My first short story on here, well first story ever I wrote this in 30 minutes and yeah it's a little crappy.
I have grammar issues so if you want to correct me please correct me.
I would greatly appreciate constructive criticism.
I own nothing but the plot.
ps i loce Peeto or Potato and this is a one shot.
Oh my God, how did I, how could I. As his lifeless body lays in front of me blade in logged his throat, how could I? What do I do, where do I go. I guess no turning back right? so I ran out side to my beaten down truck, I start to drive away. As I drove away a flash back comes to me a happy memory, when I first met Cato Barker his beautiful blue eyes piercing me asking me question after question and giving me drink after drink, I remember meeting him and how he really didn't want anything serious just a one night fling so he through shot after shot after shot increasing my hormones; that night we fucked in the bathroom and cuddled with his jacket in our hour long session he made me feel loved like someone truly cared but now it's to late to turn back. I have to leave the city, the state, maybe even the country. I just couldn't believe what came to me he wasn't mine to start with he had every right to distance himself and end up with anyone he wanted. We never had nothing until that night; after that I just stalked him, watched him, anything just to see he was okay we never socialized after that day, but seeing him there in the hands of that blond bitch enraged me so I snuck in to his house planning to kill the bitch but by the time I got in she was long gone & Cato had spotted me I panicked & threw my knife at his throat, it just happened so quick. How can I live with myself, how? I never thought I would be here fleeing, running away. I am a criminal now I just gotta go, leave. I just can't bare to see all this as bad as I see the last of the city I grew up and was raised I look around then hear a sudden bang then I feel a sudden sharp pain in my head, and My world goes black, and that is how I, Peeta Mellark had left the world.
I know pretty crappy ._.
but I want to better myself as a writer and I want help.
so help me. :)
