Prince Charming V.S Prince Valour

The mission

The two young prince had grown up side by side, after all they were twin brothers. Both were slightly pig headed, and over the top. Where Charming's looks were light, blonde hair, fair skin, blue eyes, Valour's were dark. It was coming up to their twentieth birthday this year, the age of wooing a young princess.

" I will climb up to the highest tower, with no door and kiss the sleeping princess." Declared Charming.

Valour snorted. " I will fight a dragon and rescue the fair maiden."

In the corner, their young advisor rolled his hazel eyes muttering. "Like that hasn't been done before. They can't even have an original thought."

The king unlike the young princes had caught the advisor's loose tongue. The king grinned wickedly.

" Yes I know just the Princess. Boys there will be a competition, who can get to her first and I want Kirk to go with you pair, as my eyes."

The young and some what foolish advisor looked at the King horrified. How could the King expect him to put up with such bumbling idiots. He wasn't cut out for adventures. He for the first time in his life wished he had bit his tongue.

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Jill rolled back her sleeves listening to the men laugh at the humorousness of the kings sons. They had started out on a great grand mission. Jill saw this as the opportunity she had been waiting for. Jill wasn't a pretty girl, her dull brown hair was cut off to above her shoulders, on her left cheek mark, a hideous scar of her battles. She wasn't at all, easy on the eyes. She may have had the basic womanly features but a woman she was not. She had lived one of those lives, that remain unknown to the villages around her. She had grown up fast, she had grown up strong. She was wild almost, untamed.

Jill had goals in life. She wanted a life of a soldier, of a warrior. She had been through enough to add least own that title. But as was the day and time, she was denied what she wanted, because when it came down to it, she was still a she, a girl.

She moved stealthily behind the two young princes and a lanky odd looking man. She eyed them up. Prince Charming stood there with his smile that melted females heart everywhere, while next to him stood Valour, the dark brooding Prince the girl wanted desperately, to be the one, that made him smile. Stupid really, that's what attracted them in the first place, why would you change the characteristics you liked the best? Jill wasn't the kind of girl who was going to fall madly in love and pop out a few children, she wasn't interested in that kind of life. No she wanted the open road, the air, freedom and fighting. Yes she loved a good scuffle. So as she followed the three men she hoped for something more for her life.

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My first fairytale story. I don't know how this is ever going to match up to some of the brilliant writers that are in the section. I don't know where I am really going with this, I knew as I wrote the first two lines then suddenly I wrote Jill and now I have to add her into my plots. Shakes her head, what the hell was I thinking… oh any ideas welcome!!! I always know the ending and the start but the middle stumps me at times, so if you want something ask and I'll add it (if it's reasonable). NF