Hello, my name is mieo12321. I am an aspiring writer from Illinois U.S.A. i am a minor (under 18) and for privacy concerns i'll just tell you i'm 17. I hope to make this a career or at least a hobby, but just know i am learning and have far to go before i can say i am a writer. First off i might make a few references to the work of the wonderful writer Anguirus1955, but i will only make references to a few names of characters within his story and maybe some more details (without spoilers of course). When you see (#) (#=a number) it will be explained in a thing at the bottom, it will make sense when it happens. So without further adieu
Sticks, Stones, And Hand Grenades
ch1 good morning?
Nick's pov
Beep, beep, beep, beep, the alarm clock rang. Bam my hand hit the alarm clock, then i checked it "6:30" i said groggily i sighed then slowly got out of bed and looked around at my apartment. "Ok" i thought " i have to get dressed, eat breakfast, and meet carrots at fur bucks by 7:30"."that's Doable. I ate a healthy breakfast of shredded minny sheep, and blueberries followed by some apple juice. I then brushed my teeth i made sure to get all of them including my tongue. "Judy hates morning breath" i thought. I then put my uniform on taking care to pin my badge carefully on my chest, then i put on my watch, and aviator sunglasses i looked in the mirror and straightened my Z.P.D. badge that said officer Wilde and under that it said 2435. I looked in the mirror and said "lookin good as usual" i checked my phone and there was a text from judy, it said the following
Judy: Are you ready yet?
Nick: walking out right now
Judy: OK i might be late my neighbor is in the shower
Nick: when are you going to find A new place? At least a place With your own bathroom in the apartment.
Judy: nick we have been over this I like to be frugal with my money. Besides I've grown to like my neighbors.
Nick: wich ones the old snow leopard That has P.T.S.D. from world war 3. Or The oxx and ordy gay couple that always (ram there horns)?
Judy: nick come on you know What i mean. And what were Those (air quotes) for
Nick: Nothing (; I'll see you at fur bucks
Judy: OK bye nicky
Nick: bye carrots
"Ram there horns" i Chuckled as i walked out into my car.
Judy's pov
"Bye carrots" nick texted. I put down my phone then knocked on the bathroom door. i heard a crash and a "God damn it" from inside the bathroom. I sighed then walked back to my apartment. I put on my uniform and hat on and walked out to see nick waiting there with his car. I got in and said "hi nick"
"hey Judy" he responded. "Hey" he said "that was a quick shower". "Yeah i know" i said "i didn't have time. "Let me guess" nick said with a chuckle "one of your neighbors were in there" "ugh" i said "nick come on get off my tail about it" he said with a ear to ear smile "all right all right carrots i'll stop" the newscast on nick's car radio caught my ear, i said "nick can you turn it up". the news caster was louder and easier to hear. "in other news" the news caster said "the crime boss komo domo in reptilia has been linked to many assassinations in zootopia but nothing is concrete. All we know is that all of the alleged assassinations have had some explosive use in the act. The reptilian police have no comment on the situation. I said to nick " do you think they will get someone in Savannah square? Nick said "i don't know i guess will have to wait to find out."(1)
We arrived at the coffee shop at 7:45 we walked in and i could see the looks nick were getting from the other animals, distrust, disgust, and worst of all, surprise he was a police officer. He walked by like he didn't notice. I thought "even after he risked his life to stop bellweather from releasing the night howler flower to the 11.3% of the population who were predators to keep control of the city through fear, people still hated and distrusted him for being a fox.(2) Huh what a world we live in"
"and what would you like" the cashier asked. "Huh" i said. Nick told the cashier (a female badger) "she wants the carrot and cinnamon cappuccino with cinna sugar on top"(3) she looked at judy and said "do you want what the fox said?" nick chuckled but all i could think and say was that's not his name! Her smile faded and she glanced worried at nick and said " oh! I thought you were buying him a drink because of well you know". "What" i said "because of what" "well she said "because i thought he was homeless" i looked at her with anger in my eyes and said "he most certainly is not, he is a hard working police officer and the best friend i ever had!" By that point all of the color had drained from her muzzle and she said "i'm sorry ma'am i didn't mean to offend you" "well" i said "i'm not the one who was insulted" she looked at nick then looked at his badge and begrudgingly said "sorry officer Wilde" "thank you" i said " now our drinks please".
after we left nick turned to me and said "you didn't need to do that" at that point all my anger boiled up and i yelled "yes i did!" . Nick looked at me surprised and his ears went down. "oh nick" I said worried "i didn't mean to yell but you deserve better than how that..that bitch treated you." Nick's mouth curled into a smile for only a second and then said "Judy ever since i was a young cub i have been looked down on by everyone for what i am. I've..i've" nick stuttered looking for the words "i've gotten used to it" he said sadly tears in his eyes. This is one of the only times i have seen nick cry other than the time a young fox cub was shot and died in nick's arms. "Its..its just not right" i say. Nick looked at me tears in my eyes from a mix of anger and sadness and tears in his from the astonishment he had. He than said "it will take more than a bunny cops speech to change people's mind. He looked around realizing a crowd had formed. "Judy" nick said wiping his eyes with his paw "i think we should go to the precinct". I looked around to only see face after face looking back at me. I sniffled and walked to nick's car and we drove to the precinct.
Nick on the way looked at me with those emerald eyes full of tears and said in a week voice "thank you judy" "nick it's the right thing to do" i said "now stop crying or you're going to make me cry you big baby. We both laughed and continued to the precinct in silent reflection of this mornings events and secretly how glad we were for each other's support.
Ok that was chapter one of my first fan fiction thank you if you've gotten this far and if you liked it follow me or the story i am releasing chapter two soon but with school starting i might be delayed. The next chapter should be longer than this one this chapter was just to show the state of nick and Judy's relationship and the mindset of zootopias citizens of prey If you have any positive criticism please comment and i'll try to use the criticism and reply thanks.
(1) komo domo is the name of the main antagonist in the story (reckless endangerment) which is such a good read i can't explain, if you are interested go to Anguirus1955 page on this sight he is such a good author.
(2) 11.3% is the number of predator to prey but it is also a number in the theory that predators are african americans and the night howlers are cocaine and smellweather is the us government in the 1960 trying to make the 11.3% look bad. If you want to read more search about it it will probably come up under zootopia theories. I'm no conspiracy theorist but
(3) cinna sugar is a 50/50 cinnamon and sugar mix that goes well on hot beverages like hot chocolate or coffee. Thank you for reading love you all.
