basically this is a poem I wrote in English. If you want to, you can review, but sice this is a one-shot and there isn't (at the moment - if I'm pestered enough, I might write one poem for each Twilight story) any more peoms, you don't have to. Enjoy!
P.S. This was written by Ally.
Bella Swan from Arizona
Arrives Back in her Home town
Wears a lacy shirt and jeans and
On her face she wears a frown
First day at school is such a bore
Thinks she has such plain features
Then at lunch she sees five great thing
Sees five beautiful creatures
Next lesson is biology
Where she meets the cutest guy
His eyes are black, demeanor dark
And he makes her feel shy
The next day she returns to school
At the table, she sees four
Goes to lesson, hopes to see him
Hopes die as she walks through the door
A week passes, she's back at school
By now she's used to her space
In biology she's startled
'Cos she sees his gorgeous face
Blood-testing in biology
Is not really a good idea
When Bella Swan is in that class
And she is just full of fear
An icy day; she's back at school
But a car skids into her
A hospital, for those who're queasy
Isn't what she would prefer
Edward saved her, you would have thought
That she would be so thankful
But instead, they're not talking 'cos
They're both resisting the pull
Port Angeles - a girls' night out
She's there with her friend Angela
In an alley, Edward saves her
His features are so angular
Some of the things that alerts her:
His speed, strength, and beauty, too
Reveals the truth of what she thinks
A vampire - a good one, though
Edward is a gentleman
Unlike Mike, Tyler, and Eric
All want her for the girls' choice ball
And she thinks that they are thick
She has Edward - who could want more?
Because Edward, he is perfect
Granite skin and topaz eyes
He's perfect - he has no defects
Now the two are at The Meadow
A pretty sight for all to see
The 'Lamb' and The 'Lion' are there
'Lamb' doesn't feel the need to flee
Next day she visits Edward's house
She's warmly greeted by all there
Emmett and Rose have vanished
And Bella, she tries not to care
Later on, she's there to watch
The Cullens playing baseball
But, scarily, the Nomads come
Yet Bella's there to fall
They're running now - James wants Bella
Her blood smells so divine
His thoughts are on a path like this:
"I want her blood to be mine!"
Alice and Jasper take Bella
To Phoenix - back to her old home
She gets a phone call from The Hunter
And she is to go and roam
She's now at the ballet studio
James is there- he wants her blood
Bella tries to cling to life
She tried as hard as she could
And now she's back in hospital
She survived - though only just
She'll get better eventually
Taking it easy is a must!
A special occasion - the school prom
Bella does not want to go
Then Jacob Black arrives and he
Delivers the final blow
But then she forgets it all
Edward dances with Bella
In her heart she know she has found
Her soul mate - her special fella
And so, I wish, the couple lived
So that neither are gone
I wish they could go on forever
But the story, it goes on…
My English gave me a 7c for this (I don't know what that is in America, but the highest level you should be able to get in year 8 [12-13 year olds] s 6a) so I would like to know what you guys think of this.