a/n:This was my first ever BDSM story. I don't claim to be an expert, but I like to think that I ask questions and get informed. That said, please forgive any poetic license. This isn't meant to be a how-to.

Big thanks to my PF Zigster (who was WAY out of her comfort zone with this) and rmhale for doing the beta work. Any mistakes still here are all mine. And another big thanks to naelany for her help with the title.

This story isn't meant to be a plotted out multi-chapter. I originally wrote it based on prompts from a random word generator, and then took my boys out a couple of times to play with them again. Who knows what the future will hold.

"That's it. Take it all. Take it . . . take it . . ." I pull back before he chokes, not moved by the tears on his pale face. Leaning down, I whisper in his ear . . ." "You will learn to [...] properly, and you will have no [...] until you do. Do you understand me?"

"Y-yes, Sir," he stutters out, tears shining in his green eyes.

"Now [...]."

Sliding back [...], I coax him to [...], training him to [...]. I don't often take on such [...], particularly ones who've never [...], but this one is special. Not only is he unaccountably beautiful, with his sea green eyes and full, red lips—[...]—but his entire demeanor just begs for [...].

He [...] once more, so I [...] again, letting my disappointment shine through. I [...] and say, "Perhaps you need more incentive. [...] You will count out loud, do you understand?"

"Yes, Sir."

I [...].

"ONE!" he shouts out.

By the time he reaches twenty, the tears are streaming down his face again.

[...]

***************NOTE**************

SORRY FOLKS, A VERY SAD, SMALL MINDED PERSON, WITH WHAT APPEARS TO BE A VERY EMPTY AND BORING LIFE, HAS TAKEN IT UPON THEMSELVES TO GO AFTER ALL STORIES THAT THEY BELIEVE ARE INAPPROPRIATE FOR THIS SITE AND REPORT THEM SO THAT THEY WILL BE TAKEN DOWN.

TENDERED SUBMISSION WILL REMAIN HERE ON FFN. I WILL BE EDITING THE CHAPTERS, SO AS NOT TO BE OFFENDING THE THOUGHT POLICE, AND BECAUSE I DO NOT WISH FOR ALL THE LOVELY WORDS OF ENCOURAGEMENT THAT HAVE BEEN OFFERED HERE OVER THE YEARS TO BE DELETED BECAUSE THE OWNERS OF THE SITE REMOVE EVERYTHING WHOLESALE, WITHOUT CHECKING ANYTHING OR WARNING TO THE AUTHORS. AFTER THE CUT THERE WILL BE ELLIPSES ... WHICH INDICATES THE REST OF THE CHAPTER HAS BEEN [EDITED] OUT, BECAUSE AS THE RIDICULOUSNESS ABOVE DEMONSTRATES, I'M NOT GOING TO TRY AND GUESS WHAT OFFENDS THESE NINNIES ON ANY GIVEN DAY.

HOWEVER, ALL MY STORIES WILL REMAIN IN THEIR FULL UNCENSORED FORM AT ARCHIVE OF OUR OWN. SEE MY PROFILE FOR MORE INFORMATION.