Be Careful What You Wish For
Hey there! This is my first Spirited Away Fanfic and I'd just like to say that this is just an idea that shot at me while I was eating breakfast. So they were right... Breakfast is the most important meal.
Anyways! So if you don't like it review, maybe I could change it a bit.
It's been 12 years since Kohaku had promised Chihiro that they'd meet again. But... Chihiro is married... That's right, got married! But, Chihiro can't forget Kohaku, does she still love him? One night she wishes to see her beloved Dragon again. Soon she is spirited away again, but things are different from what she imagained. Kohaku a is a complete weirdo?! No face killed Granny?! Lin is rich and owner of the bath house?! What's going on? What happened to the Spirit World? Where is her Kohaku?!
Chapter 1- Fallen Star, Fallen Love
It was an usual evening, an indigo sky with long feathery clouds with a dash of pink. Chihiro sat in her chair on the front porch. She was enjoying the magnificent landscape before her like an old granny. Blanket wrapped around her shoulder and a mug of coffee in her hand, she let out a content sigh. Her husband, Hoku sat in the chair beside her. The two wordlessly sat admiring the evening.
Chihiro was at the peak of her satisfaction, yet also at the peak of her grief. It had been 12 years since Kohaku had promised her they'd meet again someday yet none of those days had Kohaku came to see her. In those 12 unbearable years she had met a man, who had a resemblence to Kohaku, his name was even similar to Kohaku's. Out of herself pity and desperation she had fallen in love with the man who had always been there to lend a shoulder when she cried. But mostly because Hoku was so similar to Kohaku. She knew she loved her husband but secretly she hadn't been able to forget Kohaku either.
Night had fallen eventually and there were stars that lit the sky. In her night gown Chihiro stood stiffly on her bedroom blacony. She never resisted the wind, her long brown hair lifted in by the wind. Another secret of hers was that she never resisted the wind because she had always hoped the wind would carry her to the Spirit World. She had tried to reassure herself that that was complete childish nonsense but she never lost hope.
Much to her suprise a large star started to twinkle violently before swiftly jumped out of the sky.
Quick! She thought.
She closed her eyes and said a quick wish.
When she opened an eye the star was out of her sight.
Chihiro sighed again. She had been doing a lot of sighing the past 12 years.
Damn you Kohaku, disapointing me everyday, every hour, every second.
It was true, every time she would see a flicker of hope her Kohaku would meet her again her heart would speed up tremendously, only to be disapointed over and over again and ending up in tears.
But this time she wouldn't let herself cry and this time... She let out a pained sigh. This time would be the last time she would be disapointed. Because she gave up all hope on him.
I give up on you Kohaku!
Ok whewww! Thanks so much if you read this! If you have than please please please leave a review! I'm sorry but I'll be using Kohaku instead of Haku because you guys might think there is just a spelling error. Sorry that Hoku and Haku are so similar, couldn't come up with anything else!
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It'll get better I promise.
