The Effects of Shinji's Death

Author's notes: I don't Hate Shinji... I just wish he had believed in himself because if he believes in himself, he will get not one, but three girls!

This part will tell about Max's past. He doesn't go into details because he want to forget of being trick like a


I just never understood why I left. I just remembered that where I lived, people depended on me to be someone I wasn't.

I took a train, because it was cheaper than taking an airplane. The train was full when I entered. I took a nap, knowing that I wanted to start a fresh new start.

Let me tell you my past, as directly as possible:


I was a hero.

I helped every one, and I didn't wanted anything in return.

people respected me of that decicion, however, they always gave me something: money, swords, guns,bullets, bow & arrows, glasses for my eyes, laser, iguana, geckoes, musical instuments, lessons to play music, and xxx comics

I was so happy for helping other people, but I always wonder why people gave me stuff.

It turns out that they didn't respected me at all. they were afraid of me, and they gave me stuff to not kill them.

I was shocked.

Then, I got kidnapped.

I wanted to get out there.

The people who kidnepped me were ninjas.

They thought that I was someone the person who taught their leader, Naruto Uzumaki.

They said Naruto died, and blames Sauske and Sakura for letting him die.

I said no.

Then they said that since I knew their secret, they would kill me, or learn their secrets.

I prefer to learn their ways.

Their ways is to make their enemies crazy, by sex, or do complicated things.

It took me a year to surpass everyone, even the teachers!

They knew that I would pass their expectation.

I was going to get a promotion, until there were other ninjas attacking the dojo.

The dojo was saved, but I got kiddnapped, again.

Their leader was Saske Uchiha.

Again, I got confused from the teacher.

same option: same asnwer

They taught me how to be invisible, and use killer magic.

In one year, I surpass everyone, even the leader.

I was going to get promotion, until another attack.

Their Dojo was almost destroyed, and I got kidnapped, again

I got confused by the leader who taught Sakura, only this time, Sakura was the one who talked to me.

Again, same option, and the same answer.

This one is the twist: this time I had to pleasure Sakura ( She is Stunning as she is evil. I always wonder if the leader and Sakura had any feelings for each other.)

They taught me to control my powers better

And again, I passed everyone, except to Sakura.

Then, there were another giant fight: This one every dojo attacked the dojo I am in.

I got so angry that I killed everyone with one blow, using a killer technique, in which I called it Silent Slashes of Doom, because the slashes killed everone, and showed no mark that people died.

I left the place


Now we got to this point.

What was I doing when you were listening my summary?

I fell asleep, because I didn't slept for three days


When I woke up, the train was empty. I looked around the area I was. It was empty.

I checked the whole train for someone. I even checked if there was a conductor, but I forgotten that the train was electrical, and there was supposed to be no one driving the train.

When I got back to my seat, I saw someone near me. I was shocked because I just checked the train, and no one was here!

"Hello, what is your name?" I said, asking the person's name.

"My name is Shinji Ikari" He said, being very timid, "What is your name?"

"My name is Max." I said, "Where are you going?"

" I am going to see my family," He said, " What is the point of going to see them, if the only living parent is your father?"

"How did your mom died?" I asked, wanting to know more

"I don't even remembered." Shinji said, almost wanting to cry.

"Does your father cares about you?" I asked, trying to make him feel better.

"No," he said, "He doesn't care about me. He left me with my aunt and uncle. They didn't took me any pictures of me, nor talked to my father, only a few days ago. I bet he wouldn't recognize me. I bet he would think you are his son."

"Oh," I said, "Is he going to pick you up?"

"No," He said, "One of his workers is going to pick me up. I got her picture."

When he showed me the picture, it was a picture of a woman, bending down on her knees, showing her clevelege.

I thought he was showing his dirty picture, but it turns out that the woman is actually will pick him up.

"Does she knows you?" I asked.

"Nope, she just mailed it to me, and believes that I would be the right person."

I started to plan to take away his place, and make it mine.

"Where's your next's stop?" I asked.

"It will come in one minute." He said, "Why?"

"I was planning to make a fresh new start, that's why." I responded

"I wish I could do that." He said, being sad.

"Sometimes it is better to be in someone else's place." I said

Then the train stopped

"So bye Max," He said almost walking out the door.

I was lucky because nobody was around to see I was about to do.

I got near Shinji, grabbed his picture, and punched him. I put him back to a seat.

As I left, I said "In this case, I will become Shinji Ikari, until you want it back. I promise"

After I left the train, the train was destroyed by a giant monster! I was shocked because I wanted to start a new life, while the real Shinji died, never knowing if he was going to be a happy new life, or a miserable one. The only thing on my mind was this: Shinji, I promise that I will make your life better, and I hope that you won't be angry that I took your identity.


Author's notes: I will try to update this story as much as possible, at least one per month.