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Chapter 1

"The Party That Ended Someplace Else"

Marina made sure she looked perfect. She was invited to a birthday party which was to take place in a yacht, in the Pacific Ocean, after all. She had to look absolutely perfect, because everyone expected her to. And not looking perfect in a party is a crime in her case.

Marina was ditzy, and was very adventurous. She was a reflective person. She goes crazy at times, but never does anything so stupid.

The party was held by Natasha Billy. A friend she met a few years ago in the Philippines. Natasha was in vacation there when she first met her. They clicked instantly, and remained friend through phone calls, and emails. Once in a while they'd see each other. But that was very rare.

It was Natasha's birthday, and she invited Marina and Annie to come. She sent them plane tickets as well. The party was to take place in New Zealand, and the yacht was to sail around the Pacific a few hours, just until the party would end.

In the room right beside Marina's, another girl was fixing herself up. Her name was Annie, and she made friends with Natasha along with Marina. She was fixing herself up; trying to figure out what would be the best dress to wear. She couldn't make up her mind, and decided that she'd ask Marina in a while.

Annie was a very well-mannered young lady. She was smart, and sporty. She loved reading, and writing, and learning new things. She's not as adventurous as Marina, but likes experiencing as well.

She made friends with Natasha while she was with Marina. All three of them had the same interests, and just enjoyed spending time with each other.

She was invited along with Marina, and she was very excited to go. She'd never seen New Zealand, and always wanted to go there. The thing that made her want to go there was that it seemed alone in the world. It was surrounded by water, and just seemed so beautiful.

Annie knocked on Marina's door, holding out three different dresses. Marina opened the door, saw the dilemma, and called Annie in.

Mariana was wearing in black and white printed halter dress, with nude wedges. She planned to wear a hat (a very big one) since daytime was pretty long at this season.

"So, three dresses to chose from" said Marina, examining each dress.

"I don't know what to wear" giggled Annie, not usually caring about her clothes.

"I suggest this one" said Marina, holding up a black dress, with some gold touches with it. "Simple, elegant, classic, nothing too fancy, very Annie" said Marina approvingly.

"Yes, I'll wear this one" Annie said, heading back to her room.

"Meet you in the lobby 4:30!" called out Marina.

"Sure!"

Marina was already in the lobby when Annie got down. Marina thought she looked great in her ensemble, and the hat was a classic, fashion forward touch. Annie got out of the elevator in the black dress Marina picked, with silver strappy sandals.

"Our ride waits outside" said Marina, taking Annie's arm.

"And what a nice rise that is."

They got out of the hotel, and the limousine driver opened the door for them. They entered the limo, and talked about how much they've loved New Zealand so far. After about 20 minutes, they arrived in the Pierre. When they got out the limo, Natasha was already making her way towards them.

"It's been quite some time, hasn't it?" asked Natasha, giving the two girls a hug.

"Yes it was! We've missed you!" said Annie, returning the hug.

"It was much more boring without you!" cried Marina.

"Come on in! The other guests will be here in a while"

All three girls entered the yacht, and started talking about the things that happened while they were away from each other.

The party started, and the yacht left the Pierre. Everyone was having a good time, and hours passed before a storm suddenly hit.

"Impossible!" Natasha thought. "Well, not really. No one truly is sure about weather. Not even the weather man." She told herself, sounding sad. She thought it was going to be alright, when she tripped on her left. She wasn't tipsy. She was sure of it. It was the boat tipping over.

"Marina!" Annie yelled franticly when the yacht tipped side wards. When Marina didn't respond, she called her name again.

"Chill!" cried Marina from behind her, walking to Annie, stumbling a little bit along with the boat.

"I'm scared. What if the boat sinks?" cried Annie

"Don't say that!" Marina said. "It's okay. We'll make it back home" sounding comforting.

The storm continued, and the boat moved along with the big waves. It shook from side to side, until it couldn't take it anymore. The yacht was quite near the Pierre already. Natasha prayed that they'll get there quickly. It was the worst birthday ever. Not only was everyone scared, they were pretty much all wet. Her prayers weren't answered. The boat was about to tip over.

"Annie! Where are you? Get over here!" cried Marina, getting on a small wooden boat she found.

She saw Annie running her way, along with some food and four machine guns.

"What the hell?" yelled Marina.

"Better safe than sorry!" replied Annie, getting on the boat.

