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This is the section of a story I started some time back. It was written on the spur of a moment.
Warning: It is based on girlxgirl love. But nothing extreme goes on. Don't worry about that. And don't bash the story just because you hate the theme.
This will be one of the stories that will be "polled".
She ran to me with tears running down her face. Her breath was hot on my neck, mixed with the wetness of her tears; I shuddered from the chill. She was pressed against my body, her head buried against my shoulder. She mumbled something, but I couldn't hear what. I slipped my arms around her waist, pressing her against me and she lifted her head slightly and said, "I left him. I finally did it."
Despite the fact that I wanted to smile and dance, I closed my eyes and sighed. She laid her head back on my shoulder and sniffled, the tears dying down slowly. We stood there together, holding on to the new found realization and each other. She soon stepped back and I let her though I wanted to stay that way forever. She took my hand and stared at me with those gorgeous eyes. She smiled that perfect smile.
"I love you." She whispered.
"Are you sure?"
"More than anything." Was her reply.
"I love you too."
Then she leaned forward slightly and kissed me.
Alright. It still needs work. It is merely a rough draft, but let me know what you thought. Don't forget to vote!
