My First Fanfic please be nice! Lol
This is a completely random Pikmin Story!
Swoosh! A rocket speeds through the atmosphere of a small planet. Onboard, there are flashing warning lights and frantic movements of 2 little men. They are screaming, whilst trying to stop themselves from crashing. Suddenly, the ship slows to a steady pace and the little men have no choice, but to land on the planet. Little do they realise what's about to happen to them…
The rocket lands and the little men come outside dressed in tuxedos and space helmets. They see some strange plants wafting in the cool breeze. Suddenly, a flash of movement catches the taller man's eyes. He nudges his friend and points to where it was. They both pull out Revolvers. Slowly, they walk towards a rustling bush. The smaller, fatter man peers inside the bush only to find a cowering, green thing with a flower on an antenna on its head. It shivers and jumps out of the bush, seemingly defying the two men. It stares at them and cocks its head. The taller man reaches out to stroke it, but just as he does, another plant thing comes out of the bushes, but this one's orange! It quickly launches a small fireball in the spacemen's direction, but misses. It grabs the green youngster and tries to pull it to safety, but the green plant thing only stares at the two men. The orange one has no choice, but to stand by and watch as the green one gets scanned by the space ship. The men are amazed as the spaceship informs them that the monsters are 'Pikmin'.
Later that day, the orange Pikmin disappears, but an hour later returns with a whole tribe of Pikmin of all shapes and sizes. A cry of 'PIK! PIK! PIK!' penetrates the spaceship's walls. The men go outside and see the magnificent tribe amassed before them! They walk through the middle of the crowd, whilst being stared at by most of the Pikmin, but worshipped by some… A red Pikmin jumps out of the crowd and starts threatening the smaller man. The taller man's right arm shoots out and grabs the Pikmin's stem and launches him as far as he can! All the other Pikmin clamour and beg to be thrown, while the two men smirk at each other and both think, 'This is my sort of planet.'
And thus, the upper-class sport of Pikmin Tossing was born!!
Please can you RER, so I know what to do to improve! Thanks!