"How'd you do this thing?" cried Marina, trying to unlock the boat from the yacht. Annie unlocked it, and they fell down onto the water. They were both wet.

"Row with me!" cried Annie.

The two of them made their way towards the Pierre. The others from the party were swimming there as well. Some here holding on to some things. Everyone was panicking, and was frantic.

There was whirlpool, and they were about to go right into it.

"Annie! There's a whirlpool! Row backwards! Go!" Marina screamed.

They rowed with all their might, but they could not do it. They entered the whirlpool, and went down with it. They couldn't even feel getting wet. They just entered it.

Annie woke up with the sun shining on her face. Marina was beside her, still asleep. They were in the boat they were the night before, in the middle of some ocean. The machine guns she forcefully took from the security guard were still there. The food she took was still there as well. But where the hell were they? She guessed that they were probably in the Pacific Ocean. All alone. The thought scared her. The food and water she got would probably only last 2 days. What were they going to do?

Marina woke up, and Annie talked to her.

"Do you think anyone will help us? Do you think Natasha would tell the Coast Guards to look for us?" Annie asked.

"Of course she will. The Coast Guard's probably looking for us right now. We'll just have to wait."

An entire day passed, and no one came to save them.

"The water's calm." Said Marina, staring down at the water. "It's beautiful" she said, admiring the water, and beautiful view around them.

"It is indeed" replied Annie, joining Marina in watching the water.

Moments passed when Marina spotted a boat coming to them.

"Annie! There's a boat!" she cried. Pointing at the boat, which looked more like an old fashioned ship.

"Help!" the two girls cried, waving their hands, trying to get the attention of the people in the boat. When the two were screaming, and waving their hands, the boat tipped to the side, and the two girls fall into the water.

"My hat!" cried Marina, who loved her hat very much.

"The hell with the hat!" cried Annie, "we're about to be saved!"

When the ship was quite near them, two guys jumped in.

Marina saw the most beautiful man in the world, swimming towards her. He took her in her arms.

"Hello gorgeous!" she greeted him. "This is definitely the best dream ever" she thought to herself. "Weird though. Annie's here and this god are rescuing me, but still, it's the best!"

"Hello yourself" he said, as if he were unfamiliar with Marina's manner of talking.

"It's alright. You're safe now. Grab on to me." the man said. Marina wrapped her arms around the man's neck, as he took her up the boat.

"Okay," she thought. "Maybe it isn't a dream…"

Annie saw someone swimming towards her. She was so tired, she could no longer swim.

"Hold on to me!" he said. She tried her best to swim, using the very last of her energy. She noticed how handsome the boy was. He was really handsome, come to think of it. So rare would you meet someone like him. Annie found him really attractive, and when that happened to Annie, she could only laugh. She couldn't do anything but laugh at the situation. Annie has always had a weird laugh. People found it funny when she laughed. She just couldn't stop laughing at this crazy dream. Or so she thought it was a dream.

The boy brought her onboard, and Marina was already there.

Marina saw the other boy bring Annie up. She was laughing like crazy, and Marina knew why. Annie always laughed like that when she saw someone as handsome as the boy who just saved her.

"What's wrong with her?" the boy asked worriedly.

"I think she's chocking, or having an asthma attack!" Marina replied. "You should do CPR on her" cried Marina, kneeling beside Annie, looking worried.

"But...Why is she smiling?" asked the boy who now seemed confused.

"The sides of her lips go up when she has an asthma attack. I guess it's the same when she chokes" Marina said sounding very convincing.

"What's CPR?" he asked

"Just put your mouth on hers, and blow!" she said as if Annie's like depended on it.

"Her life depends on it!" she said, her eyes filling with tears. "Damn." She thought. "I'm a good actress"

Marina stood up, and came closer to the older boy. The boy did as we was told, and when his mouth touched Annie's, her eyes enlarged so big, that Marina thought they were about to explode. After about three seconds, Annie fainted.

A crew member handed the man who saved Marina a fresh clean shirt, and he was going to change into dry clothes. Marina looked at Annie, sound asleep on the ground. "Oh my" she said, worrying about her friend. She turned to see the man, and he has removed his shirt, and was about to put on a new one. "Oh my." She said softly, the moment she laid eyes on him, sounding as if she has tasted the most delicious chocolate in the world. Right after the words left her mouth she fainted, and fell to the ground beside Annie.


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