Hey, this is my first pokemon fanfiction. I would like to hear ANYTHING that I did wrong. go into the DEEPEST detail you can please because I want to get better and I only can if I know what I need to fix.

I know it is kind of short. I apologize. I made this as long as I could without starting the planned second chapter here.

Disclaimer; I do not own pokemon.

Chapter one.

Bump in the night.

An Espeon slept Quietly in the hollow of a tree. The night was warm. Volbeat and Illumise flew quietly through the air as the Volbeat tried to attract their mates. The Espeon slept soundly as dreams of berries and friends flew through her mind.

A sudden twitch awoke her. She opened her brown eyes. He's here. She thought in terror. Her future sight had warned her later than usual. It was too late to flee. Lifting herself to her feet she looked around desperately for a exit other than the one she had come in through. Her head swung around as a twig snapped and red eyes appeared from the darkness.

A evil laugh reverberated around the small clear. Espeons fear coiled in her chest. She had no exit. The umbreon slowly approached. "There you are." He said in a sinister voice.

Espeon was shaking. "Why don't you leave me alone?" She whispered. Her purple fur was bristling as much as it seemed possible.

Umbreon let out a chuckle. "Because I won't stop until my prey is dead." He hissed. "Dark pulse!" A pulse of pure darkness shot towards Espeon. She screamed.

Espeon was thrown back and the tree fell over. Now, the tree was like a log with only one exit. Espeon leaped to her feet. She was in so much pain. The dark attack had wounded her chest. She spun around and dashed deeper into the tree trunk. Darkness enveloped her.

Umbreon let out another chuckle. "You chose to hide in the darkness? You are an idiot, Espeon!" He hissed and raced into the tree after her.

Espeon could see his Crimson red eyes as they approached. She held back a scream and found a hole in the side of the trunk. She slipped through it and became stuck.

Espeon struggled to go either way, but was unable to budge. Muffled words reached espeons ears, "Stuck? I'll help you." Umbreon said. "Dark pulse!"

Espeon was hit. The bark around her broke immediately and she was thrown at least twenty feet away. She landed with a soft "Thump!" and was still for a moment.

Espeon forced herself to her paws. She looked at the Umbreon who was strolling towards her as if this was easy. "Confuse ray!" Espeon screeched and a colorful beam shot towards the Umbreon.

Umbreon, hit, stumbled around. His eyes were unfocused as he searched for his opponent. While she had the chance Espeon fled.

Espeon ran as fast as she could. Her wounds fatigued her. She stumbled and tripped but kept getting back to her paws and running. Her chest and rear hurt from the dark pulses.

The light of the morning sun began to leak from the horizon. Tired, Espeon slowed down. She searched for a place to rest. By now she should have lost him. She usually does after running that long.

She found an oak tree with large roots that stuck out of the ground. She dug an area big enough for her to lay under a root and curled up for some sleep.

Espeon opened her eyes. The sun was high in the sky. She knew she had slept until noon. She rose to her paws and squeezed out from under the oak roots. She glanced around quickly and found that Umbreon wasn't around.

A sigh of relief escaped her lips. She looked up at the sky and basked in the sunlight for a few minutes, then she started her usual daily chores.

First on the list; Food.

Espeon padded through the forest. She came upon a small plant with ripe, blue oran berries. Espeon licked her lips and lifted herself onto her back legs.

She plucked a berry and sat down to eat. She ate a few more. When she was satisfied she went for a walk through the forest.