This is my first fanfiction so tell me if I should keep editing this or not. This chapter is in Narutos mind hes not talking to himself out loud just thinking
Betrayed
Chapter 1 Hatred
" I once was happy in life I thought everything thing was ok until it happened" Flashback It happened on a summers night everything thing was going smooth until he came along my brother the traiter of my family had destroyed my will to fight and the rest of my family his name waz Sasuke Uchiha we were family at one point in time until he killed the ones I loved he betrayed me so now I Naruto Uzumaki am going to find the strength to kill him in battle… End Flashback To day is the day I persue my dream to get strong to kill my brother I didn't think this day would come I didn't think it would have to end this way and I personally didn't want it to have to go on this trip. Its been 7 years since ive seen him me and him are both 18 and we hate each other with a passion, Im going on a training trip by myself going through all the elemental nations to see what knowlage I can pick up and use to my advantage I have taken over Jiraiya's spy network since he chose to be the Hokage I thought it was a mistake he said he wanted to be the one who watched over the village after the third died. My hatred for my brother fuels me like it fueld him when he went after Itachi but im not power hungry I simply want to kill him by my hand no matter how long it takes to kill him or how much training I have to go through I will kill him that's my goal in the future. So now im off to wave country to see my old friend Tazuna its been forever since I seen him I go to vist him sometimes me and his nephew are kinda like bestfriends you could say. Before I start my trip I think im gonna go stop and smell the roses its always better to check things over more than once to make sure you have all the stuff you need. Im almost by the gates so its time for me to go on my journy its going to be a long time before I see this place again so good by Konoha.
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