to me you." Lucy said.
"Gah!" Katie screamed.
"That's our sister Lucy. She always scares us." said Lincoln. "I'm Lincoln and these are my sisters. Lori, Leni, Luna, Luan, Lynn, you already met Lucy."
"Hi." Katie waved.
"I don't do hugs." Lucy replied.
"I'm Lana!" Lana offered a handshake, but when Katie shakes Lana's hand which is covered in mud, when Katie let's go of her hand and shakes the mud off.
"I'm Lola the pretty one." said Lola.
"My name is Lisa, and this is our youngest sister, Lily." Lisa greeted herself and Lily.
"Nice to meet you all." Katie replied.
"So are you a only child?" Lisa asked.
"Actually, I have ten brothers." Katie stated.
"Ten brothers!?" The Loud kids exclaimed.
"Yep, one girl with ten boys." said Katie.
"Wow just like us." Lana replied.
"But one girl and ten brothers." Lisa corrected.
"Hey Katie!" They see a 17 year old boy with fair skin, short blonde hair, wearing a black tee shirt, brown cargo shorts, and white sneakers. "Kelan and Kalab need your help with boxes."
"Ok Keanu!" Katie stated.
"You must be her brother?" Lori asked.
"My name is Keanu Kent." Keanu introduced himself.
"I'm Leni." Leni greeted.
"These are the Louds, Keanu." Katie stated.
"Hey." Keanu said.
"What up dude." Luna greeted.
"Hey dude." said Keanu.
"I'm a girl." Luna corrected.
"Sorry about that." Keanu replied.
"It's cool. I'm Luna." Luna greeted.
"Wait you're that girl who stage dive at an opera?" Keanu asked.
"You were there?" Lisa asked.
"Actually it's on YouTube." Katie replied and showed the video.
"Luna got a million hits." Luan joked.
"Hey maybe we can invite these guys over to our place?" Katie suggested.
"Sure once we finish unpacking." said Keanu.
Then a 15 year old boy with short brown hair, green eyes, red flannel, blue jeans, a light brown cowboy hat, brown shoes and he walks up to Keanu. "Oh hey Kole!" Katie greeted.
"Hey bro, sis. Mom and Dad want to video chat." Kole replied.
"We're coming." said Keanu.
"See you guys tonight!" Katie replied and walked away with her brothers.
"We already met two brothers, eight to go." said Lynn.
"But I'm surprised that they would buy the mansion. They must be loaded?" Luan asked.
"Hm. That's my theory." Lisa stated.
"Well we have to make a good first impression." said Lori.
"We know!" The rest of the siblings replied.
"Ok good." said Lori.
Later that night the Louds have arrived at the Kent manor, and Lori rang the doorbell. "Ok everyone be on your best behaviour." said Lori.
"Hey we're nice!" Lynn exclaimed.
"May I recall the public pools." Lisa stated.
The door opens and the Louds see a 13 year old boy with fair skin, medium length brown hair, wearing a white tee shirt with the Atari symbol in red, blue shorts, and white sneakers. "You guys are the Louds?" He asked. "I'm Kaleb."
"What up?" Leni greeted.
"Hey Louds, come on in." Katie stated.
The Loud siblings enter the manor and they look around, it was a big hall with a grand staircase, dark brown walls, and a few boxes. "Sorry about the mess, we're still unpacking." said Keanu.
"It's cool dude." said Luna.
"Hello." Katie, Keanu, Kaleb and the Louds screamed from a 8 year old boy with pale skin, black hair covering his right eye, wearing a black tee shirts, black jeans, black shoes, and a chain in his pocket.
"Kelan don't do that!" said Katie.
"It's in my nature." said Kelan.
"Now I know how you guys feel." said Lucy.
"This is our brother Kelan. He always do that." said Katie.
"So does Lucy." said Lynn.
"I wrote this poem, it's called moving." said Kelan.
"You write poems too?" Lucy asked.
"Yes." Kelan replied.
"So do I." said Lucy.
"I guess Lucy made a new friend." said Lynn.
"Hey guys come on down we have company!" said Keanu. Then seven more boys come downstairs.
The first body is 16 years old boy with fair skin, short blonde hair, green t shirt, blue jeans and white sneakers. "Hey I'm Kody." said Kody. "And I have some magic." He pulled out a coin out of Leni's ear.
"I had a penny in my ear!" Leni exclaimed.
The second boy is 14 years old with black medium length hair, fair skin, wearing a white long sleeved shirt, brown pants, brown shoes. "My name is Kevin, I'm a big science-fiction fan." said Kevin.
"A sci-fi guy?" said Luan. "I'm more a comedy person."
Then two boys who are both 6 years old, fair skin, black hair, but different clothing. One boy is wearing a blue t shirt, blue jeans, and red shoes. "Name's Kaz, Kent Daredevil." said Kaz.
The other boy is wearing a black t shirt with the Ghostbusters logo on it, red shorts, and black shoes. "I'm Ken and I ain't afraid of no ghost!" said Ken.
"Leave my ghost friends alone." Lucy replied.
The next boy is 4 years old with brown hair hair, fair skin, a tan sweater, black pants and brown shoes. "Greeting I am Keith. The smart one." said Keith.
The last boy is a one year old baby with a little bit of black hair on his head, fair skin, blue jeans and a white shirt. "This is our baby brother Kirk." said Katie.
"Wow you weren't kidding." said Lincoln. "Ten brothers."
"You got ten sisters dude." said Kole.
"Do your parents know we're here?" Lisa asked.
"Yeah, our dad is directing his new movie in Toronto and our mom is producing the movie." said Katie.
"You're parents work in the movies?" Leni asked.
"Yeah. He's making a post-apocalypse film." said Kelan.
"What's the name of the movie?" Lucy asked.
"A Insane Zane movie." said Katie.
"I heard about that, the director is Nelson Kent." said Leni.
Then the Louds gasped at that name. "You're dad is Nelson Kent?!" Lincoln exclaimed.
"He's one of the best movie directors of all time." Lynn replied.
"We know!" The Kents replied minus Kirk who just nodded.
"That means your mom is Diana Kent." said Luna.
"Correct again." said Keith.
"It must be awesome having your parents work for the movies." said Lincoln.
"Well it has it's ups and downs." said Kody.
"But we get to see his movies on the premiere." said Kole.
"But they barely have time for us." said Katie with her head looking down.
"Way harsh." Luna replied.
"We know." said Ken.
"They sometimes come for our birthdays, special events and holidays." Kody replied.
"If I had a heart it would ache." said Lucy.
"But they always video chat with them." said Katie.
"Let's show you Louds around." said Keanu.
"Lead the way." said Lincoln. The Kents began the tour for the Loud family.
"No flash photography please." said Kevin and laughed along with Luan.
"We're going to get along just fine." said Luan.
Well that's the first chapter of the rewrite of Louds vs Kents. Ok it was just the first few chapters fused into one, but I made some small edits. The next chapter will be the tour of the manor. Please review and all that.
